| "Vegeta and the Great Dating Adventure" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Title: awesome!
Reviewed By: mspotts [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 14:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
great story! i loved every second of it. it was really funny!
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Reviewed By: SaiyanBeauty On: March 14, 2003 16:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*judges hold up the perfect 10 signs*
Hello jb! Well i loved your story. This was great and Vegeta was absouluely halarious. Trunks was great too. ^_^ i have an obession over them both. Anyway I also read the pet adventure but didn't get a chance to review so hear we go! THe parrot was my favorite person! or well animal. Vegeta and animals..great combo for comedy. Your really good at this writing. And i could picture everything! You really have a spirit for writing about Vegeta. My reveiws are mostly ramblings for how much i love these stories.
mar has told me alot and i finally got around to reading some of ur stories. Well im off to read more and expect more reiews!
-Sb over and outtie
P.S. GO FUSION!! |
Reviewed By: Xorwais On: January 18, 2003 15:27 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiya :)
Great story really! I enjoyed reading..
But! I just beleef, for some unknown reason, that Veggie-chan never lies.. I dunno why.. mm..
heh :) Make a story 'bout Bra's next date kej?
Thanks for writing! |
Reviewed By: manga, the Awesome One in pigtails [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2002 09:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, there were some minor things, like "their" instead of "they're" and "except" instead of "accept," but they didn't take much away from the story. The story itself was cute and funny and I loved the characterizations! :) |
Reviewed By: Short Rochester [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2002 20:36 CDT
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Another wrong thing our beloved Vegeta has done where he came off scott-free! ^__^ lol!
sr |
Reviewed By: MajinMe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2002 19:22 CDT
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HE HE HE HE HE EHE HE EHE HE EH EH EHE EH EThat is SO hilarious! And to think, i have never read this story before . . . WHAT IS WRONG WITH ME????????? Now, if you'll excuse me, I have to go read some more of your fantastic writing . . . |
Reviewed By: Vampiric_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2002 06:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
So... Please tell me this "the End" Buisness is a joke... you know very well it cant be ( it just cant be) Goten is still alone, and i want to read about Vegeta kicking Trunks...snif, tell me more...please? |
Reviewed By: KiK On: May 27, 2002 13:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Evil Vegeta i love it mmmmmmm.... Crispy Vegeta*
stares off into space drooling*... i like all the breifs family but htius is one of the best ones i have read with bra |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2002 00:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
This was so funny! Poor Danny and Trunks. Trunks just can't seem to win for losing! He helps Vegeta out and gets in trouble, he doesn't and he gets it. Poor guy. I can't wait to read the next story on the list. I'm sure it'll be just as funny as the last two, and I know I'm going to love it, but I'll review anyway just to make you feel better. Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: chatcat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2002 16:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OHHHHH! I don't know why but i couldn't stop laughing when i read this! I like the popcorn throwing bit when he slaps trunks, hehehe! good, very good! write mooorrrreeeeee! |
Reviewed By: karak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2002 14:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another gem....I just cant get enough of Bulma being the master over Vegeta...ahh the horror of it all for the pour Sayin prince! Danny ... too bad! Well Jaded, you know that now we need to know how Goten and Bra are going to hook up so you have your work cut out for you! You are to good a writer to leave us hanging after this wonderfull tale...we want more more more i say!!! Muhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
so...now i am going to have to haunt you until i have more to read...i just cant live without any more...sorry! |
Reviewed By: Papa Bear On: February 19, 2002 21:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Trunks. This fic was wonderful. |
Reviewed By: Greybus [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2002 20:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great. I can't wait for the next great adventure... |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2002 11:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ROFLMBO, this was great! I can't wait for the next installment! Thank you, this makes my sick self feel better. Oh, a tip for you, if you skip school, don't lie and say you got the flu...you actually do get it. (sigh) Someday I may learn. Maybe Vegeta and I aren't totally hopeless cases, heh? ;)
So, no date with Danny again. Heh! Patheitc weakling. You know, I may have found a guy that could actually be 'not afraid' of my dad. Oh, happy day! And he likes DBZ too, a true rarity! (shudders) I gotta stop quoting Frieza.... |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 18, 2002 03:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bravo!! I loved this fic of yours. Poor Danny, I don't think he'll ever ask Bra out again. If he does I think Vegeta would give him the opportunity to find out if there is life after death-lol. Anyway, great story and I can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve (specially since it's gonna be one of my ideas ^_^). Peace |
Reviewed By: Firaga On: February 18, 2002 01:28 CST
Comment/Review:
woohoo! that was a cute story! i like these little vegeta adventures! :) its a start to a great series! i loved it!!! |
Reviewed By: karak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2002 16:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of my best loved writers. Very funny stories and reveiling a lot of Vegeta´s true nature. No saiyans turning soft and mushy on you...they are the worst in the universe and damn proud of it! All of the characters read like you know them personally. If akira ...(whats his name) needs any pointers this is what he would have to read. No negative comment except that it should be a hell of a lot longer! |
Reviewed By: Greybus [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2002 17:47 CST
Comment/Review:
...and better.... |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 13, 2002 03:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaaawwww, thanx for the compliment. I'm glad Danny decided to let common sense prevail. After all, he can't take out Bra again if he's dead. I have to wonder though, since Trunks didn't call his dad, what will Veggie do to Danny when he sees him? The possibilities make me sick to my stomach, so you'll have to take care of that little problem. Btw, thanx for updating so quickly. Whatever fic you decide to update next is fine with me. As always, great job. Peace |
Reviewed By: cosmicgoku On: February 12, 2002 23:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT!!! Please if it's not already done, post more very soon. |
Reviewed By: Greybus [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2002 14:46 CST
Comment/Review:
This just gets better and better... |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2002 22:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
(is holding back her laughter and shaking her heas) Idiot. Calling Vegeta that! I'm glad Vegeta got him just for that. He's cool that way.
Poor Danny. I almost feel sorry for him. Almost. He was warned that Vegeta was like that. Porr Bra. I can relate. I can't mention or let guys see my dad. It inevitably comes out that he's a brown belt in Judo and Karate and he's extremely good with a gun. Then they meet him, and it's 'Hasta la vista!' Heh, that's dad's for you. and look, Danny isn't even going to do anything and he's going to get fried. Hopefully Trunks finds him. Maybe (MAYBE) Trunks will be more--'understanding'. Vegeta definately wouldn't hold back. He never holds back. He's cool that way. lol |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 10, 2002 01:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chap. Lol-I guess Danny's desire to continue living outweighed the desire to molest Bra. Oh, and that mistaken identity couple-LOLLOL that was rich! Pls write more soon. Peace |
Reviewed By: Greybus [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2002 03:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It had started up slow, but it has already lived up to it's predecessor. This is definatley as good as Great Pet Adventure. Oh man, I especially love chapter 4. LMAO!!!! Ah jeez, messing with his mind like that. I can vividly picture this as an actual DBZ episode. Continue! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 31, 2002 01:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!! Poor Danny thought he was losing it and much to his disgust found out he wasn't. LOL! I can't wait to see what'll happen next. More!! |
Reviewed By: S.D.I. [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2002 01:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh-hoho, this is too funny. Nothing new in this review, but I thought I'd add my praise too. ^^ |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2002 21:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ROFLMBO! Oh, Trunks and Vegeta finally pair up on something! They make such a good team (or is that bad? lol) This was hilarious! I love them tormenting Danny. Although, I think if Bra doesn't want what Danny's going to give her, he'll have nothing to worry about from her father or brother. (sigh) Have Vegeta and Trunks forgotten that she's demi-Saiyan too? She'll kick his skrauny butt! lol |
Reviewed By: Papa Bear On: January 30, 2002 14:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait to see what else Vegeta has up his sleeve. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 30, 2002 00:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ROFLMAO!!! I think Danny's in deep shit. He better be careful or he'll find more than just 10 fingers missing-LOL!! WRITE MORE, MORE, MORE!! |
Reviewed By: cosmicgoku On: January 27, 2002 19:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is so good it was mean what Vegeta did please make that part of the story good later but as for Bra, make it exciting |
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