| "Mating Season" Reviews/Comments [ 621 ] |
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Reviewed By: yashamaru1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 15:55 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another magnificent chapter... you had me somewhat worried there when Inuyasha was bleeding alot... I like held my breath until it was over lol... but awsome chap again...laters
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: September 26, 2006 09:42 PDT
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Excellent chapter. I like how you have incorperated the medicine of today into this story of the past. As I was reading about all of this, I thought about a transfusion, but I didn't think of Myouga. (Kagura's reward was a HOOT, BTW) Once I did I was a little concerned about the possible blood thinning properties of flea spit....but then realized I just needed to shut up and enjoy the chapter. :) Thanks for the update on Sesshoumaru as well - I knew he'd gotten thumped pretty baddly. I wouldn't have wanted to be the one that had to replace each of the shattered bones in his legs. yeouch! Thanks for writing!
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Title: taishorin
Reviewed By: taishorin [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 07:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is an excellent fic. The development of the characters is pain stakingly detailed. Well done. I was hoping that Sesshoumaru would have been the one to donate blood, it would have given Inuyasha more of his Fathers blood and perhaps more respect from Sesshoumaru. It would have been ironic to hear what Sesshoumaru would have said in his thoughts to know he was actually keeping Inuyasha alive with his own blood! Anyway your story line is fine, keep up the good work! Taishorin
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 02:52 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter!! I amost cried for Inuyasha. Can't wait for the next one. Keep up the good work!!!
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Reviewed By: Too Cool For You On: September 24, 2006 20:36 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GIRL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and i cant wait for more lol
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Reviewed By: Life without Love On: September 24, 2006 20:35 PDT
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Great chapter loved it. and i vote for a girl... that is if the votes are still going... you said at 12 on the 24 ut i saw that people are still voting so heres mine.
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Title: it brought a tear to my eye
Reviewed By: h On: September 24, 2006 19:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of the best ANYTHING ive have ever read including george rr martin and garth nix, oh and by the way boy boy boy boy
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Reviewed By: Cricket42 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2006 11:12 PDT
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Great now i want to read the next chapter but it's not there i'm gunna go cry now.~Cricket42
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe at home On: September 24, 2006 09:51 PDT
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Vote for a girl
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Reviewed By: kt On: September 23, 2006 17:54 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GR!!!!! i HATE this cliffy! GRRR!!!! GR!!! *screams* no what happens please tell us! LOVIN the story!! and yeah i want it to be a boy but if htey have a girl all the more power to ya...GR please update soon...please?
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Reviewed By: inuyoukai nsi On: September 23, 2006 17:37 PDT
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AHHH!!! Nooo mah poor inu!!!! and boyboyboyboyboy!!! inu deserves a boy after all this!!!!
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Reviewed By: Caitriona695 On: September 23, 2006 14:58 PDT
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I'm glad that Inu woke up, but I am really not glad that he has started bleeding so horribly. Damn sun....why did it have to go down?
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Reviewed By: Taken By The Wind On: September 23, 2006 12:08 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! A cliff why a cliff?? PLease oh please update soon. And my vote is for a girl... Inu already has son in Shippo so i think he needs a daughter now.
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Reviewed By: critical eyes On: September 23, 2006 05:43 PDT
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I´m still voting for a boy with his fathers ears
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Reviewed By: Lil linjun On: September 22, 2006 23:09 PDT
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So, you are my addiction. There should be a ten step program. I'm totally in love with this story! Anyway, I vote for a little boy but either way the kid would be cute and a handful. Good job!
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