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| "Diplomatic Relations" Reviews/Comments [ 157 ] | | Pages (11): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 ] | Reviewed By: Admantius Rowan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2005 00:02 EDT
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Well, flying monkeys! It's Maldoror writing Naruto fics! And here I was in my 8 ounce world thinking you only wrote Gundam Wing stuff. Then I just happen to stumble across your name under the Naruto section of mm.org, and I flip out! I was very happy to see that you also write about my other most favorite anime. I hope to read more in the future, and can't wait for the next chapie of Freeport. Keep up the great work!
| Reviewed By: Rahena On: September 15, 2005 10:57 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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This was so excellent! I really want to see what happens. Hope inspiration strikes you soon.
| Title: stress relief... I agree.
Reviewed By: thewarriorkai [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2005 08:22 EDT
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I really do get a kick out of this story and they are very interesting characters. I can't wait to find out what happens next. You really did hook me on this pairing and you stay in character really well. I share your hope that Gaara, in the manga, will make it through okay. He's a character that deserves the chance to grow, though if he does get that chance I think that it would be similar to the way you've protrayed him. I honestly can't believe how well you write those two, especially Lee, I wouldn't be able to write him that well no matter how hard I tried. Please keep it up, and if you ever need an extra beta-reader or if you just want a more in depth review all you have to do is ask! Once again, thanks for this!
| Reviewed By: pixiesmith On: September 15, 2005 00:52 EDT
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'for each yawn, I'll do five hundred one-armed pressups-' WAH!!! Soooooo cute!!! *** I love Lee, and how could he possibly mistake his future 'mate' for a post! Tee, hee, hee. *** "That's why I came to kill you in the hospital afterwards." As usual, I adore your funny one-liners!!! *** Characterisation, voices, attitudes are perfect. Sorry I can't give more feedback, but I've read a lot of Lee, and you've definitely got him down pat. A good fic you might want to read to get Gaara characterisation is "Try" by gelfling at http : // www . fanfiction . net /s/1963188/1/ (just take out all the spaces). That one's one of my personal favourites. Glad to see you updating so quickly. I look forward to reading more soon.
| Title: Nice!
Reviewed By: thewarriorkai [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2005 03:04 EDT
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I like this. I love Naruto almost as much as I love Gundam Wing. Love your fics, Freeport, Trail and Error (very funny - people gave me weird looks when I was reading it at the PC room because I kept laughing out loud!),Watching You, Beautiful Symmetries and The Arrangement. I love alternate pairings and I never even considered Gaara and Lee as a pairing but I think I've been converted! Thanks so much for writing this story and the others! I look forward to reading more of your stories as soon as you get an opportunity to post them... I know how annoying real life can be at times.
| Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2005 16:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god! I love this pairing, and to have you write it... I'm in heaven. You've capture Lee's character perfectly. *** Two days running... Yep, my eyes woulda been round if I didn't know that that's exactly how Lee is! He's totally perfect. *** "Yes, Rock-sama." LOL. I always thought that sounded odd. Rock... LOL. *** "Masculine tears" Wah, hah, lovely description. Brilliant work. I hope to read more *really* soon. ^_^
| Reviewed By: Pixie Smith [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2005 16:36 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god! I love this pairing, and to have you write it... I'm in heaven. You've capture Lee's character perfectly. *** Two days running... Yep, my eyes woulda been round if I didn't know that that's exactly how Lee is! He's totally perfect. *** "Yes, Rock-sama." LOL. I always thought that sounded odd. Rock... LOL. *** "Masculine tears" Wah, hah, lovely description. Brilliant work. I hope to read more *really* soon. ^_^
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