| "The Hits Keep Coming" Reviews/Comments [ 143 ] |
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Reviewed By: red-queen On: November 06, 2005 12:18 CST
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awwwwwwwww!! aya's such a big softie. i love the image of him carrying an invalid yohji to bed. well, i love the image of him carrying a healthy yohji to bed too, but that's neither here nor there. i'm glad you're still updating this story. hmm...i wonder if they have candystripers in japan? probably not, if the family is expected to change linens and so forth. i was just thinking aya would be cute as a candystriper. a surly, grouchy, embarassed-to-be-a-candystriper. maybe, in several years when i'm done with your fanart, i'll draw that. anyway, very sweet chapter. love, redqueen
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 12:12 CST
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I love your sweet, prickly Ran. And Yohji being a whiney baby. And I agree, I think Ran would learn all sorts of nursing skills to help his sister.
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Reviewed By: mm-chan On: November 06, 2005 09:35 CST
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aya's so sweet :)
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Title: So sweet
Reviewed By: Jem50 On: November 06, 2005 07:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
These last few chapters have been so sweet, but the last one takes the cake. Nurse Aya:)
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2005 23:57 CST
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Wow am I glad I don't live in Japan. Bedside manner is not my strong suit. That is really sweet of Aya though. Does this mean Yohji is a family member?
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Reviewed By: Blythe On: November 02, 2005 09:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great to see an AxY that still sounds new & fresh. Love your style, varied vocabulry, excellent grammar. Also love the characterizations, really captured them well. More, please!
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Reviewed By: Sancta On: October 14, 2005 08:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your work!
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Reviewed By: CandyStrippers On: October 10, 2005 17:59 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This is so hilarious!! I love what goes on in Yohji's head. I also enjoy the tiny sprinkle of angst here and there. Now if you can just write faster... :)
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 17:46 CDT
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i liked your last shades update.....i like all your updates.....i was feeling most impressed that you were updating so many simultaneously....and now you are stopping :(
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Reviewed By: RedQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 17:09 CDT
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'S good stuff. aya's so adorable, being all gruff and compassionate and considerate at the same time. it'll be fun when he finally cracks. it's so interesting that, in almost every someonexaya story i've read the goal is to break aya in some way. even if it's just 'crack the icy facade'. his personality lends itself to that, sure. well, sometimes it's 'melting' him, which i guess is gentler or something...anyway, i'm just ruminating. has it really been 9 weeks for shades? seems like longer. maybe i'm thinking back to 'nothing ventured'. you and schu are unappreciated? *hugs you* *does unspeakably perverted things to schuldig and give him a cigarette after* hope that's better. love, redqueen
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Reviewed By: Ann99 On: October 09, 2005 14:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!! This is such a cool story, i'M reading Shades too - damn I just can't get enough. please write more soon! =)
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Title: love
Reviewed By: AJ aka mangachild420 On: October 09, 2005 13:56 CDT
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i still love it. i just can't stop reading it!!
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 12:17 CDT
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Never said I didn't like Shades, dear. Just asked you not to kill Schu. This one is so entertaining. watching Yohji angst and Aya be, well, Aya is always amusing. Now let's see if this blasted thing lets me upload it.
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Reviewed By: bewsbud [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2005 11:36 CDT
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I just adore your sarcastic Yohji!
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2005 07:58 CDT
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sooo that was mean *pouts* how could you point out my yotan to me on a lifesize poster and i can't have it. Although if i was able to afford it I think my mom would march me straight to a psychologist as soon as she saw it, but still....oh yeah liked the chappie (grin) just got sidetracked by my yotan
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