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| "Disappearing Act" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] | | Pages (3): [ 1 2 3 › » ] | Reviewed By: villagefox [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 20:17 CDT
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That was absolutely awsome! I've had this fic in my favs for some time now but i had to re read and catch up. I saw the sequel and am sooo going to read that ASAP! GREAT JOB! Keep it up! Ja ne!
| Title: Thank you!
Reviewed By: JulieAnn On: May 14, 2008 16:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*stands up and claps* Thank you! Thank you, and Thank you, for writing this story in the first place...And congrats on the new baby! girl or boy? I think it said you were, 5 months right? My friend got me hooked on this story, my friends and I seemed to fit the characters personallites so well we all got nik named after them, I'm the Ryu of our little group, in many ways, its funny. But, I'm not going to tell you about my life, trust me It would bore you to tears. But anyways, they are the ones who got me reading the story, after the second chapters I stoel ehr laptop and sat in a corner for 6 hours strait reading this sotry, I stayed up all night. I was hooked...and that was last year. Now that its done, i'm all giddy for the sequal and danceing around and singing on my bed, I'm a loser like that ok? :D! and honestly, oen day I'm gona Join the MHC, its my life goal to have sex in random places and see if I can gt away with it! *gasps* is that you you got preggy!? and then decided to add it into the story! just kidding! ^.~ but one question, if you don;t midn em asking...If shu is on tour for 6-9 months...and yuki couldn't put up without him for more than a few days...WHAT IS POOR YUKI GOING TO DO!?!? he is a sex addict by nature!! Thanks for the time ^.~ Can't wait until you feel better, and have you child, I bet s/hes going to be the most adorable thing! Goodluck with the birth! Thanks again, :D! Julie Ossowski/Aakahasha pinkrose1919@yahoo.com
| Reviewed By: Hiro's Whore On: June 25, 2007 13:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I notice you have an Inuyasha C2, filled with (ahem) spicy and UNTALENTED writers. My, my. So many of the stories are breaking the rules. That's too bad. I've already copied and pasted all the titles and author names, so there's nothing to be done about that, is there? Take a look at the user name above. Yes, I do know who your sockpuppets are. Because you refuse to control your juvenile impulses and won't stop trolling, I'll start reporting batches of your favorite authors every time you troll some more. And oh, yes. Just to really, really piss you off, do you remember a certain putrid Gravi story that was featured on GAFF a while back? The one by a favorite author of yours, whom you're spying on via your ShuTohma account on livejournal. You read the GAFF entry and went so batshit you spammed the forums. A silly-ass cheapjack tenth-rate piece of porn like that WOULD would appeal to a puerile mind like yours. Guess what, bitch? I'm the one who GAFFED it.
| Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 22:25 CST
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haha go Ryuichi ha ha that would be hot to watch
| Reviewed By: narinari [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2006 20:23 CDT
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oh i love this story so much it makes me heart go pitter patter i cant wait to read the epilogue!
| Title: Chapter 17
Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2006 02:32 CDT
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hahaha GO Yuki! oh hot yummy! Touma needs to get help either way. err.. geez make up mind. *glup* Shuuichi stop butting in. haha GO Yuki that was awesome! hehe Sakano still actually cared.
| Title: Hiro and Fujisaki
Reviewed By: Biya On: September 01, 2006 06:56 CDT
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you tatally rock the only thing I have to conment on is that you did a s e x scean 4 every cuppel Except Hiro and Fujisaki and I really think you should but it was great by by
| Title: next chap plez
Reviewed By: Lameass On: August 29, 2006 05:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so good you have to wright the next chap soon, at frist I never saw Hiro and Fugasake(i know i hav not spelt it right) as a cuppel but as i read now i love the i dear plez update soon it rocks Thanks
| Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar (nli) On: August 22, 2006 18:21 CDT
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... Why have I not reviewed this so far? O__O Where has my mind been?? Anyways... five lemons!!! WHOOT!! I love how your chapters are always so long, because that means tons always happens! I want Touma to have his happy ending too, he has a permanent place in my heart... poor poor Touma... T_T I'll love you still!!! I personally could never forget that line of Suguru's, about age not stopping Touma.. *snicker* I laughed my ass off. ^___^ And I could never foret Touma coming onto Suguru, because that's one of my more favored pairings.. hmm... There was so much I adored about this, I'll admit I'm a little sad to see it end. But overall this was a good place to end, and I'll look forward to the epilouge!
| Title: Chapter 16
Reviewed By: evanescencefreak14 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2006 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I LOVE UR FAN FIC! U MUST WRITE MORE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE! I LOVE IT SOOOOOO MUCH! But not so much where we are at though. because of all the "drama" but the Yaoi in the OTHER chapters before was greatness ^^
| Reviewed By: ChildofLight 051 Kiraya [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 21:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
So, anyways, this review is a few chapters too late, but this is bugging me... The alcohol limit is 0.15? Where is that? 'Cause where I live, you get in major trouble if your alcohol level is more than .08! I just think that's a bit weird. Lol. Great story!
| Title: All Chapters
Reviewed By: Fireangel19400 On: May 24, 2006 01:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^-^!!! I loved all of this so far!!! My eyes were literly bugging out when I read the lemons. Wow. You're really, really a talented writer!! And your editors as well!! ^-^ Good job!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!! And the sequal!! Hehehe. I want a Fujisaki/Hiro one. Hehehe!! ^-^ I can't wait till that one comes out. Well, I'm 1:05 Am here and I'm kinda getting sleepy. Oh, not, 1:06 now. lol. So, G'Night or morning or afternoon, whenever you're reading this!! Once again, awesome job!!! PS: I loved the sintuations!! Like how it was all tangled up and such, and it just made you keep reading and reading!! *Squeals like a broken dolphin* Heh! Okay...O.o I really think I should go now. ^-^ PSS or whatever...: THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR TELLING TOUMA OFF AND MAKING SOMEONE PUNCH HIM IN THE FACE!!! I mean, sure he was one of the Characters I favorited and all, but in the fanfic he was acting like a serious bitch. Oh, but not in a bad way though, because his behavoir fit the role and all, so yeah... Okay, now 1:09. But I highly doubt you care, so, I'm just gonna go now... And I said that earlier too. -_- I'm hopeless. La! Well, ja ne! Bye!!!
| Title: Chapter 16
Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 23:07 CDT
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Whoa THat's just nuts! confrontion was needed!
| Title: Chapter 15
Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2006 22:09 CDT
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Suguru you've most likely been breathing in his scent unconsciously, where it got branded in your skull. The problem is that Touma is fucked up. oh man I wanna hear what he's working on! um.. Noriko err.. I'm scared of what Noriko reaction would be if she found out about the whole mess. It's weird that Touma hadn't thought to check NG. hmm... so K's out of the loop, eh? Noriko getting woman's intuition or something. WoooHooo!!! GO! Noriko! GO! YES!! GO! Ryuichi! GO! Start actually living and loving! err.. bad! Ryuichi bad! Nooo..... don't do that Ryu! PUSH HIM AWAY!! No! SHOVE him away! Ryuichi think about Tatsuha! hmm.. Touma call Ryu-chan, Eiri! That would get Ryuichi to stop this insanity! oh It would suck if Tatsuha walk in on that! Tatsuha would be heartbroken and/or homicidal and go in for the kill on Touma. Ah man! Fucked up now that Ryuichi wants to end the relationship, Touma supposivly feels more for Ryuichi. Ah this sucks! Oh YOU STUPID FUCKER! Touma quit hurting and using Ryuichi! YOU STUPID JERK!! Woohoo! Ryuichi go!! (I'm not liking Touma, if you can't tell.. He's a real messed up jerk.) Touma your logic is really backwards... hmph Oh Touma that was beyond cold. That just had to blow up in the face... didn't it? waaa!! Touma you need help!! Tatsuha was doing that cuz' Shuichi is the closes to Ryuichi that Tatsuha thought he was going to get.. That's why.. Touma you're horrible! *cries* Actually it would of been great if Tatsuha had walk in during the shouting match. PS.. this review was written throughout the chapter...
| Title: *smiles*
Reviewed By: Chihiro1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2006 23:15 CDT
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TOUMA NEEDS MONDO HELP oh Shuuichidon't worry it'll be fine
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