| "Sweet Nothings" Reviews/Comments [ 77 ] |
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Title: Charmed
Reviewed By: forbitten On: October 30, 2008 21:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a charming story! You really brought the characters to life, and the originality of the story only made the story and the characters grow. Thank you for sharing such a lovely and touching tale!
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 20:10 CDT
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Just wantted to let you know that Jin does get his glasses back [or at least in the anime series he does] that's how that guy who wrote the biography about himself [grrr...I don't remember his name] knew Jin was Jin. Though over-all I really do like the story. I think I'm going to add you to my faves too!! =] Keep it Up!!! =D =D =D
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Reviewed By: marukawa On: October 28, 2007 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have so much love for this fic - and your other completed JinFuu fic as well~ *lufflehugz* i cried toward the end. T__T LOVE LOVE LOVE. bittersweet endings are the best. right after the happy ending and the angst ending. (OH THE ANGST!! lol) lots o' luffs for t3h yume! *huggles* now i need to download those songs from which those lyrics were from...and maybe cry s'more. ^^; P.S i think it would be wonderful if you were to write original fiction, y'know, publish them and the like. i used to want to publish my stories but i've gotten really bad at keeping momentum. procrastination, constant writers block...and when i would come up with something, i'd brainstorm everthing i need to go by then never go back to it. *lost in transition* or something. kekeke if you ever feel like talking about stuff to write, books, or just crazy randomness...my email is marukawa at webmail.hctc.net (damn that's long, ne? hahaha)\ mata, waa~
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Reviewed By: marukawa On: October 28, 2007 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have nothing but love for this fic! i cried at the end. T__T now i have to go find those songs...and cry s'more. lol
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Title: ARGH!!
Reviewed By: Inu_RebelBabe07 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 22:35 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was very well written. And matches with the show. Some of the moments were OOC, but no writer besides the creator can create a none OOC story. But I loved it. I read most of it last night until two in the morning. And just completed it now. I always loved them as a couple and you captured their love, although bitter sweet, perfectly. I was so scared about the ending. And I am glad Fuu and Jin had a some time together. I just wish she didnt have to die at all and the paper cranes did work, but then again I am glad you didnt and went with the realistic approach. I thought about the story all day and it hurt my heart, weird huh??, to leave it unfinished and not knowing what was to become of them. I hope you havent recieved any flames from this fanfiction, because you warned them from the beginning and if they didnt like the couple then Tuff shizznite. And I will hunt them down personally and slit their gizzards out. But I am happy to have come across this story and I hope you will write more someday and had more art of Samurai Champloo. (there is hardly any descent or original arts out there, but I am no artist, just a critic.) I am a writer though. And although I am only a couple years younger than you, your writing is far supiour. This story was lovely. ^_^ Thanks for finishing it.
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Reviewed By: Scratches On: March 18, 2007 18:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My goodness this is a story that pulls at your heart strings. I could actually feel the tightness inside when jin did, I cried abit too, well acutally alot. This is one of those rare perfect stories, your a great author! are you going to write a book at some point in time?
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Reviewed By: Yushi_Yami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 02:36 CST
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That was beautiful! I cried at the end of it! T.T I'm such a sucker for those kinds of endings... Wah.
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: KlutzyHanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2006 16:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The fact that I've never seen a Samurai Champloo episode and I loved this story speaks for itself. I would actually like to see the show after reading some of your fanfiction. Great Job!
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Reviewed By: total_liberation [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 06:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an amazing story, so bravo to you and thanks for writing it. I'm somewhat glad that I came along after it was done, because I could hardly stop reading. Your characterization of Jin was amazing, I thought, and damn it, I do love that pairing so. *-* Nice work and good grammar.
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Reviewed By: The Devils Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2006 16:06 CDT
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Reviewed By: The Devils Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2006 16:05 CDT
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Title: OMG OMG OMG
Reviewed By: kayla (15yrs) On: July 05, 2006 12:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
kya kya kya!!!!! this story is sooooooooo good. it made me cry, and i dont usually ever do that. i shared it with my friend and now we are all fans!!!! i cant believ you are like 18-19-20ish. wow. as a published author, i think that if you started writing real books you would proabably be a best seller. and i only found one typo in your story :O wow. thats just f-ing amazing!!! do u write stories for other manga?
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Reviewed By: ichigodl On: May 30, 2006 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
konnichiwa!!!!! OMG. i rlly wanna cry at the end. The story u wrote has intrigued my heart and soul. i feel like i wanna write a poem of samurai champloo for Fuu/Jin. Jesus, i loved the ending. makes me wanna cry"sniff". Jin left alone without Fuu is so sad. If i was a teacher for your assignment, i would give it an A+. The story u wrote has so much eloquence and beauty and sadness that i would have to say, that story was a blast and very romantic. Ishould praise you for writing such a grand story. I jus made up an advice i wanna say for this story: "Its better to live with love rather than dieing without love of a person you care for most!!!!"
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Reviewed By: ichigodl On: May 30, 2006 14:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
konnichiwa!!!!! OMG. i rlly wanna cry at the end. The story u wrote has intrigued my heart and soul. i feel like i wanna write a poem of samurai champloo for Fuu/Jin. Jesus, i loved the ending. makes me wanna cry"sniff". Jin left alone without Fuu is so sad. If i was a teacher for your assignment, i would give it an A+. The story u wrote has so much eloquence and beauty and sadness that i would have to say, that story was a blast and very romantic. Ishould praise you for writing such a grand story. I jus made up an advice i wanna say for this story: "Its better to live with love rather than dieing without love of a person you care for most!!!!"
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Reviewed By: ichigodl On: May 30, 2006 14:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
konnichiwa!!!!! OMG. i rlly wanna cry at the end. The story u wrote has intrigued my heart and soul. i feel like i wanna write a poem of samurai champloo for Fuu/Jin. Jesus, i loved the ending. makes me wanna cry"sniff". Jin left alone without Fuu is so sad. If i was a teacher for your assignment, i would give it an A+. The story u wrote has so much eloquence and beauty and sadness that i would have to say, that story was a blast and very romantic. Ishould praise you for writing such a grand story. I jus made up an advice i wanna say for this story: "Its better to live with love rather than dieing without love of a person you care for most!!!!"
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