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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2005 22:38 CST
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Tease. Love the duck/physics analogy.
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2005 22:26 CST
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More, more, more! I love this, but the chapter was so short I want to cry. Thank you for updating and for referencing Mary Poppins. Everyone should love Mary Poppins, regardless of age. Anyway, it's cool that Yohji is worried at the end, but if he starts angsting, we're going to blows! (teehee!) Seriously though, another wonderful teaser chapter. As always, leaving me chomping at the bit for more!
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2005 22:17 CST
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"Nagi slowly unclenched his jaw, and fought the urge to introduce Yohji real close and personal to the lake." Oh, you're good. You really are. *snicker* Yohji is lucky Nagi is so controlled! (Of course, he had to learn that control. Ooh, ooh, you just sparked me again! *scurries off to make notes*)
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Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel On: November 08, 2005 19:42 CST
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okay now you confused me more!! you're soooo evil!! what happened to schu? why are the three of them grabbing for yohji?? PLEASE answer my questions!!
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 21:15 CST
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Can we say diabetic coma, boys and girls?
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 21:13 CST
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Oh yes, let's make the resident telekinetic sugar rush like mad. I can see him playing pinball with the members of Weiss and Schwarz now. (Namely bouncing them off the walls, eachother, etc.) Sorry I didn't get to this faster. Someone (I will not mention names) keeps poking me to write faster so that's what I was doing. Oh, yeah, I lied. Red Shaman will probably go to 40 chapters. Gods help us all.
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 21:09 CST
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Nagi's just too cute for words. I almost went into a sugar coma just from reading about the kid and the sweets! It must be nice for Yohji to have a relatively normal conversation without being groped! Here's hoping the kid repays in kind for the treats! Nice subdued chapter after the franticness of the last one!
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 21:02 CST
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Aww, Nagi made a friend! Kawaii! (as to being quick, I was looking for a distraction as picturing Aya as a pirate was making me overheat.) (No, I won't explain. Bwahahaha!)
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 20:10 CST
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It's mostly follow-able. I had to read to it 2x, but my brain is tired from reading all day. I'm really anxious to find out where all this is going and hope you are able to get more up soon. Of course, I make no secret of where I want Yohji to end up (in Aya's bed), but my opinion REALLY doesn't matter. Thanks for updating, I needed that!
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 20:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Kudou Yohji, sex machine. He thought he was hot before! heeheehee, careful what you wish for!! (P.S.--Yotan isn't really my muse, he only hangs around to try to get me to write him more flatteringly. Schu, though--he passes judgement on EVERYTHING I write. sigh.) (heehee, the spam code is YEEB.)
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Title: by the way
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 10:56 CST
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A single-seater couch is called a chair. ;) Yes, yes, I'll go back and write now. *grumble* (try three, and the spam code is RCMP--Go Royal Canadian Mounted Police!) (try four)
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2005 22:41 CST
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I don't mind setting myself up, now you know where to find me! Two more wonderful chapters and the suspense is still killing me. Clearly Yotan isn't as normal as Kritiker would have them believe. Can't wait to see what's up. Of course, I hope ends with Y x A lovin', but I always hope that! More, please?
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Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel On: November 03, 2005 17:45 CST
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o... kay? im confused!! what truth does yohji know?? what hasnt manx told them?! and yay you updated im sooo happy! =3
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2005 08:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Durn thing, every time I come to this page it logs me out! LOVE you using that idea, that's fantastic! Go Yohji! More, more, more!! I mean it!!!
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Title: Don't Blame Me!
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2005 23:37 CST
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Don't blame me if the next Shades chapter doesn't go up on time, every time I go to work on it someone updates, and I can't resist. Heehee, Yohji getting retail therapy... *grin* I guess I should let him stay over more often, huh? One night and you update everything? (I need him back now. I said now please. Don't make me get mean. ;)
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