| "Mating Season" Reviews/Comments [ 621 ] |
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Title: OMG!!!!
Reviewed By: melf On: October 07, 2006 18:40 PDT
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omg!!!! what a cliffy. oh please please please update again soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2006 18:19 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I can't wait for the birth of their child. Update as soon as you can! I'll be waiting impatiently : )
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Reviewed By: Braden [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2006 18:07 PDT
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Argh! did you have to end it before we find out the sex of the baby?
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Reviewed By: Akina315 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2006 16:12 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That reminded me of a "Friends" episode when Rachael asked Ross to do that same thing so she could get the baby out of her. I find that funny. Akina315
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Title: baby!
Reviewed By: ashpea124 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2006 16:09 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yah the baby is coming*hopes its a girls*i cant wait plz update soon!
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2006 15:32 PDT
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ohhh the baby! i can't wait. after so much pain and healing it's time! will sango be there to help? will she really want to bear miroku's child when she hears kagome in labor?
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 13:12 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I'm glad everyone is better. Can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon please.
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Reviewed By: ladygeri [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 11:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yeah! It's good that every one is healed and healthy once more. Great touch adding Sesshoumaru's hair to the scabbard and the bow. I can't wait to see what you have planned for them next.
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Reviewed By: Crimson Reaver On: October 05, 2006 09:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well done once again! I'm suprised that Sesshoumaru offered his protection like that. Plesently suprised of course! Oh and if you're still taking votes I vote once again on a boy!
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Reviewed By: Nursie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2006 00:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to admit my eyes are very tired... It's almost three in the morning and I just finished the latest chapter having just started it this afternoon. (I had to take a break to feed my husband and son dinner... how annoying right! *LOL*) I am very impressed with your story telling abilities and I simply am dying to read the next chapter. With that said, I also wanted to comment on all the medical references you make. I am rather curious if you are in the health care field. I am a Licensed Practical Nurse and your knowledge of medicinal plant properties and actual surgical/noninvasive procedures is very accurate. When you had Kagome cauderize InuYasha's chest wound, I admit I didn't even think about that... I was thinking of things like steri strips and suture glue (You can use actual super glue in cuts and gashes in an emergency). The plant medicines and such are dead on... practically every prescription out there comes from some sort of plant or fungus. The Poppy plant which is where Morphine comes from kills pain, slows breathing and BP. It is also (and I'm not quite sure of this but during the era was used commonly by soldiers and such) native to the regional area. Anywho, I ramble... I was wondering if there were any other nursies/healthcare workers anime nutts hanging around here. In the end, VERY GOOD STORY!!! InuYasha and Full Metal Alchemist are my two favorites at the moment so I was pretty much glued (much to my husband's dismay) to the laptop ALL day and night. You are a talented writer, you take the time and research your storylines and you have a real concept/love for the characters/anime you write for. I would probably read anything you post... even your grocery list! Hugs Nursie
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Title: plz update
Reviewed By: ashpea124 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2006 12:43 PDT
Comment/Review:
plz update it is getting so intresting
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Title: Keep going
Reviewed By: niceone [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2006 14:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep this going got to know what hapoeneds in the next chapters
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Title: I Love This Story and this Chap!!!!
Reviewed By: ladida [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2006 13:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so fantastic, you have got me hooked on to this story! THe way you write this stays true to the characters and unravels a gripping plot at the same time! But please, stop with the cliffies! ahhhhhhhh. Way to go Kagome, mastering the Tetsaiga!(thanks for updating) =D
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Reviewed By: Crimson Reaver On: October 03, 2006 06:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutly incredible! It's so good it's like watching the actual show. Please update soon! Oh, and the baby should be a boy!
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 18:28 PDT
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What about the pup? is it a boy or a girl?~Cricket42
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