| "Sacrifice" Reviews/Comments [ 53 ] |
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Reviewed By: QuestionableIntentions [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 02:48 CDT
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oh!! i love this little story!! :) you did such a good job writing it! xD and let me tell you, that lemon you wrote got me heated up a bit...:P the dialogue was HOT! i know it wasn't that descriptive, and didn't go all the way..but the dialogue....nice job! can't wait to see what you do with a full length lemon! xD and you had me tearing up more than a few times as i was reading! i absolute adore this! please please continue and write more! xD
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Title: keyword...
Reviewed By: mimiy14 On: September 23, 2005 19:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u know.. i cant wiat for more.... please update... i cant belive grandpa huragishi! how rude! ... i want kags to be... well i dont know... ill shh... *looks around franticly and hides behind boyfriend*shhhh!.....
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Reviewed By: gb On: September 22, 2005 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
again w/ the crying. hehe =) wow that was really harsh! i wonder though is it because her grandpa is always trying to purify inuyasha, that he threw her out?.. you know had her mom been thier would her mom let that happen? =) great chapter!!
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Reviewed By: Mr. Chaos On: September 22, 2005 08:56 CDT
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*slaps a new sign over a booth in the village selling farm tools* Get your angry mob supplies! Inuyasha better beat the shit out of the old man, followed by Sess and then Toga, then Sango, then Miroku, followed by all of us getting a wack.
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185(not logged in) On: September 21, 2005 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*steam comes out of ears* I want to to kick 'Grampa' in the nuts!!!!!!
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Title: pass the tissue please
Reviewed By: vbollman/Dragonlass On: September 21, 2005 17:05 CDT
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I WAS doing fine. right up to the last part. and then i started to cry again. thanks for that:) I was just wondering though what Kagome's grandfather is going to tell the rest of her family, if anything at all. and then there is of course Inuyasha's responce to what happened. It's understandable the reactions of those who returned to the living, not being able to stay with those they knew and loved, or to join with the humans that are part of the village. Shippo's Father has I belive the hardest part. excepting the fact that his son now has new parents, and exactly how to deal with that. I hope that with time (but not to much of it) he will also start being another father figure to shippo, and at least teach him what he needs to know in order to gain the full strength of his powers. thanks for another great chapter. luvs ya. And thank you for adding me to your site once again....even more tears on that one:)
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Reviewed By: Ballofflame On: September 19, 2005 23:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Several things have stood out about this story that have promted me to review. The first is that the idea behind this story-where Kagome loses her memory after making her wish-while not oringinal,is handled in an oringinal way, and I applaud you for that. I can't think of another story that has Kagome lose her memory because of the wish while still in the past, and I do like seeing her reactions. That said, I do feel as though parts of the story have been rushed. One part in particular is how Inuyasha forgives his father and brother for past actions (or, in his father's case, what he thought were past actions)-it felt as though the forgiveness happened way too fast. It also felt as though Kagome remembered too soon as well-I really was looking forward to more angst. I do like how you've written the characters however-if they were real, I can easily see Inuyasha forgiving his brother and father, as well as Kagome remembering why the wish was made when she sees Kikyou. One thing that I'm hoping to see more of is Shippo's father-you introduced him, but since then, he hasn't interacted at all with the rest of the group, while Toga has. It seems as though he's been forgotten, although I could easily see him getting angry at Inuyasha's casual acceptence of Shippo as his 'pup', and trying to gain (or even, to some extent, re-gain) Shippo's respect, as well as feeling as though he has to compete for Shippo's love. I would also like to see how the wish affected Sango and Miroku |
Title: no need for a one-shot
Reviewed By: habby On: September 19, 2005 20:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this to good a start to make it a one-shot. please please please don't stop when its going so well. but then again don't push yourself too much. but still that doesn't mean i'm saying stop. just do your best, ok. PS: i'm really loving this one. i don't think that many people would have come up with this.
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Reviewed By: gb On: September 19, 2005 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok.. so i so now i know.. um you are not done w/ this story are you?.. i hope not. it's so great!!!=)
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Title: bravo!!!
Reviewed By: gb On: September 19, 2005 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow!!!! no fair =(.. so does he want it to be permenent?.. ok.. well i loved it!!! and i will wiat for more promise!!! =)
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Reviewed By: destiny dreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2005 18:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it and I even added you to my favorite story list, and I am very picky with who I choose. I can't wait till the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: vbollman/Dragonlass On: September 19, 2005 08:06 CDT
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i knew that temper would be there somewhere. thank you. great chapter, and a hint of lime. loved it. when is kagome gonna tell about the fights between the brothers or does toga already know about that? luvs ya
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Reviewed By: mimiy14 On: September 18, 2005 20:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cant wait for more!!
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Reviewed By: vbollman/Dragonlass On: September 18, 2005 16:15 CDT
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cool...but i still say that toga should have lost his temper, just a little bit. anyway great chapter, i'm just glad that your updating again, was starting to think you forgot about your stories....lol.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: gb On: September 15, 2005 15:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think thing that i love most of all, from all of your stories is the sance of family. as different from any thing else any one may know, they have all become a family of sorts, and you tell it so very beautifully!!! bravo! =)
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