| "Disappearing Act" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2005 23:11 CDT
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brilliant as always! i'm really getting into this. especially since there is some jealousy going on. love triangles are always fun. poor touma, i think.
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 15:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
phew! that was close. for a second there, i almost thought you would let touma have his way with ryu. i knew there was more to ryu underneath the innocent facade. you do such a great job with these characters and their personalities. i luv tatsuha! HOT. i want to see more. soon. please. ^_^ p.s. does it seem to you that touma is always horny for people who don't return his feelings?...except for mika. thats just what i think. poor guy. oh well, thanx.
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2005 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
daaayum. i swear it's gotten atleast 10 degrees hotter in here since i started reading this fic! great job. please update when you can. very well written. your writing flows so well, i lose myself in it. i get so caught up that i keep scrolling down after the chap is finished wondering why the words have stopped. then i realize that its over. too good for words!!
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Reviewed By: Renchio [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2005 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome fic! i love it! and you know i do! you are an awesome writer! wooooohoooooo Yay to Ryu/Tats pairing i love ya!
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