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Reviewed By: the butler [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2005 20:07 CDT
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Somebody teach me how to write good short chapters like you. Manx is a procreating female dog... always knew deep in my guts those stilletos really are stilletos (you know, the Italian weapon?). How's Schu gonna handle a bunch of miserable, angry Weiss, I'd like to find out. Kritiker was procreating them all along, well, they should've seen that one coming anyway. It kinda tugged at my heart, the point when Omi said "When are you going to betray me too?". Vulnerable and justifiable. If you weren't going for humor this fic would've been a whole excreted-body-waste load of angst. Good call on making it more humorous then.
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Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel On: September 04, 2005 18:03 CDT
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whaaa poor hot yohji hes my fave to!! but stupid omi he should know that the rest of weiss would never betray him!!
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Title: chapter five
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2005 16:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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::snicker, snerk:: "something he did not currently have access to..." re: your inspiring me--When/if I use the idea, I will credit you.
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Title: chapter 4
Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel On: September 04, 2005 01:39 CDT
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ahhaha stupid weiss except for yohji!! but poor yohji having no special powers!!! evil manx evil!!!
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Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2005 20:29 CDT
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Schwarz chiming in and Manx on a power trip? Wow, that is quite a change! Looking forward to more, definitely! Hmm, I think you've given me an idea... ;)
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Title: chapter 3
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 20:29 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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::ROFLMAO:: OMflippingG, I can't wait to see what Aya can do... And Ken controlling fire. Ken the most out of control of the bunch--whee!!! Tell me sometime, what was your original idea?
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Title: chapter 2
Reviewed By: dimonyo-anghel On: August 29, 2005 22:24 CDT
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i love it!!! but hows youji always acting like that make the others the wrong ones??
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Title: Whee, I'm First!
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2005 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love being first reviewer! Guess that's why I haunt the boards so much. Yeah, let's go with that answer. Urr--review? Oh yeah. Moimoi-chan, how dare you get me hooked on two of your fics at once? You had better be spending every second you're not sleeping at your computer, you! Write faster, write faster, WRITE FASTER!
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