| "Silence of the Monkeys" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: rychefan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2013 00:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great update i like that bulma is a bit tougher can't wait for more |
Reviewed By: rychefan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2012 03:43 EST
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as always a great chapter can't wait for more to come....welcome back |
Reviewed By: fazkataz [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2012 22:07 EST
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Welcome back! It's always exciting to read a new silence of the monkeys chapter. Looking forward to more chapters. |
Title: Great!
Reviewed By: LavonyaVegeta lover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2012 17:39 EST
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i thought you said this was suposed to be scary!! Ohhhh....well......I loved it though! |
Reviewed By: utsukushi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2009 14:38 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
The overall concept of this story is good. I think that you capture Bulma quite well. However, I'd recommend a beta reader because you have quite a few grammatical errors in specific subject verb agreement and lack of punctuation. There also seem to be times in the dialogue when the don't seem to fully complete sentences/thoughts. Right now I think this is a good fic, but these things keep this from being a GREAT fic.
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Reviewed By: Ravenreux [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 01:40 EST
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I enjoy reading this fic so much..it's excellent! I really like that you each character their chance for the spotlight...it's very well-rounded. The suspense is artfully written..and killer I might add. I luv it...update soon! ^_^
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Title: great
Reviewed By: vegetaslover3 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2007 16:38 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are going to make more right? Because i LOVE it. you really have vegetas bad side down.
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Reviewed By: Ravenreux [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 23:27 EST
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Another great chapter exploring the human- or Saiyan ^_^- thought process. I loved it! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 06:06 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent update, this story is very unique for a B/V story
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 08:20 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good story, please keep updating, you have a great style of writing, i just love B/V a/u's great stuff
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Title: me likey
Reviewed By: Ravenreux [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 01:54 EST
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I love this story! I really enjoy DBZ/AU and this one is an interesting twist of one of my favorite movies/books. I can't wait to read more, so please update soon!
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Reviewed By: artchic [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 23:15 EST
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This is a very different twist on the B/V relationship. It's interestingly done and keeps you wanting to come back and read more. Great story!
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Title: well done
Reviewed By: vegetaslover1 On: October 19, 2006 14:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a very well done fic plz continue u need to write more!!!!!!!!!
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Title: WRITE MORE!!!
Reviewed By: VegetaLover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 20:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more i love the story but write more often it took u half a year just to write 1 chapter?
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Title: WRITE MORE!!!!
Reviewed By: VegetaLover1 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2006 20:07 EDT
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please write more i love the story but write more often it took u half a year just to write 1 chapter?
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