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Title: NOT A FLAME
Reviewed By: animelover4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 21:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay, let me start by saying that THIS IS NOT A FLAME cause based on what i say in here you migt consider it that way... let's recap, you first said that kag's father was always drunk and that she had a hard life and bla bla bla... but sudenly kag is nice and her father isn't drunk anymore and she now talks to him normally after hiting her and everything?! i got confused... next, you're always saying that fluffy is so OOC... i found the other characters OOC too! kag is acting too much like a whore!and she likes porn! i mean... a wet t-shirt contest?! i would like to see real kag doing something like that! and last but not less important, your story is very cool although the notes in the middle of each chapter are kinda annoying... anyway! i will like to end up saying that THIS IS NOT A FLAME i'm just telling you some stuff that some other people can flame you about... so, again very good and update soon =)
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Reviewed By: GinaCat [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2006 23:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ahhhhh please update soon I have to know what happens
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Title: yay!! i love this story!
Reviewed By: Kisa Niwatari [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2006 21:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOHHH your the best! i loved that chapter! i get writer's block alot too! lol and then i start to just tweak a story with parts of what happened in other animes or sometimes even my own life! well i'm so glad your sticking with this story cuz it's a fave of mine!! ^__^ thanks for reviewing my fic! it made me happy! well as soon as you get off writer's block POST!! i need a fix of fan fic and i was hoping you'd have yet another chapter!! ^__________^ your awesome and keep it up! YOU DESERVE A 999 ZILLION OUT OF 10!! --Kisa Niwatari
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Title: teh author
Reviewed By: Kurama_Hiei_Inuyasha_l0ver [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2006 21:02 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG I NEED IDEAS! WRITER'S BLOCK IS A BITCH! T_T
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Reviewed By: inu wifey [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2006 00:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story so far please write more please!!!!!
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Title: bunnies on the loose
Reviewed By: InusMistress On: January 14, 2006 19:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is pretty good, except for the non-detailed parts. i cannot believe Kagome went through the wet-tee contest!that was freaking hilarious!! i want to see more ^-^
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Title: i liked it!!!!
Reviewed By: kisa niwatari((nsiyet)) On: January 10, 2006 14:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well i hope you don't shut it down cuz i like it! i want to see what else happens...please write more? this chapter was good! and so was the last one! don't worry about what people think until you get a review, then you can improve. the only thing wrong wtih it was it was to short and there's not another one! ^__^ your a great author so please keep writing this story...
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Reviewed By: Princess-in-Training On: January 09, 2006 00:24 CST
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OMG I can not believe Kagome did that. A wet tee conteset. Ok the playboy outfit was sexy enough but a wet tee contest tops them all. Sesshy mean if it wasn't for him Inuyasha would have left as soon as the contest started. That must be werid watching your sister in a playboy contest.
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Title: i loved it!!!
Reviewed By: Kisa Niwatari [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2006 09:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok. the onlky bad part is you stopping there! i want to read more chappies! and yeah, maybe a little more detail would help but i like simple stories because it's a faster read and you get to picture your own image while you read it. it's like the details are brought up to your mind's eye by yourself instead of the author and i like to do that. ^__^ your an awesome author, keep it up! please write mor chapters!!! pretty please!!!!????
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Title: well...
Reviewed By: devilboy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 05:57 CST
Comment/Review:
the only thing wrong with it was you ending it -.- i'm a negative person so i can't really say any better. but it seems fine...except something about it bothered me i just don't know what. tell ya some other time if i figure it out.
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Reviewed By: Syd Slothy On: December 23, 2005 19:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi!... I am really not meaning this as a negative comment (although it may sound like one) but I read a lot of fanfics and many people do this (even I made this mistake a lot when I wrote fanfics). You wanted to know what was wrong and I am really really really really sorry if you take this offensively because you are a really good writer and your story is really good but you kind of write your story as if you are writing a list. Everything happens so fast and with so few details that it seems to be only a dialogue and it lacks the mental image that goes along with a really high quality story. An example just to put things into perspective is how inuyasha and Kagome meet, for a moment dislike each other and then are suddenly best pals. I understand how they would have an immediate attraction to each other, but if I guy you just met called you a bitch/wench and you decided he was a jerk, would you be bet friends by the afternoon, discuss porn with him and let him hug you that night? As I said before I made this mistake a hundred times before and I am really sorry if this review upsets you. I hope you keep writing because your story is great and Merry Christmas (if you celebrate it)! ~Syd
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Reviewed By: PrincessAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2005 00:46 CST
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They are so funny. They act like me and my friends kinda. But we had to tone it down we used to go down the streets arguing and cussing at each other until one day one of my friend's mom saw us doing it. She let it slidde but said next time we would be so lucky.
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Title: YESSSSSSSSSSSSSS!
Reviewed By: Kisa Niwatari [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2005 10:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i hope oyu don't mind but i added oyu on aim. and yeah, i loved this chapter (the most recent one for part one of the orientation). don't sell oyurself short! ^__^ what happened to rin anyways? maybe i missed a part of the story...oh well. love it!!
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Title: Chichi
Reviewed By: Kimberly P. On: October 25, 2005 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW this story is very funny.I have to say that its going really good so keep on going. Love,Chichi. ^_^
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Reviewed By: inuyashasAngel00 On: October 23, 2005 19:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im liking the story so far!! =D !! its funny and cute!!! :3 . please update sooooooooon!! :)
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