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Reviewed By: Heta Noitio [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2007 04:37 CDT
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Surprising ending. But... *thinks* Yeah. I liked it. Especially Nagi, the poor boy, the 'not quite matured duck'. :D
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Reviewed By: Heta nsi On: April 01, 2007 04:12 CDT
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I've read the first six chapters and will, with no doubt, randomly shout out 'Urea!' and giggle for the rest of the day. xD You might do with a beta to check the commas and all, but the story is great this far.
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2006 08:45 CDT
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Ok I commend your evilness because it was a great story and left me wanting more. So now I'm gonna read p2 and see if that won't fix my cravings lol.
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Title: WHAT!!!!
Reviewed By: Miss Macabre : p On: December 26, 2005 07:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what is with that chapter title!! The end!! you had better bloody well continue!! I need to read more...my delicate sanity depends on your typing speed, so go faster!!!!XD
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Reviewed By: Schmetterling [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2005 08:53 CST
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@_@ Awesome... Yay! I love the ending, great twist. Really had fun reading this fic .
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Reviewed By: Bombayoni [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 18:42 CST
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wow... one big story.... I like... when's the next installment?
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Reviewed By: gothria [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2005 03:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay! that was sooooooo goooooooooood!! so yotan was basiaclly a succubis =^^= a fanfic in a fanfic. i didn't expect it to be a story. whee. i really enjoyed this fic. but uh...what was aya's power o_o? =^_^=
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Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel On: November 13, 2005 21:00 CST
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i never wouldve thought it was a story in a story!! kudous (my yohji MINE) to you! and when the title of the chapter "is the end" is it REALLY the END??
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2005 20:53 CST
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Too fun. Schu babysitting. Love it.
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2005 20:51 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Aww, sweet Schu-Schu telling bedtime stories... Okay, I'm sad it's over, but there were some awesome moments, and I will keep my hopes up for that sequel.
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2005 19:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry that it's over, but that was a very fun and creative ending! Wonderful as always!
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Title: chap 17
Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel On: November 12, 2005 01:39 CST
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heheh ahahhahaha baby duckys!! hmmm so is yohji's talent (one of) the reasons why no one ever rejects him?? and is brad going to fall for yohji if he is in his presents??
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 22:24 CST
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Interesting, if mildly disturbing chapter. Have I mentioned how wonderfully twisted I think you are? I do just love that about you! I'm sad that the next chapter is the last, but I'll try to be ok. I'll update again this weekend, but computer has one foot in the grave already and it's not looking good. Thanks for the chapter, it was a bright spot in my cloudy day!
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 20:46 CST
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Oh, gods, spare me the grits. The vast majority of my family is OLD South. Gack! So, Yohji's talent is sex appeal. Makes sense. Can you say "orgy" boys and girls?
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Title: Grits!!
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 20:35 CST
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LOL!! Before you know it, grits will be as much a staple of Weiss stories as Farf's blenders! More, more, more!!! Yay!
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