| "Disappearing Act" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: narinari [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2006 20:23 CDT
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oh i love this story so much it makes me heart go pitter patter i cant wait to read the epilogue!
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Title: Chapter 17
Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2006 02:32 CDT
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hahaha GO Yuki! oh hot yummy! Touma needs to get help either way. err.. geez make up mind. *glup* Shuuichi stop butting in. haha GO Yuki that was awesome! hehe Sakano still actually cared.
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Title: Hiro and Fujisaki
Reviewed By: Biya On: September 01, 2006 06:56 CDT
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you tatally rock the only thing I have to conment on is that you did a s e x scean 4 every cuppel Except Hiro and Fujisaki and I really think you should but it was great by by
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Title: next chap plez
Reviewed By: Lameass On: August 29, 2006 05:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so good you have to wright the next chap soon, at frist I never saw Hiro and Fugasake(i know i hav not spelt it right) as a cuppel but as i read now i love the i dear plez update soon it rocks Thanks
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Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar (nli) On: August 22, 2006 18:21 CDT
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... Why have I not reviewed this so far? O__O Where has my mind been?? Anyways... five lemons!!! WHOOT!! I love how your chapters are always so long, because that means tons always happens! I want Touma to have his happy ending too, he has a permanent place in my heart... poor poor Touma... T_T I'll love you still!!! I personally could never forget that line of Suguru's, about age not stopping Touma.. *snicker* I laughed my ass off. ^___^ And I could never foret Touma coming onto Suguru, because that's one of my more favored pairings.. hmm... There was so much I adored about this, I'll admit I'm a little sad to see it end. But overall this was a good place to end, and I'll look forward to the epilouge!
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Title: Chapter 16
Reviewed By: evanescencefreak14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2006 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I LOVE UR FAN FIC! U MUST WRITE MORE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE! I LOVE IT SOOOOOO MUCH! But not so much where we are at though. because of all the "drama" but the Yaoi in the OTHER chapters before was greatness ^^
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Reviewed By: ChildofLight 051 Kiraya [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 21:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
So, anyways, this review is a few chapters too late, but this is bugging me... The alcohol limit is 0.15? Where is that? 'Cause where I live, you get in major trouble if your alcohol level is more than .08! I just think that's a bit weird. Lol. Great story!
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Title: All Chapters
Reviewed By: Fireangel19400 On: May 24, 2006 01:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^-^!!! I loved all of this so far!!! My eyes were literly bugging out when I read the lemons. Wow. You're really, really a talented writer!! And your editors as well!! ^-^ Good job!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!! And the sequal!! Hehehe. I want a Fujisaki/Hiro one. Hehehe!! ^-^ I can't wait till that one comes out. Well, I'm 1:05 Am here and I'm kinda getting sleepy. Oh, not, 1:06 now. lol. So, G'Night or morning or afternoon, whenever you're reading this!! Once again, awesome job!!! PS: I loved the sintuations!! Like how it was all tangled up and such, and it just made you keep reading and reading!! *Squeals like a broken dolphin* Heh! Okay...O.o I really think I should go now. ^-^ PSS or whatever...: THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR TELLING TOUMA OFF AND MAKING SOMEONE PUNCH HIM IN THE FACE!!! I mean, sure he was one of the Characters I favorited and all, but in the fanfic he was acting like a serious bitch. Oh, but not in a bad way though, because his behavoir fit the role and all, so yeah... Okay, now 1:09. But I highly doubt you care, so, I'm just gonna go now... And I said that earlier too. -_- I'm hopeless. La! Well, ja ne! Bye!!!
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Title: Chapter 16
Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 23:07 CDT
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Whoa THat's just nuts! confrontion was needed!
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Title: Chapter 15
Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2006 22:09 CDT
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Suguru you've most likely been breathing in his scent unconsciously, where it got branded in your skull. The problem is that Touma is fucked up. oh man I wanna hear what he's working on! um.. Noriko err.. I'm scared of what Noriko reaction would be if she found out about the whole mess. It's weird that Touma hadn't thought to check NG. hmm... so K's out of the loop, eh? Noriko getting woman's intuition or something. WoooHooo!!! GO! Noriko! GO! YES!! GO! Ryuichi! GO! Start actually living and loving! err.. bad! Ryuichi bad! Nooo..... don't do that Ryu! PUSH HIM AWAY!! No! SHOVE him away! Ryuichi think about Tatsuha! hmm.. Touma call Ryu-chan, Eiri! That would get Ryuichi to stop this insanity! oh It would suck if Tatsuha walk in on that! Tatsuha would be heartbroken and/or homicidal and go in for the kill on Touma. Ah man! Fucked up now that Ryuichi wants to end the relationship, Touma supposivly feels more for Ryuichi. Ah this sucks! Oh YOU STUPID FUCKER! Touma quit hurting and using Ryuichi! YOU STUPID JERK!! Woohoo! Ryuichi go!! (I'm not liking Touma, if you can't tell.. He's a real messed up jerk.) Touma your logic is really backwards... hmph Oh Touma that was beyond cold. That just had to blow up in the face... didn't it? waaa!! Touma you need help!! Tatsuha was doing that cuz' Shuichi is the closes to Ryuichi that Tatsuha thought he was going to get.. That's why.. Touma you're horrible! *cries* Actually it would of been great if Tatsuha had walk in during the shouting match. PS.. this review was written throughout the chapter...
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Title: *smiles*
Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2006 23:15 CDT
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TOUMA NEEDS MONDO HELP oh Shuuichidon't worry it'll be fine
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Title: I LOVE YOU!!
Reviewed By: Mizuko Sohma [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2006 18:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a wonderful story! I have been reading this for months and i have finally reviewed. YAY! You are a splendid writer, just simply amazing. Especailly that "Tohma Ownage" , as I like to call it, in chapter 14. Noone ever tells Tohma off, ever. Cause their all bitch-scared of him but Yuki *claps for him* finally said all the things I said while reading this fic. It's about time someone bought him right back down to "earth" where all us other citizens reside instead of being in "Tohma Land" where he controls everything (or so he thought). Despite all that I still love Tohma but who doesn't, but he is still crazy as hell. ^_^ PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Rayne_falls On: April 30, 2006 07:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are an amazing writer! I love this story, but Touma needs to be pushed off a cliff! Don't touch Ryu, You jerk! He's Tats'!!!! But, seriously, you rock at writing this! Update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: leila-chan* nsi On: April 27, 2006 11:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry i've been mia. i hope suguru loosen's up enough to let hiro get close. i rolled at shuu having to ride in a taxi passed out. hahaha. the whole touma thing wih ryu is sad. i hope ryu can be happy.... with tatsuha!!
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Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 11:08 CDT
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HiroSuguru is so cute! Touma should be SHOT!
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