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Reviewed By: Tinker05 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2004 02:38 CDT
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I love this fic, please keep writing. I can't wait to find out more about Hikaru and Lantis. Plus, what will happen with Umi and Fuu. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Tinker05 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2004 02:37 CDT
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I love this fic, please keep writing. I can't wait to find out more about Hikaru and Lantis. Plus, what will happen with Umi and Fuu. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Medatsu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 14:11 CDT
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I liked that you reviewed...Im one of your reviewers from Fanfiction.net...Anyways I liked it and hopefully you'll review sooner than last time ...lol
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2004 19:44 CDT
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Me like! ^_^ You're gonna continue writing, right? Cause this is really good! And I am yet another person who thinks you should write an Umi/Clef lemon, as well as adding a Fuu/Ferio lemon in the future. The near future I hope. Anyway, update soon please!
soon |
Reviewed By: LSR_7 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 18:55 CST
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Been a while, maybe a year since the last time I read this story. I liked how Selece popped up like that. I hope to see more.
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Reviewed By: LSR_7 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2004 18:55 CST
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Been a while, maybe a year since the last time I read this story. I liked how Selece popped up like that. I hope to see more.
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Reviewed By: mickydrpepper14 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this fanfic is great. I just love it! I hope you update veeeeeeeeeeeeery soon.
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Reviewed By: Corwalch On: October 02, 2003 04:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ur story is so interesting could u continue writing it?
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Reviewed By: Inferno_66 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 11:57 CDT
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I like the whole reality kind of thing you got going. I mean, frenz would be happy, but they'd also worry. . . A lot. And no one can go through a "perfect" relationship. Fights often occur. BTW, I think Umi should have some 'fun' with Clef. Then I'm pretty sure she'll understand why Hikaru likes Lantis so much. . . heh heh heh. Besides, I think they make a great couple. *holds up a Clef&Umi flag* Go Clef and Umi!! |
Reviewed By: *questor* On: June 09, 2003 03:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think it is really good! the story flows smoothly and the plot rocks!! not just because of the lemons.
there is this slight tension that makes u wonder wat if more ppl knew what happened between lantis and hikaru. what will happen, will the laws bend, what about hikaru's home, how are they really gonna have a relationship and so much more!!
i like this story alot! it just has so many possiblities!
keep writing and stay healthy!!! |
Reviewed By: warnerbros123 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2003 09:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please continue the chapter this story is the best fan-fic i've ever read please continue..... |
Reviewed By: Firestorm_244 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2003 06:58 CDT
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Actually, there was no deeper meaning behind the room number. My sister's birthday's coming up and the date is the 13th. So, while thinking about this, I just threw in number thirteen. But the what you said was interesting and I'll keep that in mind. |
Reviewed By: LSR_7 On: May 06, 2003 00:19 CDT
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I'm glad to finally see an update to this story! Yipeeee!
Was their room #13 for a purpose? If it's meant to be bad luck the #4 is bad luck in Japan. The reason is (I still don't know why 13 is bad luck in our culture) is that even though the Chinese characters are different you call them the same thing. In Japanese "shi" means "death", but it also is "four". This is why when you buy a set of something like plates, chopstick rests, cups etc. you buy them in fives.
Anyways, liked the chapter and I do agree that it was a bit abrupt, but that's okay. |
Reviewed By: Moonlight Sonata On: March 12, 2003 18:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
drats -.- the next chappie ain't here either ... Mou!!! When are ya gunna update x.x WWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!! I WANT THE NEXT CHAPPIE *sniffle* c.c please continue soon...onegai ^^ |
Reviewed By: goukanomegami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2003 10:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
meow! very original, I like the story a lot, very tasteful lemon. :) |
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