| "Welcome to The Age of Un-Innocence" Reviews/Comments [ 71 ] |
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: July 06, 2006 18:45 EDT
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Kikyo is not planning all this by herself. Miroku is right ther is no way Kikyo is smart enough to pull something like this.Kagome's daddy is gong to be so mad and Inuyasha's daddy. Whoever is behind the scenes pulling the strings for Kikyo. Their smart they know that Kagom's father care about the election more than anything and that because of how many secerts Inuyasha is keeping from Kagome. She's confused on if she should believe him on not. BUT doesn't Kagome already knoe about the drugs.
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Reviewed By: silverwolf halfbeast [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 01:33 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah man do I love this story it is the best. But this chapter ,the end of it, man that is messed up. I can't beleave that bitch Kikyo did that to inuyasha and I really want to know what happens next chapter. Well keep up the good work and hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos (nsi) On: July 01, 2006 14:53 EDT
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i've slacked as your minon and ask forgiveness but i did get two great chapters to read at once! brillant! of course kikyou leaves out that if she knows all the drug use and dealings that she would be completely innocent of it all. i have faith in inuyasha and kagome. through all the shit they've only had each other and i think once she gets time to think without the mass of press there she's going to listen to him...only if he tells her everything though! i can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 23:32 EDT
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Damn please update soon I have to see what will happen next
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Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 22:09 EDT
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Yea I love it I hope you update soon can't wait to see waht happens
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Reviewed By: mepinak [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 21:13 EDT
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i just looove this story!! update soon, please?
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Reviewed By: star555555528(not signed in) On: April 10, 2006 02:41 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story. it has a great plot. i tottally think that Kagome is starting to think its really & so is inuyasha. i cant wait 2 see wat happens nex. plz update asap.
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Title: @.@
Reviewed By: BlackDiamon (not signed) On: April 09, 2006 21:33 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yikes!! The line is getting blurred!! HAHAHAA!!!!!! lol!! Poor Kagome... She seems so lost and unsure sometimes. And is it just me, or has Inuyasha blurred the line out completely in his head compared to Kagome? What is running through his head? Is this all really just amusment for him? Or is that fine line between reality and acting fading into nothingness? Keep up the great work (though I did spot a few spelling and grammar errors. Mind you I'm not the best person when it comes to english...) and I can't wait till the next chapter!! C-ya! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: April 09, 2006 02:39 EDT
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AAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWW! Their fallin n love even if thEy don't know it. Rin iz hecka funny. Inuyasha sweet in his own way. I would love for him to save me from tea time with a bunch of old stuck up ladies.
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Title: GinaCat
Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 12:43 EDT
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I love it this story is so good I can't wait till you update again yea
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Title: GinaCat
Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 11:29 EDT
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I love it this story is so good I can;t wait till you update again yea
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Reviewed By: DarkMoonStar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 19:52 EDT
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No I didn't like it, I LOVED IT! This chapter was all around GREAT! And I love the interaction between Kagome and Inuyasha. Can't wait for the next chapter, update soon!
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Title: *sigh* how cute
Reviewed By: CresentMoon21 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 18:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very, very good. it's a great story line and i'm glad to see you're working through it. it's seems like it would be slightly challenging to write, but you're doing a great job! i love the fact that her father is a total ass. haha, great work with Inuyasha's character. you're doing a fabulous job! this chapter was awesome, wonderfully done, and i can't wait to read more! ~steph
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Title: I LUV IT
Reviewed By: Inuyasha luvr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2006 21:55 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O MY GOSH I LUV IT!! can't wait till u update!!
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: March 11, 2006 15:19 EST
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Boys and their video games. And they talk about girls and shopping. Atleast when you shopping your moving, getting excerise! Souta is a little protective brother that is so cute. POOOR Rin! Her family is all dead. But now she has a brand new family and soon to be husband.^@^
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