| "Vegeta and the Great Dating Adventure" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jay On: January 27, 2002 09:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a cute fic. I really enjoyed it, although I felt that Bulma should've gotten more 'pissed' at Vegeta for tricking her! :) It might be a good lesson for him if Bulma runs into Yamcha and decides that a date sounds good after all. ^_^ That would definitely teach Vegeta to keep an eye on Bulma instead of Bra!! :) Good story. I will look forward to the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Firaga On: January 27, 2002 03:29 CST
Comment/Review:
UGH! vegeta is so eeeeeeeeevil!!! ooh he's not going to like the fact that this palmer has "plans"!!! man, if i was bulma i would punish him and be abstinent for a week! mwaha! (but he's so sexy, i'd make it a day...if i could stand it!) great chap.!! |
Reviewed By: Greybus [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2002 22:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hehe, Vegeta's in deep! Keep going! MORE! MORE! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 26, 2002 04:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is ssssooooo funny. Bulma is on to Veggie and now Trunks has been called to action-lollol. I hope that for Danny's sake his later plans are sharing a soda with Bra, b/c if that's not the case he's gonna have to learn how to hold a fork with his toes (hehe). Poor Bra. Great stuff. Write more. Peace |
Reviewed By: Greybus [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2002 01:38 CST
Comment/Review:
You have me enthralled by the story. Pleaz continue! |
Reviewed By: christabeleve On: January 24, 2002 10:20 CST
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Love it, more please. I can not wait until the dinner scene. |
Reviewed By: Firaga [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2002 06:57 CST
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MWAHA!!!!! OH MAN! the look of pure agony my ex-boyfriend sent me after being interrogated on MY first date must've looked like Danny's!!! hahaha Vegeta is sooo cruel! :) i love it! this is such a cute story! uh oh, when bulma finds out their little "dinner" had no romantic intention whatsoever, she'll give him an earful! keep it up! more, por favor! :) |
Reviewed By: Sazza On: January 24, 2002 05:54 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm back to review this chapter now! *cackles* I loved it! I can so see Vegeta doing something like that! Love this! Keep it up! ^_^ Oohh, and I saw my name! woo! I'm famous! lol |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 24, 2002 03:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOLLOL too funny. Those two remind me of my dad and bro. I can't imagine that boy's fear when Veggie described what they would do to his hands. I think in Danny's case leaving home with clean underware wouldn't have made a difference (hehe). |
Reviewed By: Sazza On: January 23, 2002 07:35 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh this was good, I'm not to good with the rating thing so I left that..O.O
But yeah, this story has had me cracking up left right and centre...*sighs* Sounds like my dad and my brother ;_; (Brother: Oh and just one more thing, p*** about with my sister and I'll rip your head off! ^_^ Nice to meet you!" That happened *sighs again*)
But yes, hurry up and continue this story!!! I need more! I wanna see how Veggie and Trunks deal with a certain boyfriend! (can't be any worse than my family....oh wait, they're saiyans, yes it can!) |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 23, 2002 03:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh No!! Don't let Vegeta Final Flash that poor boy. I feel sorry for the kid. Trunks has a big mouth. |
Reviewed By: Greybus [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2002 04:08 CST
Comment/Review:
*sniff* Wow! I make a difference! I didn't rate it yet cuz it hasn't really developed yet, but it looks really promising. Pleaz cointinue this ASAP! I mourn the loss of Little Vegeta. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 21, 2002 23:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have a feeling that a certain father is thoroughly pissed off and there's nada he can do about it (hehe). I'm sure he's gonna have something up his sleeve to make the young man wish he'd never met Bra. Write more! |
Reviewed By: jessbear [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2002 20:25 CST
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CONTINUE PWEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Greybus [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2002 22:42 CST
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Continue whenever you can. I can't wait to see what insane thing Vegeta tries to do to scare away teh boy. Hehe, if you are short of ideas, you could make teh guy be wearing the usual set of baggy pants with his underwear sticking out and a shirt that goes down to his knees. Even better, you could make him a different race. Vegeta strikes me as the racist type (even though he isn't really a white guy considering he isn't human). |
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