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Title: I LOVE YOU!!
Reviewed By: Mizuko Sohma [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2006 18:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful story! I have been reading this for months and i have finally reviewed. YAY! You are a splendid writer, just simply amazing. Especailly that "Tohma Ownage" , as I like to call it, in chapter 14. Noone ever tells Tohma off, ever. Cause their all bitch-scared of him but Yuki *claps for him* finally said all the things I said while reading this fic. It's about time someone bought him right back down to "earth" where all us other citizens reside instead of being in "Tohma Land" where he controls everything (or so he thought). Despite all that I still love Tohma but who doesn't, but he is still crazy as hell. ^_^ PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Rayne_falls On: April 30, 2006 07:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are an amazing writer! I love this story, but Touma needs to be pushed off a cliff! Don't touch Ryu, You jerk! He's Tats'!!!! But, seriously, you rock at writing this! Update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: leila-chan* nsi On: April 27, 2006 11:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry i've been mia. i hope suguru loosen's up enough to let hiro get close. i rolled at shuu having to ride in a taxi passed out. hahaha. the whole touma thing wih ryu is sad. i hope ryu can be happy.... with tatsuha!!
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 11:08 CDT
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HiroSuguru is so cute! Touma should be SHOT!
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 22:29 CDT
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Touma is fucked up! The stupid asshole!
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Reviewed By: Water Sprite [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 14:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wa!! I've been reading this fic for a while and only recently got the chence to reivew. So, here goes: I love the story line you've got going here! The characters-- extremely believable. The plot-- a loveable twist of something already done a few times, but still refreshing and new in it's own way... Just one question... Are Hiro and Suguru going to get together? KYA!! I hope so!!! Keep writing!
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Title: Chapter 11
Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 14:15 CST
Comment/Review:
oh bad Shuu teasing fujisaki! ah oh run away Tats and Ryu, Tohma's coming
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Reviewed By: BakaYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 22:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Just wanted to say hi over here, since I've been reviewing for you on Gurabiteshiyon.net. I love this story soooo much and this latest chapter was uber fantastico! Bravo and keep up the awsome work! ~Bakayasha
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Title: Chapter 10
Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 16:44 CST
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hmph No one deserves to be a replacement damnit!
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Title: Chapter 10
Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 16:31 CST
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well damn Tohma was using Ryuichi as a replacement for Yuki? I bet that's the reason why Ryuichi reacted the way he did when Tatsuha said this: "You," he panted. "I want you, Ryuichi." 'cuz when Ryuichi had sex with Tohma, Tohma didn't really want him, he wanted Yuki. YAY! Ryuichi has some one who wants him!
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 04:31 CST
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hm why is he hiding it from her?
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 04:59 CST
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oh Tatsuha is getting his dream Ryuichi
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2006 20:49 CST
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oh that was HOT
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2005 11:13 CST
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you make yuki so sweet! well, as sweet as he can get without it being ooc. ; ) shuu is exactly what he needs. thanx for throwing them in there once again. i tried to review yesterday, but m.m. was being one difficult b*tch. sorry, and i hope to see some more ryu/tats soon... or whoever you decide to write about. you rock!!
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 15:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor mika. it Was angsty, but not boring! i loved the "tender" bondage scene. can't get enough of ryu/tats.
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