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Title: Damnit
Reviewed By: BULAKLAK_PUTI On: November 08, 2005 04:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damnit WHY WHY WHY did you have to make me cry. I loved the chapter about the porcelain dolls I tottaly related to it. The whole damn story is so romantic Jin and Fuu are tottaly in character. Its like a sad fairy tale, please don't kill her. That was all. Love it.
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Title: I'm Lady Morrigan too....in case anyone has been keeping track..which I doubt lol
Reviewed By: Angel the Mercenary On: November 07, 2005 22:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now this is very nice!!!! If I could, I think I would hug you, this is a great one!!! You have expressed emotion elegantly, without making it seem sappy--you have stretched out the story well; and best of all, you have implied lovemaking without cheapening it with too much detail. Tres Bien!!!! You have also kept with the personas of the original characters well--I think that if you ever decided to become an author of mainstrean lit, you would do very well!
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Title: Utsukushii
Reviewed By: nikki the kunoichi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2005 11:28 CST
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*grins* I wanted to read the entire fanfic before I gave you my opinion...and all I can give you is a hail of praise and all my respect. This story is beautiful in its entirety...and its emotion and its sorrow. I really like the storyline, and I hope that you continue it because I love it so much. Ja! P.S. Update Bewitched, onegai...
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Title: T.T
Reviewed By: eViL kAgOmE [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2005 10:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg i love and hate you at the same time. This story is just so sad and so romantic. I swear to god ive cried through almost evry chapter. lol!!! This story is just so freakin great and so far all i can think to say for your latest chapter is wow! It was so heart breaking yet so beautiful. So please before i cant breathe anymore please update soon!!! You my friend are a god send. ^_^
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Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 18:55 CDT
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How in the world do you only have 12 (well, 13 now i guess) reviews? This is one of the most well-written fics i've run across in a loooong time. Your writing style is so lyrical it fits perfectly with the atmosphere i think you're trying to create. But my favorite aspect of your story is how, even with all she's experiencing and has yet go through, there are times where pure, unadultered Fuu shines through. I can't even imagine how hard it must me to write that happy-go-lucky personality into the current situation without it seeming out of place. As for Fuu and Jin finally making a little lemonade, i must say it's about time! But at the same time, any earlier, and i think it would have seemed rushed. So in other words, i think you had perfect timing. The jin-jin filler served to bring them to a point where taking this next step seemed perfectly natural. Kudos! But how will they react in the morining? Knowing jin, he'll be all awkward and try to apologize, and fuu will have to smack some sense into him. Eee! I can't wait! This is making me feel like a highschooler again, just waiting for the next piece of gossip. Keep up the fantastic writing!
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Reviewed By: WhisperingWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2005 10:06 CDT
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Oh this was so beautiful and heart warming. It brought tears to my eyes and I'm not one that's usually all teary eyed. I cannot wait wait for the next chapter. Please continue on and know that someone is always waiting here anxious for the words you write.
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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2005 23:55 CDT
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omg....that was, how shall i describe it. incredibly touching...so much to the point that i darn near cried.. currently thinking about finding the tissues. very very well written. i dont think it was all that hurried, and any oocness is gonna happen anytime you make a character that is stoic and outwardly cold engage in some type of emotional response. i dont think Jin was out of character though....just right. wonderfulness and my romantic side hopes for Jin to get his wish.
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Reviewed By: Nilee [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2005 20:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful story. While Fuu's terminal illness is sad, it is not maudlin. The reader is moved not only by the events but by the unspoken feelings that Jin has for Fuu. I can't wait until he gets the courage and the self-realization to express his love for her.
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Reviewed By: DeJaVooo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2005 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh, it sure took a while for you to post the next chapter, but i don't mind as long as you actually don't forget about the story ^_^ I feel so bad for Fuu, because the cat ran away. I must admit that the cat seems to be so cute! i love cats and have 2 on my own so here you go. Probably it will come back at an unexpected moment, ne? (don't mind my spelling, its late late at night, i just saw that you updated and desided to take a look ^_^) and i have to say it again, i love this story it is so so sad but so wonderful too! Update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: DI Long On: September 06, 2005 06:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am quite enjoying this very original fic! I like the Jin introspection - it is wonderful to see the growth in his charachter as he continues to help and support Fuu. I am looking forward to the next chapter very much!
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Title: Heart Cancer
Reviewed By: Ryoko Yuy (offline) On: September 06, 2005 00:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Having a freat time reading this fanfic so far, but the heart cancer got me to wondering (I'm taking medical classes, so it was a natural sort of curiosity). Looked up over the internet to find what I could on Fuu's affliction and came across very little information. It seems that there isn't really much in the way of cancer in the heart itself, but there can be a type of cancer in the blood vessels. My quick search also showed me that Fuu is either going to have to get chemotherapy, radiation treatment, or else a miracle cure that I'm sure is only known by some fictional, wise pharmacist of this time period in Japan. Good luck if you decide that Fuu-chan does need treatment. ^_~ Lol, or maybe she'll get a jewel shard from Inu Yasha. For the fanfic itself, you're doing an excellent job thusfar, but I'm beginning to wonder if Jin has forgotten his affections for Shino now that he's worried about Fuu so much. ^_^ I sorta hope so, cause the poor girl deserves him! But if something does happen to Fuu, perhaps Jin will use his newfound compassion for Shino? ^_~ Ah well, whatever happens, I'm sure that it will be for the best. Good luck on future chapters, I'll be reading! ^_^
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Reviewed By: DeJaVooo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 19:13 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, i love this story, I was crying through this chapter (chapters 4 and 5) I hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: Darkflameangel(not logged in) On: September 02, 2005 22:56 CDT
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OMG....you so about had me in tears this chapter. I guess it hits a little close to home for me. a happy ending would be nice, ne? this story rocks(even if it is slightly depressing(but its soo sweet...loving the fluff...hopeless romantic:S)). keep up the kicking good work and update soon!!! Darkflameangel
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Reviewed By: Sky Maiden On: August 28, 2005 15:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay first of I want to tell you that this is an amazing story. Its sad but I love it. Mainly because its a Jin and Fuu story I love this couple. Update this again soon I'll be looking foreward to it. Have an excellent day.
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Title: kimper
Reviewed By: kimper [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2005 09:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely enjoyed this one! i'm ready to sit at my computer and wait for the next chapter lol ! If you get technical there were a few grammer errors but they in no way take away from the enjoyment factor. i absolutely love the fuu X jin pairing. Thank you for writing this wonderful read for us! Please keep up the good work! :)
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