| "Danger in the horizon" Reviews/Comments [ 126 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rosilienne On: October 12, 2003 02:34 EDT
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Please update soon :( I'd like to see this story to the end. I love youuuu~
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Title: BARDOCK!!!!! :D
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2003 13:21 EDT
Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHH!!!!!!
What has that pasty lizard bastid done to my precious lamb??????
My poor sweet honey, reduced to a pawn of the 'F' words... *sobs uncontrollably* I need to go and rescue him!!!
ummm very nice to see Radditz happy at last, and Kudos on the Yamucha idea - I was despairing for a while there - I hate seeing Yamucha maligned in stories, but still I carried on reading, and you made it all alright!! *big grin*
PS - I'm going to read further - I couldn't resist reviewing when my Honey Lamb made an appearance.
I shall be praying for his safety (and that he find love with an Englishwoman) |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2003 13:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.o I forgot to mention how keen I am on Radditz in this fic!! I love it when people include the little(??) sweet in their storylines.
Also the last S/G rating should have been 9, not 8, it's incredibly refreshing to read a fic by someone with an understanding of the language, and who makes so few mistakes!! |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2003 13:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Someone has just reminded me of this fic! I started reading it a while ago, then MM had its slowness problems and I lost track of it. I'm so glad that I've got back into it again!
I'm thoroughly enjoying reading this, it's well thought out, well written and VERY entertaining. I'm only up to ch 5 at the moment, so I have to go back and read!! :D |
Reviewed By: Jess On: July 14, 2003 14:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey Hey great stuff can't wait for your next reveiw |
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon On: July 03, 2003 11:26 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Radditz! I remember being happy you put him in this fic! |
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon On: July 03, 2003 11:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, It's me again! Thought I'd reread/review! Sorry it's been so long! Poor Radditz- It's not him Bulma gets!! |
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon On: June 28, 2003 13:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God, even yet, still so exciting! The end of this chapter, had me on the edge of my chair! The enternal struggle of Goku, the intensity of Radditz's feelings as he cleansed his love's wounds, *yah, nice lemon too!* even Chi-Chi's thoughts and interaction with the telly had me spellbound with....Awww, I just love it!!!! A most wonderful writer you are and it's too bad you lost all of those 400 plus reviews on ffn!! |
Reviewed By: King_Kold On: June 24, 2003 00:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic, please continue, I've been reading this for some time, kicks ass. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: June 10, 2003 14:30 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really don't know how you do it. The chap was great before but your add-ons made it even better. Sorry I hadn't reviewed but I've been having probs with the ISP. As for the update you really gotta feel sorry for Sarah. That poor woman doesn't have a clue as to what really went on with Jock and Victor. If she ever finds out it's gonna crush her. Of course Bulma has been perfect throughout all thats happened and I hope she continues to be as strong b/c Freiza will be fowling up the air pretty soon. I know I've put in requests before for gruesome deaths and you've delivered, so I'll do it again. Make that fucking lizard pay big time for what he's done to everyone. Pls make it so gross that I won't be able to eat for a week (I could stand to lose a few lbs anyway :D). I want his guts coating the inside screen of the monitor, I want...er...hehe...sorry, got carried away there. As you can tell I am no fan of that no good, pompous, megalomaniac, self serving. dickless piece of shit. Ahem, as for Goku's ascent, that was just way cool. The way Radditz spoke to him, pissing him off a little at a time was rich. It worked too cause now he's a SSJ and Veggie is starting to talk to himself ^_^. Again, another awesome chap on your part and I am so looking forward to your next update. Kudos Cha!! |
Reviewed By: mae44 On: June 07, 2003 19:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You're a great writter! The only problem is that I linked to this page through ff.net and I can't find Danger in the Horizon to read more. I'm dying! I need to find it before I die of suspence. It stopped at chp. 22 at ff.net and reading through some of the reviews here I concluded that there is more to the story. MUST. FIND. STORY. |
Reviewed By: Pan-Chan Briefs On: June 03, 2003 19:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading this fic on fanfiction.net a LONG time ago and am SO incredibly glad I found it again!!! And with chappies I haven't read!!! YAY! hehe. I was really glad to finally check up on this on FFN and realize you had talked about continuing it on this site. Ahhhhh, I hope you post more soon, I really can't wait to read more. This should be a book 'cause it's such great quality! Original AU with ZILLIONS of awesome twists and long chappies and great lemons and no OOCness. Keep up the greatness! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: May 13, 2003 03:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, great update! Your description of that poor newbie reporter was right on. I kinda felt sorry for her having to report from the scene of grossness on a grand scale-LOL. Good! Personally I can't stand the press. The fact that Goku is stressed out b/c he hasn't become a ssj is a nice change. Usually it's Veggie that gets all bent outta shape at not becoming the Legendary. Radditz oath was so beautiful *sigh*. Amanda is one lucky woman, and the fact that they wanted to be intimate after all that happened made alot of sense. Of course the lemon was exactly the way it should've been. None of that hot and heavy "oh baby, harder, deeper" crap. After what they had been thru they needed to reassure each other and sort of rebond. And of course you gotta love Veggie. Bulma's about to go thru a crisis with the press and all he could think about is getting it on with her. I sort of get the feeling that our saiyan prince would think about getting laid during a nuclear holocaust O_o. Again, this was another super effort on your part and I'm so looking forward to the next chap :D. |
Reviewed By: Chiku On: May 11, 2003 15:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great, you've written another chapter. And it's a good one too. Please continue! |
Reviewed By: Papa Bear [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 20:36 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its been awhile since I read your fic, so now I'm making up for that. Its even better than the last time I reviewed it! I'm totally captivated here! Keep up the good work! |
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