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Reviewed By: CallMeKit On: February 14, 2005 15:43 CST
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aah! you've finally updated! Wonderful! please continue!! ^-^ -CMK
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Reviewed By: FireCat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 18:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*grins* how can you not love this fic? keep up the good work, i can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: domozhirova221 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2004 21:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Beautiful! Simply and utterly! I loved it very much! Much loveness in the room here people! I was hypnotized in every chapter! ^__~
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Reviewed By: Clowdana On: May 20, 2004 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Hikaru & Lantis lemons!! I really hope you'll finish the fic soon!! Please!
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Reviewed By: Tinker05 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2004 02:38 CDT
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I love this fic, please keep writing. I can't wait to find out more about Hikaru and Lantis. Plus, what will happen with Umi and Fuu. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Tinker05 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2004 02:37 CDT
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I love this fic, please keep writing. I can't wait to find out more about Hikaru and Lantis. Plus, what will happen with Umi and Fuu. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Medatsu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 14:11 CDT
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I liked that you reviewed...Im one of your reviewers from Fanfiction.net...Anyways I liked it and hopefully you'll review sooner than last time ...lol
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2004 19:44 CDT
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Me like! ^_^ You're gonna continue writing, right? Cause this is really good! And I am yet another person who thinks you should write an Umi/Clef lemon, as well as adding a Fuu/Ferio lemon in the future. The near future I hope. Anyway, update soon please!
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Reviewed By: LSR_7 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 18:55 CST
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Been a while, maybe a year since the last time I read this story. I liked how Selece popped up like that. I hope to see more.
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Reviewed By: LSR_7 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 18:55 CST
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Been a while, maybe a year since the last time I read this story. I liked how Selece popped up like that. I hope to see more.
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Reviewed By: mickydrpepper14 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this fanfic is great. I just love it! I hope you update veeeeeeeeeeeeery soon.
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Reviewed By: Corwalch On: October 02, 2003 04:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ur story is so interesting could u continue writing it?
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Reviewed By: Inferno_66 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 11:57 CDT
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I like the whole reality kind of thing you got going. I mean, frenz would be happy, but they'd also worry. . . A lot. And no one can go through a "perfect" relationship. Fights often occur. BTW, I think Umi should have some 'fun' with Clef. Then I'm pretty sure she'll understand why Hikaru likes Lantis so much. . . heh heh heh. Besides, I think they make a great couple. *holds up a Clef&Umi flag* Go Clef and Umi!! |
Reviewed By: *questor* On: June 09, 2003 03:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think it is really good! the story flows smoothly and the plot rocks!! not just because of the lemons.
there is this slight tension that makes u wonder wat if more ppl knew what happened between lantis and hikaru. what will happen, will the laws bend, what about hikaru's home, how are they really gonna have a relationship and so much more!!
i like this story alot! it just has so many possiblities!
keep writing and stay healthy!!! |
Reviewed By: warnerbros123 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2003 09:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue the chapter this story is the best fan-fic i've ever read please continue..... |
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