| "Diplomatic Relations" Reviews/Comments [ 157 ] |
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Reviewed By: Vitaralastla [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2005 05:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay... I found this fic on AFF.net at first, and I fell in love with it instantly! Your portrayal of Lee and Gaara's personalities... well, everyone's personalities is excellent! Go forth and write more! I love long fan-fics/novels/movies/manga/whatever, as long as it's good! And you're doing very good! ... Doing very well... I need more sleep, I think... >_
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Reviewed By: Meanderingwhoisnotloggedin On: November 19, 2005 19:32 EST
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There's not much to comment on, this chapter, since it's mostly setting out the plot, like chess pieces. I wait eagerly for the next installment. *pokes* And update that Kakashi/Iruka fic, will you?
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Reviewed By: pixiesmith nsi On: November 19, 2005 19:22 EST
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Lovely as always. I am very excited about the next chapter as always. I adore the way you write Gai. He's rather smarter than you'd believe, no?
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Reviewed By: Meanderingwhoisnotloggedin On: November 16, 2005 22:55 EST
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Excellent writing - as usual. I really, really hope you update soon, because everytime I read a fic of yours that is NOT a oneshot, I seem to come in at the precise psychological cliffie. Damn you. I feel sorry for Lee. I know that we're looking at it entirely from his POV, but the seeming one-sidedness of his... affection can be really frustrating. I love your stories thugh. *sighs* I'll be back...
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Reviewed By: Inarae On: November 14, 2005 00:11 EST
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See previous comment, up the awwww factor, and toss in a bucket of gratitude for the nice action sub-plot. Blood and romance, what could be better? Thanks yet again for writing and sharing.
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Reviewed By: Inarae On: November 14, 2005 00:03 EST
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Ok, I haven't finished reading all the updates since the last time I was here, but I just have to say: Awwwwwwww...... (melts into little puddle of warm fuzzies)
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Reviewed By: trinity helix On: November 06, 2005 15:01 EST
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oh my sweet, sweet lord. it was a long wait for this one, but so. bloody. worth it. lovely chapter...
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Reviewed By: L On: November 06, 2005 00:45 EST
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i love this chapter!..please update it soon....
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Reviewed By: Chocolate Cheese Queen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 11:38 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, the joy of reading this fic. I love it! I think I may die in anticipation for the next chapter, especially with the way that Chapter 9 ended. I think this fic is the best I've read in a long long time. It's hard to find someone with decent grammar and a delightful writing style. You just can't get any better than this! Please continue!
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Reviewed By: lalalalalalalalala*argh On: November 05, 2005 07:53 EST
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Waaaahhh, chapter 9 made me so happy! Poor Lee, not only is he injured, but Gaara's now also *licking* him!! How is he ever going to be able to get a good night's sleep now? ^__^ I reviewed the 8th chapter, too, but it seems mm.org ate the review sometime between back then and now. I've been wondering abou this for a while now, do you have your Naruto fanfics archived anywhere besides mm.org? I know your GW fics are featured in a couple of archives, but this fanfic definitely deserves the same thing.
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Reviewed By: darkwingedryder [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 05:07 EST
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Funny, funny, funny! Gaara has mistaken Lee's *ahem* little problem for homesickness. lol. Poor Lee, to have to practice so much, he'd do so much better taking a cold shower, poor sad Lee. Innocent Gaara is really cute!
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Reviewed By: shadow11 On: November 05, 2005 05:06 EST
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I like Kankuro in your fic. He's cool. You're a fantastic writer. --A bouquet of squirrels…?-- hahaha!
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Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 05:04 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another beautiful chapter. I must mention, I absolutely adore the way you keep Lee in character! The first four lines had me laughing for the entire chapter. Great work!
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Reviewed By: V On: November 05, 2005 02:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, another great chapter. chapter 9 is so sweet, I'm so excited about it. Looking forward to the LeeGaara relationship. Innocent is probably not the most appropriate word to describe Gaara but I think he is quite innocent about certain things. Thats why I like Gaara so much and I have always thought of the LeeGaara pairing but there are so little fanfiction with this pairing. I'm so glad you are writing this. Very high standard writing. Always a pleasure to read. keep it up!! ^^
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Reviewed By: hypochondria kills cats On: November 04, 2005 17:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn it, Lee better clue in! that last sentence made me soooo mad. anyway, really good story, i loved reading it. i hope you update soon, and i don't have to come harass you to finish it. i just loved the what where friends for? chapter too. Great story.
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