| ""Trunks Lil Book Of Hentai Short Stories, Volume 1"" Reviews/Comments [ 96 ] |
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Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 13:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I'm not even going to lie, I've only read the Cowboy Bebop lemon!!! (It was first CB lemon!) I really liked it. It was rauncy, and I like raunchy lemons. Nothing romantic, just pure sex, emotionless, SEX!!! |
Reviewed By: cronos On: June 05, 2003 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have read up to what is there and its pretty good(comeing from me that means a lot) ans=d i wanted to know if there was gonna be a second part to interlude in the park? |
Reviewed By: Bunny On: July 15, 2003 00:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was REALLY weird. Don't get me wrong lemons are fine but I'm a romantic and I like to read lemon scenes that have passion and care. What Sakura and 'Lee' did was so unattached and unfeeling. They're supposed to love each other and when people make love the main word IS "love". I hope you don't take this as flaming. I was just giving some feed back. Keep up the work.
****P.S.--That hermaphridite, lesbian intercourse thing is really creepy.**** |
Reviewed By: Rey Rey On: May 15, 2003 23:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have created a good series and why don't you try a Zoe/Takuya Digimon lemon and if you decide to do a Pokemon Lemon do a Ash/Casey lemon these types of stories are rare on the internet. |
Reviewed By: zero On: May 10, 2003 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERYYY NICE keep writing pleaz |
Reviewed By: HealerAriel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2003 23:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Can't say I don't love Spike/Faye stuff, but... that was too vulgar to stomach. Oh well, whatever you enjoy writing. |
Reviewed By: SaiyanBoyTrunks [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 09:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry guys about not putting up part 2 of the story... I lost all creative senses and I have no desire to finish the story... I am probably gonna take part one down so not to have more reviews asking me to finish it... If I ever do finish it, I will do so many many months or even years from now... Sorry again... |
Reviewed By: Toa Nuva On: April 14, 2003 22:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
You are writing a Tai/Sora/Kari???????And I thought Darkstar was bad. |
Reviewed By: oxygene_iv [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2003 13:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lots of tens,and lots of tens mean a worthwhile reading fic a im right??? |
Reviewed By: A friend On: February 09, 2003 00:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS IN PART 2 OF THE
INTERLUDE IN THE PARK POST SOOOOOOOON,PLEASE!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: lil' lost girl On: February 01, 2003 06:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Try doing cross overs with Sailor Moon and Dragonball Z. I know well need more Serena and Trunks. Serena and Gohan. Serena and Vegeta. and one we almost never see Serena and Goku. Just to tell you if you don't already know Serena is a blonde whith blue eyes and any personality you want her to have. Bye |
Reviewed By: gohans_girl_ashia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 15:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
more bulma and chi-chi says me now!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: DigitalDiver On: January 05, 2003 23:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooo..the Cardcaptors one was good..Write the next part for digimon pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeez! |
Reviewed By: azreal On: January 02, 2003 14:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
uyttd |
Reviewed By: SaiyanBoyTrunks [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2002 00:57 CST
Comment/Review:
Well I finally made a site for my fanfiction, all the stories here will be posted on the site along with some new ones... the site address is "http://www.angelfire.com/anime4/animefanfics0/index.html" ...check it out!! |
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