""Trunks Lil Book Of Hentai Short Stories, Volume 1"" Reviews/Comments [ 96 ] |
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Reviewed By: Angel of Desire On: June 19, 2002 15:24 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Truly, that was very funny and exciting hentai. Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Ludacris On: June 15, 2002 00:32 CDT Comment/Review: Could you do an outlaw star one with Melfina and Gene? I can't wait to read the digimon story, I can't wait to see who you will use.
Whatever you do do not make it a Taiora or a Mimato!!!!! |
Reviewed By: MarineMeru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2002 17:03 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: This was a great Fan Fic because it had alot of details and by the way you wrote the story you could kind of tell the personality the chacter had. Wish i could write like that.
You should make more Cowboy Bebop fanfics |
Reviewed By: Aisha Clan-Clan On: May 04, 2002 14:38 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Great fics! If possible I would like to make a request - an Outlaw Star, Aisha/Jim, fanfic. Think it over. I would really appreciate it. |
Reviewed By: Dark Angel87 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2002 17:44 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: It's very good.I have some match ups,Maybe try Chi-Chi and 18 0r Bulma Chi-Chi and 18? |
Reviewed By: jack On: April 06, 2002 16:54 CST Comment/Review: I loved the first one. yuo should do one with Kiyone and Mihoshi? |
Reviewed By: FayeAngelic On: March 28, 2002 08:20 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This fanfic was extremely enjoyable. I loved how this guy devoted a chapter to Cowboy Bebop. Very nice! |
Reviewed By: Me On: March 23, 2002 12:11 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This are interestig stories, you might want to write more. Please? |
Reviewed By: melfina20y@webtv.net [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2002 18:49 CST Comment/Review: hey,i read your cowboy bebop story & it wuz real good,but i wanna read 1 about OLS wit Mel n Gene! wit yer talent,i'm sure you could make a good OLS 1! i'll b a-waiting!
^_~.
Luv: Mel20y |
Reviewed By: A-man [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2002 08:28 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: THIS IS A VERY INTERESTING SERIES SINCE YOU DO ALL DIFFRENT SHOWS AND I CAN'T WAIT TILL THE DIGIMON STORY TO SEE WHAT COUPLE YOU USE! |
Reviewed By: Deadacus On: March 13, 2002 16:43 CST Comment/Review: You're kidding right? Pssshttt....Nahh...What ever happened to Faye/Spike/Gren fics? Sure, sure....Faye and Gren would be ok...But doesn't everyone love that Spike?? Hehehe.....I'd like to hear a fic from them! |
Reviewed By: Lorvither On: March 13, 2002 16:40 CST Comment/Review: I know a great couple you could do: Faye and Gren from Cowboy Bebop! Would really appreciate it if you did so! ^^ |
Reviewed By: sketch On: March 12, 2002 20:28 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I enjoyed it not just for the sex but it was interesting |
Reviewed By: TrunksGurl618 On: March 10, 2002 21:05 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i lkied ts really good my fave so far keep up the great work! |
Reviewed By: cosmicvegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2002 00:39 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: How about both to answer your last questin. Smirks Vegeta style |
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