| "Chaos Came Early" Reviews/Comments [ 81 ] |
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Reviewed By: red queen On: December 09, 2005 06:39 CST
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hmm, it seems i haven't reviewed this story lately. i'd forgotten that you updated it recently, too. scatterbrain, bratterscain. anyway, i love this chapter! i loved the scene with farfarello arguing about the islamic faith (yeah, naturally i'd have to point out that scene). and i don't mind the terrorists -- what reason would esszet have for dealing with peace-loving muslims? poor, poor schuldig. i got a really bad burn over my face, chest and back once -- all my skin blistered and everything, it was gross. and i was nauseous and had a fever for a week. so i can empathize with the chibi pixie. crawford was being so sweet to him! i don't know if i will draw the end scene though...sweet as it is, it doesn't hit my "must make art" nerve. i had forgotten until i started writing this review that i had started another fanart for you, though. maybe darke will draw crawford/schu? -- love and little marmots, redqueen
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 08:54 CST
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Sorry I didn't do this last night, nut it brightened my morning at work. I almost got busted since I was laughing out loud, but they're used to me sitting in my corner and lauhing for no reason, so no one asked. I love your sense of humor and how approachable all of your Schwarz members are! Thank you so much for keeping me stocked in quality writing!
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Reviewed By: soxy On: December 04, 2005 23:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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How about loved it! Aww poor burnt Schu but at least Bradley is being nice to him. Such a cute chapter can't wait for more, Update Soon!!!
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 19:10 CST
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Well, at least it isn't the flu. *snicker* I'm always happy to hurt . . . um, help with Schu. Love it as always.
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Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 19:07 CST
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oops forgot to leave a review...but i do love the portrayal of sunburnt schu...been there done that....although never been sore
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Title: first
Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 19:02 CST
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and i read it too!
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 13:28 CST
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Hey there! I know I'm behind, but I'm trying to catch up. I just read everything that's posted so far and enjoyed it immensely. You know I don't usually go for the Schwarz stories, but you maybe breaking me of that. It's wonderful, of course, I suspect I'll always think that of your fics. I'm looking forward to the next update.
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Reviewed By: soxy On: November 16, 2005 19:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yea! Great as always, could have been a little longer... but I'm happy with what I got lol. I went back and read the last chapter again because I had forgot what had happened and I have now decided that you need someone to draw you a picture of Farfarello in that leather outfit. Can you say hottness!!! Unfortunately I suck at drawing but hey I think you should look into it, also if you would like I can see if my friend would like to attempt it. Anyways this was a cute chapter... little sleeping Schuldich awww. So is Brad starting to have some feelings for the little pixie, man you have to love that couple. Well anyways can't wait till the next chapter, Update Soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Graveyard man On: November 16, 2005 16:49 CST
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Yet another of my pathetic attempts to review >< I liked this chapter, though not as much as the last one-it was still funny and good tho! Crawford in a photo booth and Farf watching Simpsons just have the affect of humor. Loved it, as usual. Kudos.
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Title: just to be different
Reviewed By: meme-chan On: November 16, 2005 11:04 CST
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may i say that i love this line:America had no tolerance for bright noisy children
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfsonNSI On: November 16, 2005 00:27 CST
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Hmm, was that the sugar crash and sex that put Schu to sleep, or is there something else going on? I like your low key Farf. I'm glad Brad indulges him a little, too. Loved the image of Crawford drawing. What yummy things that sketchbook would hold!
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 23:49 CST
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Love it. Hmmm. Bradly with charcoal and sketchpad. Interesting.
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 11:26 CST
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I love how you mix "normal" teenaged behaviour with the truly oddball Esset/Schwarz actions. I'm getting a huge kick out of Crawford's parental pride in his little villians.
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Reviewed By: soxy On: November 02, 2005 21:07 CST
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Great as always! Oh Farf in leather (fans self) the mental images are very pleasing lol plus it's exactly how I imagined him to look so of course I'd love your description. Schu shirt gave me a good laugh as well. I love how in your fics you progress but you also manage to throw in lots of funny bits. Well anyways keep up the wonderful work :) and Update Soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Graveyard man On: November 02, 2005 14:02 CST
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Loved it, as per usual. Espeacally how you keep putting in little things like the white suit comments Bardly makes at the end of the chapter, and getting Farfie into more Farf like attire, which show you are keeping to what is supose to happen in their future. Oh and the "I can read your mind, and the answer is yes." slogan thing on Schu's shirt was so ironically funny ^^ Kudos to you, keep it up.
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