| "Chaos Came Early" Reviews/Comments [ 81 ] |
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Reviewed By: Dragondeb On: April 18, 2006 02:02 CDT
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I really like this alot. :)
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Reviewed By: soxy On: April 17, 2006 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally an Update! I have to say this is one of my favorite stories... mostly because I love how you portray Schuldich and Farfarello. I'm dying for another update so hopefully this one comes sooner. Great chapter, can't wait for more, so Update Soon!!!
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Reviewed By: bewsbud [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 12:57 CDT
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Assassination by chicken...now that's what I call 'fowl' play...*g* I'm aware of just how bad that was. That's why *you* write and *I* read. I just love what you've done with Schuldig's personality in this piece. He's the perfect epitome of a loveable brat.
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Reviewed By: Heta nsi On: April 17, 2006 12:06 CDT
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*squeal* Finally more! ... Should I be worried? When Farfarello took his meal with him, I wasn't surprised. O.o Actually, I knew what he was going to do... scary. *snicker* Clever, still. ^_^ Schuldig still seems to be looking for something that "fits" him. Good thing it wasn't the video games.
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix nsi On: April 17, 2006 10:23 CDT
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Honestly, darling, what makes you think I can control Schu? (Other than with a whip and chair that is) I can completely see Schu going through everything at once every week or so. Loved him and Kacia having harrassed one another into unconsciousness and completely loved Farf killing someone with chicken. That was priceless.
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Title: queen of the world?
Reviewed By: ME/chanchananime On: March 21, 2006 12:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love your work. It's in character, humorous and very well written. I wish that this chapter had been longer but I'll take what I can get sooooo when's the next installment? Soon I hope. I'll send cookies! =)
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Reviewed By: soxy On: February 13, 2006 00:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Write faster I want to know what happens next... pleeeease ::most winey voice possible:: But yea other than that great work and I loved Schu as always and of course Farf always amuses me. Also Bradley is a meany... I mean really not letting Schu sit in his lap.... who wouldn't want him squirming in their lap?
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 20:21 CST
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Dang! I hate it when I have to adjust my seat to avoid Farfarello's pointy objects! Hee. Another fun-fille, chaotic chapter. I love that Schu wants to ride in Brad's lap. Can't wait to learn more about Kacia!
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 20:11 CST
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Heheheh. Thank you! Finally! So, who's the chicky poo?
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2006 19:52 CST
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withdrawal schmitdrawal...yay! for updates and anarchy!
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Reviewed By: red queen On: December 31, 2005 16:56 CST
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aww. this chapter almost made me smile.i'll gladly give the killer a hug.
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 23:49 CST
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another wonderful chapter, as usual. i wish i was half as prolific and a quarter as talented! i can't believe i'm even reading a schwarz story! see? that's how good you are!
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Reviewed By: mm-chan On: December 30, 2005 22:08 CST
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poor brad's making a *little* headway with his team
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Reviewed By: bewsbud [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 19:24 CST
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Forget lemon. I want spew warnings where appropriate. It took forever to get the coffee off the monitor. Farf and peeling skin...*shivers*
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 17:28 CST
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*Snort* *Snicker* *Fall out of the chair laughing at Farf "peeling" Schu.* This was great! Thank you.
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