| ""Trunks Lil Book Of Hentai Short Stories, Volume 1"" Reviews/Comments [ 96 ] |
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Reviewed By: blinkrush On: February 08, 2004 17:10 CST
Comment/Review:
man, you should see the fanfics that are trying to be as great as yours. This is, single-handedly, the best volumed hentai series ecer written.
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Title: Ideas
Reviewed By: SuperFan=) On: November 13, 2003 22:17 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OutlawStar: Jim and Aisha Aisha and Suzuka Gene and Melfina Tenchi Muyo: Tenchi and Ryoko Tenchi and Aeka Tenchi and Sasami/Tsunami Tenchi and Washu Tenchi and Kiyone Tenchi and Mihoshi Mihoshi and Kiyone Ryoko and Aeka Washu, Tenchi and Sasami/Tsunami Tenchi and the rest Sailor Moon: Need i say more....
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Reviewed By: AsianGurl On: July 29, 2003 16:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic you should do more on digimon and cardcaptor and more details mon bulma and chi chi !!Well write more and email me at nguyen4ever2002@yahoo.com |
Reviewed By: Shadow2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 13:33 CDT
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That bulma chi chi hentai thing was a knewl about time someone did a lemom on them image the face on vegeta if he saw them doing that it would be pricless. |
Reviewed By: ICE On: July 25, 2003 11:10 CDT
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That was funny, i laughed my ass off!Great story! |
Reviewed By: RubySpider On: July 23, 2003 04:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
I've only read the Spike/Faye chapter, but WOW, that was really hot! One of the better PWP's I've come across. |
Reviewed By: fgubatan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2003 14:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just like karina. more bulma/chchi!!! |
Reviewed By: Inferno_66 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2003 21:27 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I6: You are such a horny little boy aren't you? I like that. Sex is sex! Who needs all that emotional stuff-
Flame: Hey! Love is what makes it-
I6: Love and Lust go hand and hand. By the way, since no anime is sacred, I demand you finish this digimon one and start another one. Maybe a Magic Knight Rayearth one (if you've watched it or read the manga) and perhaps a Fruits Baskets one. Just one request and-
Flame: NO YAOI FICS!! Please! G&G is alright, but NO YAOI! Especially if the involve MY HIEI!!!
I6: Yours?
Flame: Okay, not LEGALLY Mine but-
I6: Ignore her, great job and UPDATE SOON!!
Flame: *mutters* You horny bastard. .
I6: What!?
Flame: *sweat drops* Nothing! |
Reviewed By: moonchild On: June 19, 2003 21:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the stories really funny |
Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 13:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I'm not even going to lie, I've only read the Cowboy Bebop lemon!!! (It was first CB lemon!) I really liked it. It was rauncy, and I like raunchy lemons. Nothing romantic, just pure sex, emotionless, SEX!!! |
Reviewed By: cronos On: June 05, 2003 00:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have read up to what is there and its pretty good(comeing from me that means a lot) ans=d i wanted to know if there was gonna be a second part to interlude in the park? |
Reviewed By: Bunny On: July 15, 2003 00:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was REALLY weird. Don't get me wrong lemons are fine but I'm a romantic and I like to read lemon scenes that have passion and care. What Sakura and 'Lee' did was so unattached and unfeeling. They're supposed to love each other and when people make love the main word IS "love". I hope you don't take this as flaming. I was just giving some feed back. Keep up the work.
****P.S.--That hermaphridite, lesbian intercourse thing is really creepy.**** |
Reviewed By: Rey Rey On: May 15, 2003 23:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have created a good series and why don't you try a Zoe/Takuya Digimon lemon and if you decide to do a Pokemon Lemon do a Ash/Casey lemon these types of stories are rare on the internet. |
Reviewed By: zero On: May 10, 2003 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERYYY NICE keep writing pleaz |
Reviewed By: HealerAriel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2003 23:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Can't say I don't love Spike/Faye stuff, but... that was too vulgar to stomach. Oh well, whatever you enjoy writing. |
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