| "Honor-Bound" Reviews/Comments [ 211 ] |
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Reviewed By: ball of aggravation On: January 29, 2007 08:02 EST
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still love your story. :)
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Reviewed By: Sassenach_Gaijin On: January 28, 2007 07:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know you have not heard this enough so I'm going to tell you again... YOU ROCK!! I was a little unsure of the story at first but gave it a chance... now after sitting here for a couple hours... searching for the next page I'd say I'm a little more than hooked. If you don't have more for this story I'm going to be very disappointed. I don't really know what to do with myself now that there isn't anymore to read. Please I beg you... MORE!!!!
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Title: elleto
Reviewed By: Shikoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 22:14 EST
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HUZZAHNESS dude, i kept getting little damn emails about you updating mystery man, that i was getting ready to boot you off my alarm list and check in on you manually. and then i felt something shrivel up inside me at the thought of that, and decided against it. WELL HUZZAAAHH it rawks, just as usual. i like this wufei, my feiry spitfire, bull-terrier moron. OHOHOHO! i kind of want it to go all the way to the wedding, (coughrelenacoughanyone?cough) and then wufei and heero sharinng hidden, shadowed moments of lust unrestrained *desire*. (what, darling? why no, i always end up naked on the couch while trying to watch TV...and please ignore the naked bodyguard too) OH NOOES TEH SCANDALZ but yes. i eat scandals right up. >:D keep at it! i'm salivating for more!
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Reviewed By: SGM On: January 24, 2007 21:40 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is extremely good. I just wanted to point out one tiny and mabye nit-picky flaw. In the middle of the (lovely and gorgeously written) lemon scene (love how they're uncertain and figuring things out, they just seem cute) you wrote "Prostrate" which means to lie flat or prone, and I'm pretty sure you meant 'prostate' (no second r) which is a male gland near the urethra. Otherwise it is simply magnificent.
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Reviewed By: Katsuya On: January 17, 2007 10:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Duo is such a trip! I don't even know what to think of him anymore. And I feel so bad for Quatre...he still likes Trowa but 03 doesn't even seem to notice...oh boy. And I love long stories, so don't worry about having so many chapters. Do whatever you need to do so that you're satisfied with the story. Looking forward to your next chapter! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Ubiquitous On: January 14, 2007 22:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, PLEASE UPDATE! Soon, preferably, because this fic is honestly one of the greatest I have ever had the pleasure of coming across. Your characterization is amazing and I love the way you took the original GW cast and incorporated them into a wonderfully plausible and completely unprecedented AU. The storyline is excellent, the characters and their relationships are complex and addictively engaging, and the way you build up to the love scenes is fantastic! lol, this fic is definitely one of the few rare jewels to be found out there in the world of fanfiction, and I'm glad you've taken the time to write so much. Please update soon! ^___^
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Reviewed By: im_alive On: December 20, 2006 11:31 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful wonderful fic. I don't mind that it's long it's worth it and makes it so much more interesting. I love that sence so much it wasn't over done nor under done it was perfect.
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Reviewed By: Dreamkeeper On: December 20, 2006 03:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmm... I like this fic! I especially liked how you wrote the lemon. With them both being ackward and all, but they're hormones dictating what to do. I also like how Duo gives them the chance anyway, even though everyone knows how it'll end. Poor Trowa though. Confused little soldier that he is. Hopefully he learns from this though ^_~ update soon please!
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Reviewed By: orangeflips [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2006 19:20 EST
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OMGSMUT. Whoooo! *fans* Trowa, poor Trowa. All he was doing was following the directions, andand... he was going to the bad guys! Gah. Loooovee it. You're wonderful. PS. Wasn't With You another title of a fic you wrote?
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Reviewed By: NamiStar On: December 17, 2006 09:27 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry, ignore that style of writing thing in my previous review, I think you write better than a two, I hit a wrong key.
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Reviewed By: NamiStar On: December 17, 2006 08:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Comment/Review:
uggg...so wonderful...Yeah I love this story (espcially this awesome chapter), and let me tell you there is nothing wrong with it's length. Long stories as well written and fun as yours are good things. As always, can't wait for your next update, hope your muses keep you inspired.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2006 23:05 EST
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Hey, good gay smut is hard to find (not really, but really liked the chappies up to here, and now this one too). Now to see if more goodness will be available soon, update when you can.
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Reviewed By: Mitsuru Aki [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2006 11:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. Period. There were a few discrepancies though. When Wufei and Heero headed for the Call Room after Mariemaia, Wufei was grateful for years of track training. But I thought earlier it was said the coach *wanted* him on the team but he never actually joined? Just a thought. And I'm severely pissed at Trowa, just to let you know. Maybe if he'd open his eyes to Quatre, he'd understand. Lol. And exactly how old is Duo? It doesn't make sense he'd name himself after a tragedy unless he experienced it. Plus he was in that photo at the museum. It had to be him. Suspicious...My mind is working overtime now! Lol! Please update as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: im_alive On: December 12, 2006 18:14 EST
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So awesome really really can't wait for more. So lucky I'm all giddy otherwise I might have thrown a fit about that cut off. But I can wait and I loved the title. I'm really hating Wufei's family though.
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Reviewed By: Kwan On: December 12, 2006 02:44 EST
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Really enjoying this so far, even if I don't review every chapter. I really like your play on Wufei's name. However, just FYI, it's the characters that don't make sense, not necessarily the pronounciation/syllable combination. The character for 'five' wouldn't be used, but other characters pronounced "wu" might be. I still like it, but not for the same reason you described. :)
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