| "Colors of Life and Death" Reviews/Comments [ 61 ] |
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Reviewed By: Malunariya [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2008 16:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL on Kakashi being "a terrible father" and yes, it's so mean to leave me hanging... :( But it IS a good way to end the chapter... ^_^
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Reviewed By: Malunariya [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2008 15:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww... this chapter had a lot of moments, such as the NaruHina one and the brotherly NaruSasu one ^_^ It was really sweet...
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Reviewed By: Malunariya [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2008 15:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, this story DEFINITELY has the required emotion for such a scene. And once again, EXCELLENT job! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Malunariya [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2008 14:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG(osh), you've REALLY captured the emotion in this fic! And it's REALLY good, too. It's errorless and VERY well-written. Your fic also has GREAT suspense, drama, action, and description in it. I LOVE it! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Saric [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 19:19 CDT
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can't wait for you to put the next chapter up.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Dragonmaster TC [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 10:45 CDT
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I am impressed, you have created a veery interesting story, I can't wait for the next chapter, I hope you get it up soon.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Dragonmaster TC [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2007 10:55 CDT
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....I am impressed, you have done a great job with this story. I like it a lot, the last chapter actually made me cry a bit. It is wonderfully done, I hope you can get the next chapter up soon. Hmm...Well, I need to get back to writing my own fics, so Ja ne, and again, good job.
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Reviewed By: Kai3anime [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2007 18:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is incredible keep it up.
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Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2007 12:06 CDT
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The last chappy had me in tears. I love this story. as usual keep up with the great work.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 23:34 CDT
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Damn. That last chapter. Man. That is terribly sad. Neh, then again I never was invited to too many birthday parties anyway. Heh. Anyway, I love the story, and I am impressed with the story so far. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 18:10 CDT
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You seriously don't know?! She hates Naruto because of the Kyuubi. She thinks that NAruto is Kyuubi-sama. Oh, and author, I'm sad that happened to you.
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Reviewed By: anime fanlover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 14:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor naruto... T.T why did sakura's mom act so cruely? please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: anime fanlover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 11:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story, simply... ROCKS!!!! I cant wait for the next update!! please update soon *tries to give puppy eyes, but something gets tuck in her eye and makes it cry*
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Title: the greatness of this story
Reviewed By: drkknight120 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2007 21:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is actually my second time reading it. this story ROCKS!!!! if i could i would give it a 20 overall. by the way sausuke uses his left hand for the chidori. anyways can't wait for next chapter. please update soon(gives puppy dog eyes)! also if you ever need a beta just ask.
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Title: OMG WTF
Reviewed By: The_12-Tailed_Foxy_Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 18:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was the best chapter EVER i loved it onisan is alive onisan is alive plz update soon!!! Font Color
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Reviewed By: doomprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 22:20 CST
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wow poor naruto, poor hinata, yeah for lee and sakura finnally leaning his way. I have a freind who will be very very sad that Oreo is dead, but it adds good flavor to your story. Cant wait for the next update. thanks for sharing!
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 22:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alrght I'm royally pissed. Update or I'll get the U.S Army and Plverising you! Hurry up!
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 15:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Come on! *is tapping foot on the floor in annoyance* When are you going to Update!?
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Reviewed By: narusaku4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2007 12:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
enjoying it a lot update soo pls =)
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 17:43 CST
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YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY! NARUTO IS ALIVE! HE LIVES! YAY! I have a question, well more like a suggestion. How about When The Atasuki are about to kill Naruto, they end up Bringing Kyuubi back by accident? Naruto keeps the chakra given by Kyuubi, but they merge together and Naruto can morph into a Fox at will? Only a suggesttion.
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Reviewed By: doomprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 14:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice, I'm not sure the electric fence is going to help you ;)! It a very intreging story and i am thoroughly enjoying thanks for sharing and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: doomprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 23:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You don't have enough bolts on that door for this kind of cliff hanger! ;) I am thoroughly enjoying your story, the interaction is excellent and so is your character development. Thanks for sharing!
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 15:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DON'T YOU DARE LET NARUTO DIE DAMNIT! I have a question, are you going to reunite Kyuubi and Naruto? UPDATE I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS TO NARUTO!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 01:57 CST
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GOD FUCKING DAMNIT!!! THAT IS THE WORST cliffhanger I have EVER read. YOU BASTARD!!!! *pouts* damnit, I want more to this story. Seriously, get another chapter published soon. I WANT NARUTO TO LIVE, DAMNIT!!!
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 22:26 CST
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OMG!!!!That is just wrong to leave a girl hanging like that you have got to update sooner than later this is way to intense to stop now!!Please and thank you!!
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Reviewed By: Shippos_sister_Kuzume [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2007 15:11 CST
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zomg!! I loved this! It's amazing! -^^- very nice! Hope you update soon!
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2007 18:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another Uzumaki! OMFG! PLease I'm absoulutely Begging you to update now! PLEASE I NEED TO KNOW HOW EVERY BODY REACTS TO FINDING NARUTO"S REALTIVE! PLEASE UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 21:23 CST
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AHAHHHHHH! that was cool! I look forward to the next chapter/s!!!
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2007 18:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I really want you to write more stories like that. But dont stop this 1. UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2007 09:18 CST
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OMG! another Uzumiki ahhh cliffhanger! I hope Naruto doesnt get in alot of trouble that would suck! Thanks.
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