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Title: Sacrifice
Reviewed By: Bookreader9999 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 15:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy the story. The characterization and the storyline flow well. Always leaves me wanting to read the next chapter.
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Title: bravo!!!
Reviewed By: gb On: November 04, 2005 21:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yippy!!! you are back!!! it's so good to read from you again!!! loved the story!!! i like the love connection between toga and takara!! (great name) but what about sesshoumaru?.. he needs some one!! =)
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Title: Thank you
Reviewed By: vbollman [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2005 18:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Where's the kleenex warning?! That said. thank you. I'm glad that you got this one in. I've missed being able to read your stories. Kikyou has a lot of pain to make up for. I just hope that it won't be to harsh. Are you planning on having Kagome train Rin?
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Reviewed By: Katie *nsi* On: November 04, 2005 15:52 CST
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YAY for updates!!! ^-^ Awesome as usual.
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Title: Kawaii!
Reviewed By: shadowwolf_02 (nsi) On: November 04, 2005 09:29 CST
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did i spell that right? i think i did, but i never know. if i could draw worth a darn that last 'scene' with inu, kags, and kids sleeping is one i'd love to do.....but im not quite that talented. Wonderful chappie, wolfie dear, but you're quite right...its rather short. *cries* but thats ok....the main thing is that you updated...boy shouldnt i take my own advice lol. This is going to get a little weird if toga and kag's mom get together.....i mean, how wacky would that be? but its still a cute idea. cant wait to see where you go with it. one last thing, you seem to be rubbing off on me. lol i started another story (as you have obviously seen) and i havent even come close to finishing the first one! eeeeek! lmao!
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Reviewed By: inufan625 (nsi) On: November 04, 2005 07:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is still very sweet and I was so excited to see you had updated again. I can't wait for more.
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Title: VERY GOOD!
Reviewed By: inuyashagirl222 On: November 01, 2005 19:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was interesting and it kept ur attention to it so it was fun to read and u always wanted to read more, i hope that u write more chapters for this unless it's already finshed, i wasn't really paying attention to that part since it was soooooooooo interesting! hope u write more fanfics like this! thank-u for ur time!
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Reviewed By: DragonChic [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2005 02:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man this story is sweeet you have to update soon can't wait till next chapter
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Title: not about the story
Reviewed By: roanae On: October 12, 2005 21:04 CDT
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do you know what happened to the A Single Spark site because now i can't get on it and don't know why and its driving me crazy. please email me back-bapfeb27@msn.com
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Reviewed By: vbollman [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 16:27 CDT
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Actually i meant do Toga and mrs H know about sess trying to kill kagome, and how they will both take this information. i can actually see mrs. H. facing down the great lord sesshoumaru for daring to hurt her little girl. it would be a great scene. lol luvs ya
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Reviewed By: INUKAGLOVER, On: October 11, 2005 12:22 CDT
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OOOOOHHH!!! I'm sensing a Toga/Kagome's mother relationship emerging!! I've only seen one of those before and loved every inch of it!! Anywho, just a thought!! Anyways, LOVE your story! Can't wait for the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: gb On: October 10, 2005 23:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay!!!!! kagome gets to see her momma!!! i'm so glad. i was so sad about that.. maybe toga and her mom could get married and then they will be a family.. and them souta would have two brothers i know it's your story.. but i am just thinging out loud.. =).. i love what ever you write!! =)
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Reviewed By: vbollman(not signed in) On: October 09, 2005 22:04 CDT
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awwww. Are kagome's family gonna be staying on with her now??? And what's gonna happen to her grandfather. Does her mother know what sess has done to kagome, and how is she gonna feel about facing him with this knowledge. better yet what will toga do when he finds out? i know read to find out.
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Reviewed By: Ballofflame On: October 09, 2005 21:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wolf-I've got to say, these last two chapters have been *amazing*! I've read some great insight from the characters-like Koga consouling Shippo when his real dad left, and his dad's compassion and happiness for Shippo's sake. Not to mention Inuyasha's un-surprise of GPA H's treatment of Kagome, as well as why he thought GPA H. did that. Although, I can't wait to see Souta and Kohaku interact; something tells me that those two would get along better than most would suspect. And I certinly hope that Toga gets to know exactly how tense interaction with Sess. and Inuyasha can be, as well as how much Inuyasha relies on Sango, Miroku, and Koga, seeing as how Toga already realizes how much his son relies on Kagome. PS-This doesn't really belong here, but I had to say it: I'm glad I was able to make you think of questions you didn't ask. You certinaly didn't have to dedicate a chapter to me, but thank you anyway.
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Title: Review
Reviewed By: Bree01 On: October 09, 2005 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved what you have done with this fic. It's amazing all these incredible detail you've added to the original story line, in a way that makes everything fit. Keep up the good work!
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