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Reviewed By: Tasty Poizon On: April 01, 2002 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, you must finish it! Or atleast put up the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: Grey Fox On: March 16, 2002 19:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well now, that first chapter was quite a good H+L lemon if I do say so myself. A lot of grammatical errors but that's forgivable with a good story like this. Also of note was the way in which Nova was involved......you made her spooky and disturbing as ever. And the way you wrote the sex scene was well done, better than a lot of other crap floating around these days. Continue with the great work. |
Reviewed By: Tasty Poizon On: April 09, 2002 15:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I commented before, but PLEASE,PLEASE!! put up the next chapter!!! |
Reviewed By: beautiful On: May 31, 2002 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is so cooooool! please continue this fanfic pretttyyyy please ok so continue writing this story i'll be upset if yoou don't k so goodluck oh let me rephrase tha veeeeeeeeeeeery vvvvvvvvveeeeeeeerrrrrrrryyyyyy UPSET!!!!! |
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