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Title: Great
Reviewed By: nick2951 On: March 07, 2006 11:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter. I am curious to see how you will end this. Update soon.
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Ghost140 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2006 09:20 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey im with you man I personaly like Ritsu she #2 in my top three fav Eva charecters. #1 is is a tie between Misato and Maya #3 is Hikari. Im also a fan of out of canon pairings pair Shinji with any of my top three favs and you make my day...but of course it has to be writin well. Well make good on the last chapter im looking forward to it and errr to the sex as well. :)
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Reviewed By: Font On: March 04, 2006 23:41 PST
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Still a very nice fic. I particularly like the Asuka and Shinji relationship (go chapter 4!). What can I say, I'm an A/S shipper. The depth of the characters is a refreshing change from the usual superficiality inherint in most fics. So I'm wondering, when the fuck are you going to update?!
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: Hoppy-san On: February 27, 2006 03:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Just...wow. When I started reading this this I thought, "Rape? This is gonna suck." No offence to you. Just anything with rape seems kinda weird. You, however, made it work. Everyone's more or less in character, except for Ritsuko, though she's actually pretty well done for an insane perverted freak. The other chapters depressed me, chapter four...made me happy and sad. Happy because Shinji did something to Asuka, because Asuka was a virgin and not a slut like in so many other fanfics *twitch*, and because it was an overall good chapter. Sad because of everything else. Poor Shinji. Poor Asuka. Oh, question. Why do Asuka and Misato hate each other? Well, maybe not that far, but there's definately no love lost between them. I know they both love Shinji, but I didn't think they'd be so cold towards each other...Forgive me if I'm rambling, but it;s only natural for the braindead of 6:18 am. I can't believe I'm writing this now. Tired...Well, hope you update soon.
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Reviewed By: tomdj1701 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2006 12:40 PST
Comment/Review:
Actually a nice upatet.
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Reviewed By: Lord_Raa [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 12:23 PST
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This was a quality update, though I think we need to have Shinji tell someone some more of what he and Ritsuko did together. The problem with that is, who's he going to tell?
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Title: simply stunning
Reviewed By: sedemihcrA [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 09:13 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, You have really matured since the start of True Love Waits. And talk about dark. My God! I don't know what you were thinking when you said you didn't like this chapter. It was absolutely brilliant, heavy stuff. Intense. Beautifully descriptive, and so very heartwrenching. The scene where Shinji's sitting in her old room. It really blew me away. What I think is really clever is how you manage to arouse the reader with your descriptions and then make them feel terribly guilty for it afterwards. Just the way the "good" characters feel. And what a chapter! I seriously have no complaints which makes that damn numbered rating system next to impossible (really, how the heck does one rate writing style on a number system!?). Anyways, this is probably my favorite fic at the moment. I really deeply want to see a Shinji Asuka pairing-redemption out of this even though I know it could be simply impossible given your set-up. Nevertheless, what an amazing, interesting idea. I really respect you for using sex as something other than a romance thing. Throughout the story sex is portrayed as a dirty, ugly thing. Interesting, especially in light of your little "love is a necessity after 2nd Impact" idea. Loved that by the way. So fitting for a post-apocalyptic world. Really what more can I say. You make me hurt a little more for the characters with each chapter and I love you for it. Quite nearly as vividly tragic as the series was the first time I watched it. And that is perhaps the highest compliment I can give seeing as Evangelion is probably my favorite movie/series/piece of art ever. Don't be so hard on yourself. You've really done an incredible job so far.
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Reviewed By: dennisud2015 On: January 28, 2006 23:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
First I'm not known to write dark fics and I probably never will. So I can say this you have written an thought provoking and dramatic story which keeps me glued to my keyboard and scrolling button. I am drawn in mostly by the deep psychological hits each one of these characters have had to endure, the hypocracy is defin itely rampant and it seems no one in this whole mess is innocent. Likey that alone can say much for the probable outcome of this story. I am looking forward to how this ends and do hope Gendo above all even this paculiar version of Ritsuko gets it so horribly he can expiereience ALL the horrors visited upon his son! Nuff said for now! dennisud
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Reviewed By: MitoFreak On: January 28, 2006 16:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the darkest fanfics i've ever read. Very well written, great plot, very gripping story. If the story gets any darker, I don't think I could finish it. But I hope you keep writing.
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Reviewed By: Sideris [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2006 19:13 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You my friend, my hat is off to you. I loved this chapter, and while you were right about the Kaji section, I loved it. It was well done and thought out. Don't give me that, weak chapter BS. I loved this chapter. The invasion and subsequent...handling of the situation were unique, gut wrenching and terribly disturbing. I LOVED it. I'm thoroughly overjoyed by this dark fiction and I hope the inspiration wave I'm riding on right now can bring me back off my Star Wars fic and back into the arms of Eva. Perhaps a one shot...yes...that will do. Once again, fantastic job and I pray you keep writing. Never get discouraged, I will forever be a fan, my friend.
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Title: Twisted
Reviewed By: nick2951 On: January 27, 2006 18:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, this keeps getting more twisted by the minute. I can't wait for the big finish.
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Title: Chapter 5
Reviewed By: WarpWizard [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2006 16:40 PST
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Gee, you've managed to make things even squickier than the original. Again. Good job. :)
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Reviewed By: Guppy Lips On: January 23, 2006 07:07 PST
Comment/Review:
Whoa. I can't believe I put reading this off. As usual, you've done a top notch job on character portrayal. Even when I thought a character was OoC, it made sense to me. This was really intense to read. The story has a gritty atmosphere and seems to get all the characters dirty. I love a compelling darkfic. incredible job. Keep up the good work.
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Title: Hmm
Reviewed By: j0 On: January 20, 2006 18:43 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading it because it was X rated and I was horny, but the story kinda killed the mood. Oh, and why do you keep saying "the Third Children?" Shinji is the third child, correct? Unless there are more of him and I missed that somehow.. :o Very well written, though it wasn't what I came to read XD Good work.
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Reviewed By: CG1 Temporal On: January 19, 2006 19:23 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Man that is one amazing fucking fic. can't wait for you to post the next chapter. Also can't wait till I find even more fics like this. CG1 Temporal
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