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Reviewed By: Firestorm_244 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2003 06:58 CDT
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Actually, there was no deeper meaning behind the room number. My sister's birthday's coming up and the date is the 13th. So, while thinking about this, I just threw in number thirteen. But the what you said was interesting and I'll keep that in mind. |
Reviewed By: LSR_7 On: May 06, 2003 00:19 CDT
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I'm glad to finally see an update to this story! Yipeeee!
Was their room #13 for a purpose? If it's meant to be bad luck the #4 is bad luck in Japan. The reason is (I still don't know why 13 is bad luck in our culture) is that even though the Chinese characters are different you call them the same thing. In Japanese "shi" means "death", but it also is "four". This is why when you buy a set of something like plates, chopstick rests, cups etc. you buy them in fives.
Anyways, liked the chapter and I do agree that it was a bit abrupt, but that's okay. |
Reviewed By: Moonlight Sonata On: March 12, 2003 18:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
drats -.- the next chappie ain't here either ... Mou!!! When are ya gunna update x.x WWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!! I WANT THE NEXT CHAPPIE *sniffle* c.c please continue soon...onegai ^^ |
Reviewed By: goukanomegami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 10:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
meow! very original, I like the story a lot, very tasteful lemon. :) |
Reviewed By: bishlov On: January 27, 2003 01:29 CST
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Once upon a time there was an author who got tired of a certain fan fiction site and was browsing another. Then one day she found a fic that she liked so well in this new site...
Hehehe ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Lucy On: January 08, 2003 23:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great you are so good. Write more |
Reviewed By: Trixie-chan On: January 04, 2003 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful!! XD VERY good, can't wait for more! ;) Here's a suggestion though: You should write an Umi/Clef lemon. XD That is, if you like them together, I kinda got the feeling that you did when I read the last chapter. :) Just a suggestion. :D Anyway, again, GREAT fic! I love it to pieces!
- Trixie-chan |
Reviewed By: Trixie-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2002 01:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ack! That was absolutely fantabulous! XD I've only read a few Hikaru/Lantis lemons (there's so few out there... :'( ), but this is definately the best. SO GREAT! Can't wait till I write mine now. ;) Currently in the works. ^_^ Great! Can't wait to read the rest, but it'll have to wait for... well... later this morning (it's 1:45 AM...). :) Great job!
- Trixie-chan |
Reviewed By: Moonlight Sonata On: December 20, 2002 18:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sigh* as I said before one of the greatest stories in the world ^^ I like reading it ^^ don't forget to add the latter chappies now ^^, also mesa like your site ^^ |
Reviewed By: LSR_7 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2002 01:08 CST
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YAY! Finally, another chapter! Not as light-hearted as the last, but still great if not as long. :-( Oh well, I'm just glad that you finally posted another chapter.
Just a quick note about riding horses, if the horse was trained well enough just squeezing him with your legs should be enough to get him going, but of course it's more dramatic if you kicked and snapped your reins. Anyways, just wanted to say that since I ride horses.
More please! |
Reviewed By: Anime On: July 12, 2002 01:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What can i say?! I LOVE IT I want more! please! Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: someone On: June 30, 2002 14:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's Good! |
Reviewed By: Anime Girl On: June 20, 2002 02:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!! I love lantis and hikaru. Please hurry with the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Kimi On: April 12, 2002 17:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn you're good!!!
Imagine if Umi walked in...oooooo!
Umi: Hikaru you didn't even use protection!!
*Umi cries*
Hehehe Xx
sorry a lil hyper...put up another chapter ^^ |
Reviewed By: alex moon On: April 07, 2002 04:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it,you must finish it.And please hurry |
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