| "Danger in the horizon" Reviews/Comments [ 126 ] |
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Reviewed By: autumn On: January 30, 2003 17:08 EST
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Oh, yeah, and how could I have forgotten to tell you what an awesome scene that was with Victor & Amanda... Whew! What a looney! Radditz came just in the nick of time. I hope he makes it through the battle with Frieza, I really like them together. :) |
Reviewed By: autumn On: January 30, 2003 17:05 EST
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Wow! That was intense!! What a great chapter! I really like the way you've decided to use Bardock, I'm interested to see how all of that will play out. It's a shame that Frieza knows about Bulma, but Bardock really had no choice but to reveal her to him. (Plus it makes for an even juicier plot line!) Looking forward to finding out what happens next. :) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 30, 2003 03:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woohoo!! Great chap Cha! Raddy really knows how to make an entrance ^_~. At least now Amanda is safe from that delusional prick and R/A can go on with their lives without interference from anyone. Next in line to be wiped out is Frieza. Have I ever told you how much I hate that bastard? -_-. I can't believe how he has treated Bardock and the way he's using him is sickening. It bothers me that Bard had to tell the slimy, slithering scumbag about Bulma's mental powers and the fact that she may be Veg's mate. To think of what he's capable of doing to her makes me wanna vomit. Again, another great installment on your part. Can't wait to see where you take it from here. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: dbzkeri [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 17:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Waiiiiiii!!!!!!!! I luved chp 39!!!!! XD This story is just too good to be true!!!!!!!!!!! luv ya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Ms2ry Angle7 On: January 26, 2003 12:47 EST
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As always great chapter, and looking forward to the next ch. Good writing!!! |
Reviewed By: Bulma On: January 26, 2003 08:47 EST
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Another excellent chapter!!! Please, continue it.
[ ]īs, Bulma. |
Reviewed By: Onna On: January 26, 2003 07:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm soo happy you've finally updated! This chapter was great, just like the rest of them... I hope you go on with the story! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2003 17:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you decided to post the rest of your story on this site. I'm happy now, ^_^ Well, I hope people will come to their senses and review your story. It's undeniably good, they waste their reviews on pathetic stories, when yours is right here. So, ignoring the stupidity of others, I truly wish you'll keep posting it here. |
Reviewed By: Xorwais On: January 14, 2003 10:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ayah! I totally forgot to review this chapter.. And I read it ages ago.. Checked for updates every day..
What's with the lack of updates? You haven't given up now have you? That would be the death of me!
I hope to read more soon..
Take care, Naomi |
Reviewed By: Rainchild On: December 20, 2002 07:26 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the fic. It's very entertaining. Please continue the fic. Thanks. |
Reviewed By: Onna On: December 08, 2002 07:09 EST
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Don't you say that! It's great to be able to read this once agan after the $%&@# jerks at Ff.net removed it! I love this story! We all do! So update soon 'kay? ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Susan On: November 18, 2002 18:30 EST
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You can't be serious. MMO was the birthplace of DITH and I think it's a great idea that you're posting it here again. You yourself said that you lost alot of addys from your readers. I think the vast mayority aren't even aware that that you're at MMO. At least here you have creative freedom and you don't have to worry a "ratings" problem. I think that given a little time former readers will start to trickle back to this site. So cheer up, it's not like you've lost them permanently. As for JB, she keeps forgetting to review the last chap, but then again she's been so busy lately that she has to make an appointment to talk to herself. Anyway, I think things will get better so hang in there ^_^. Hugs-Sue |
Reviewed By: Chiku On: November 17, 2002 16:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started reading this fic a long time ago on ff.net. But suddenly it disappeared. Glad to see it back online here again and with some new chappies. Please continue writing, it's really good. |
Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 15:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Of course posting here was a great idea! While FFN has a big sick up their ass, MMO doesn't and there's a good place for it here! OK, sorry, got a little upset you were EVEN THINKING of taking it off. So please don't, you know people probably just don't review because either they're COMPLETELY IDIOTIC, or they're just too damn lazy.... |
Reviewed By: angelscaramel On: November 16, 2002 10:28 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Reading your summary, I think you should continue to post your writing. It's a great story and very original. You should be very proud of your work. Don't let a thing like low reviews keep you from posting your story.
Just some advice from one writer to another.
Ashanti |
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