| "The Hits Keep Coming" Reviews/Comments [ 143 ] |
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Title: impatient
Reviewed By: Miss Macabre : p On: December 25, 2005 22:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ive been reading all of your fanfics, but now i am impatient for updates...you have created a monster!! (^_^) *leaves assorted cookies and chocolate*
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Reviewed By: potatofreak [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2005 18:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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make aya lose control!!!! yotan charm has got to unbalance him XD and more yaoi plz!!!!!!! i wouldn't mind a little rope plays *hinthint*
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Reviewed By: red queen On: December 09, 2005 00:32 CST
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ooo. i liked this chapter! yohji so caught up in making out with aya that he doesn't even realize he's on top of him...heh. so aya just left to put on the latex thigh-highs and clover clamps and to get the sawhorse, cuffs and paddles, right? --love, RQ
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Reviewed By: gothria [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 01:56 CST
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eeeeeee! sooooo goooood! X3 poor yotan, always seeming to be abused ^~ keep writing! it's good! *gives you cookes* =^^=
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Reviewed By: soxy On: December 06, 2005 23:21 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Arg! I'm sorry yahoo was being a b**** that night to me for some unknown reason, and then I forgot ::puppy dog eyes:: but I am joining right this very second... well sort of, after I finish typing anyway. Great chapter, and Aya and Yohji are getting somewhere, kind of (does happy dance). Anyway can't wait for more... oh and by the way at yahoo I'll be under theothersoxykat. So yea anyways Update Soon!!!
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Title: first
Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 20:40 CST
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OK, I know it doesn't really count since the chibi is studying for finals, but I got to be first today! And I read it! (creepy, but the first part of the spam code is my initials!)
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 20:39 CST
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Hmmm. Aya being a pissy bastard. Imagine that. Lovely as always dear.
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 20:37 CST
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Thank you, darling! Of course, I love it! But, honestly, Aya has got to mellow! I hope Yohji can help him with that and that when he returns, it's not for the other pointy thing in the bed! *grin*
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Reviewed By: soxy On: November 27, 2005 14:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh so Yohji is figuring things out... and with a concussion too. I can't wait for the next part, you know with the chance to nag you I think I will join your group... you've convinced me. Well anyway great writing as always and Update Soon!!! (I'll also come nag you at your group... blame yourself you gave me the idea) -soxy
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Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 19:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Always wonderful to see Yohji using his detective skills. So delightful in every way -- a perfect mix of warmth and humor, without losing the underlying pain of who they are and from what they do.
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 18:42 CST
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A little sad that the only Aya is a sleeping Aya, but I'm sure that'll change soon. I just hope he wakes warm and happy, of course, I won't hold my breath. Anyway, another wonderful chapter. And, while I know you don't want a fic that never ends, I'm really enjoying this and look forward to many more chapters. SOON!
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Reviewed By: the chibi On: November 23, 2005 16:28 CST
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why am i not surprised aya sleeps with his sword? btw i love how aya grumbles in his sleep about yohji waking him up
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2005 16:18 CST
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Woohoo! Aya sleeping with the sword is incredibly appropriate. Hope you're feeling better. Love it as always.
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Reviewed By: potatofreak [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 19:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
aww... yotan is SO adorable when he's hurt.. :3 more plz!! ~ycpss~ http://yaoi.y-gallery.net/user/ycpss/
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 14:36 CST
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It just keeps getting better! It really is nice to see a kinder, gentler side of Aya, but still have it be believable. Lovely chapter. Hope you catch up on your sleep so that you can write more!
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