| "Vegeta and the Great Dating Adventure" Reviews/Comments [ 45 ] |
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Reviewed By: Firaga On: February 18, 2002 01:28 CST
Comment/Review:
woohoo! that was a cute story! i like these little vegeta adventures! :) its a start to a great series! i loved it!!! |
Reviewed By: karak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2002 16:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of my best loved writers. Very funny stories and reveiling a lot of Vegeta´s true nature. No saiyans turning soft and mushy on you...they are the worst in the universe and damn proud of it! All of the characters read like you know them personally. If akira ...(whats his name) needs any pointers this is what he would have to read. No negative comment except that it should be a hell of a lot longer! |
Reviewed By: Greybus [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2002 17:47 CST
Comment/Review:
...and better.... |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 13, 2002 03:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaaawwww, thanx for the compliment. I'm glad Danny decided to let common sense prevail. After all, he can't take out Bra again if he's dead. I have to wonder though, since Trunks didn't call his dad, what will Veggie do to Danny when he sees him? The possibilities make me sick to my stomach, so you'll have to take care of that little problem. Btw, thanx for updating so quickly. Whatever fic you decide to update next is fine with me. As always, great job. Peace |
Reviewed By: cosmicgoku On: February 12, 2002 23:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT!!! Please if it's not already done, post more very soon. |
Reviewed By: Greybus [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2002 14:46 CST
Comment/Review:
This just gets better and better... |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2002 22:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
(is holding back her laughter and shaking her heas) Idiot. Calling Vegeta that! I'm glad Vegeta got him just for that. He's cool that way.
Poor Danny. I almost feel sorry for him. Almost. He was warned that Vegeta was like that. Porr Bra. I can relate. I can't mention or let guys see my dad. It inevitably comes out that he's a brown belt in Judo and Karate and he's extremely good with a gun. Then they meet him, and it's 'Hasta la vista!' Heh, that's dad's for you. and look, Danny isn't even going to do anything and he's going to get fried. Hopefully Trunks finds him. Maybe (MAYBE) Trunks will be more--'understanding'. Vegeta definately wouldn't hold back. He never holds back. He's cool that way. lol |
Reviewed By: Susan On: February 10, 2002 01:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chap. Lol-I guess Danny's desire to continue living outweighed the desire to molest Bra. Oh, and that mistaken identity couple-LOLLOL that was rich! Pls write more soon. Peace |
Reviewed By: Greybus [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2002 03:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It had started up slow, but it has already lived up to it's predecessor. This is definatley as good as Great Pet Adventure. Oh man, I especially love chapter 4. LMAO!!!! Ah jeez, messing with his mind like that. I can vividly picture this as an actual DBZ episode. Continue! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 31, 2002 01:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!! Poor Danny thought he was losing it and much to his disgust found out he wasn't. LOL! I can't wait to see what'll happen next. More!! |
Reviewed By: S.D.I. [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2002 01:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh-hoho, this is too funny. Nothing new in this review, but I thought I'd add my praise too. ^^ |
Reviewed By: Kahlan Nightwing [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2002 21:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ROFLMBO! Oh, Trunks and Vegeta finally pair up on something! They make such a good team (or is that bad? lol) This was hilarious! I love them tormenting Danny. Although, I think if Bra doesn't want what Danny's going to give her, he'll have nothing to worry about from her father or brother. (sigh) Have Vegeta and Trunks forgotten that she's demi-Saiyan too? She'll kick his skrauny butt! lol |
Reviewed By: Papa Bear On: January 30, 2002 14:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait to see what else Vegeta has up his sleeve. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 30, 2002 00:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ROFLMAO!!! I think Danny's in deep shit. He better be careful or he'll find more than just 10 fingers missing-LOL!! WRITE MORE, MORE, MORE!! |
Reviewed By: cosmicgoku On: January 27, 2002 19:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is so good it was mean what Vegeta did please make that part of the story good later but as for Bra, make it exciting |
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