| "Disappearing Act" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 22:29 CDT
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Touma is fucked up! The stupid asshole!
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Reviewed By: Water Sprite [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 14:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wa!! I've been reading this fic for a while and only recently got the chence to reivew. So, here goes: I love the story line you've got going here! The characters-- extremely believable. The plot-- a loveable twist of something already done a few times, but still refreshing and new in it's own way... Just one question... Are Hiro and Suguru going to get together? KYA!! I hope so!!! Keep writing!
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Title: Chapter 11
Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 14:15 CST
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oh bad Shuu teasing fujisaki! ah oh run away Tats and Ryu, Tohma's coming
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Reviewed By: BakaYasha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 22:00 CST
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Just wanted to say hi over here, since I've been reviewing for you on Gurabiteshiyon.net. I love this story soooo much and this latest chapter was uber fantastico! Bravo and keep up the awsome work! ~Bakayasha
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Title: Chapter 10
Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 16:44 CST
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hmph No one deserves to be a replacement damnit!
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Title: Chapter 10
Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 16:31 CST
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well damn Tohma was using Ryuichi as a replacement for Yuki? I bet that's the reason why Ryuichi reacted the way he did when Tatsuha said this: "You," he panted. "I want you, Ryuichi." 'cuz when Ryuichi had sex with Tohma, Tohma didn't really want him, he wanted Yuki. YAY! Ryuichi has some one who wants him!
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2006 04:31 CST
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hm why is he hiding it from her?
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 04:59 CST
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oh Tatsuha is getting his dream Ryuichi
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2006 20:49 CST
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oh that was HOT
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2005 11:13 CST
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you make yuki so sweet! well, as sweet as he can get without it being ooc. ; ) shuu is exactly what he needs. thanx for throwing them in there once again. i tried to review yesterday, but m.m. was being one difficult b*tch. sorry, and i hope to see some more ryu/tats soon... or whoever you decide to write about. you rock!!
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2005 15:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor mika. it Was angsty, but not boring! i loved the "tender" bondage scene. can't get enough of ryu/tats.
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2005 23:11 CDT
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brilliant as always! i'm really getting into this. especially since there is some jealousy going on. love triangles are always fun. poor touma, i think.
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2005 15:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
phew! that was close. for a second there, i almost thought you would let touma have his way with ryu. i knew there was more to ryu underneath the innocent facade. you do such a great job with these characters and their personalities. i luv tatsuha! HOT. i want to see more. soon. please. ^_^ p.s. does it seem to you that touma is always horny for people who don't return his feelings?...except for mika. thats just what i think. poor guy. oh well, thanx.
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Reviewed By: leila-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2005 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
daaayum. i swear it's gotten atleast 10 degrees hotter in here since i started reading this fic! great job. please update when you can. very well written. your writing flows so well, i lose myself in it. i get so caught up that i keep scrolling down after the chap is finished wondering why the words have stopped. then i realize that its over. too good for words!!
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Reviewed By: Renchio [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2005 21:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome fic! i love it! and you know i do! you are an awesome writer! wooooohoooooo Yay to Ryu/Tats pairing i love ya!
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