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 Reviewed By: mm-chan  On: November 02, 2005 11:41 CST
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Ok I am very upset that even though i waited all night for this fic, MM.org was giving trouble and I never found it till this morning! before school...so I couldn't review then until now my lunch break! anyway great job as usual, I don't have a farf obsession, so i can't appreciate his outfit that well, but i love schu and brad. btw thanks for yohji last night!
 Reviewed By: red-queen  On: November 02, 2005 07:55 CST
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*sniffle* *weep* oohhhh the farf love...the hot, hot farf love...it's too much, my cup runneth over (with the blood of dead clergymen) ... i don't care if he is 13, i want to go in HIS dressing room. hee...that was cute, schu and the salesgirl. so they went to a Hot Topic that actually has some decent clothes, eh? last time i went they just had a bunch of raver crap...short review, sorry, sick again. chronic ear infection. i'm allergic to most antibiotics, so i can only take pretty weak ones and apparently the last one didn't do the job. 's not as bad as last time thouh. love redqueen
 Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 01, 2005 23:37 CST
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Have I mentioned I love you? Love the description of Farf's outfit. (I think RedQueen's inclinations are contagious) Schwarz at McDonalds and the mall are frightening things but wildly entertaining all the same.
 Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 31, 2005 14:41 CST
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KD, don't make me whine for an update. It's very annoying and unbecoming to an adult. (or whatever the hell I am)
 Reviewed By: Paju  On: October 29, 2005 14:39 CDT
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Oh dear. *giggles* I really love this fic. For once Crawford and Schuldig's shared past begins... happily, sorts of anyway. I loved the way you described Schuldig, how he wasn't exactly the man he will be, not yet. He still had a lot of childishness in him. And Farfarello was just too adorable for his own good. ^_^ Stein was a bastard, though. Good thing he's the first one in Crawford's list. Who, by the way, is much like himself, but just younger. I like him, a lot. Schuldig is the kind of person who would be occupied with a paddleball for hours. *grin* I really much like the way you write, it makes me gape and cheer and things like that. I almos feel what's going on and it's the thing I like in fics and what really makes them live. Good work, dear. =) Enter Sandman made me squeal with joy. Metallica
 Reviewed By: red-queen  On: October 25, 2005 11:03 CDT
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heeheehee! i loved the opening scene! poor farf doesn't seem to have the all-important concepts of subtlety and stealth yet...*wipes up pools of blood from bleeding ears* thanks. thanks a lot. you know, it wasn't so bad until the nirvana came along. hmmm...i wonder if herr stein raped schuldig...in which case, it wasn't the best idea crawford ever had, choosing that way to get schu's attention. certainly not good for his own propensity for denial. anyway, the shopping trip should be fun. are they going to buy farf some *drool* bondage pants? *slobber* (bad redqueen, he's only 13 at this point!) and maybe some leathers...and a straitjacket...and some knee-high lace-up steel-toed boots...(quit it, you pedophile!) love, redqueen
 Reviewed By: soxy  On: October 25, 2005 00:15 CDT
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Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh my god I love it and want more...feed me some more schuldich goodness! lol great chapter can't wait till the next, Update Soon!
 Title: yay!!! my exams are finished
Reviewed By: moimoi-chan [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 24, 2005 23:14 CDT
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for now anyway!!! i really like crawford teaching schu to shield using shopping, i wish someone had done that for me.....btw thanks for the chapter *glomps KD*
 Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 24, 2005 22:26 CDT
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Oh, yeah. Schu says that Crawford is hosting the next A. Anon meeting just for that dirty little trick.
 Reviewed By: RaceUlfson@pacbell.net  On: October 24, 2005 00:12 CDT
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I rather think ol Stein should be up against the wall *now*. I feel sorry for Crawford, since I've seen in your other fics how badly he messes up his chances with his Wild Child. It's easy to forget Crawford is just a kid, too. Now, at least, he's starting to realize that he's holding a lit firecracker in his hands. And why isn't Schuldig trained at all? Could no one show him any reason why he should train?
 Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 23, 2005 23:05 CDT
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Woohoo! Love Schu's taste in music. Love the update. Excellent as always.
 Title: OMG
Reviewed By: aionwatha [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 17, 2005 22:49 CDT
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I don't think I've ever laughed this hard reading fics. This is downright killing me. It needs more, oh yesh! XD
 Reviewed By: Sancta  On: October 17, 2005 00:36 CDT
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I am so sorry that you hurt your finger but I swear if you stop writing I am going to collapse. I haven't laughed that hard in forever. Your work just puts a smile to my face.
 Reviewed By: RedQueen [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 15, 2005 17:44 CDT
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"i didn't think it would do that." oh, that's classic. i read that little exchange to my boyfriend and he said "what? i don't get it." x_x and yes, i've made him sit through weiss kreuz all the way up through gluhen. just so he can see into my world, you know. he usually doesn't really like to see into my world, though, because there's an awful lot of beastly sweaty gay man-rutting in it. and let me say that the mere thought of hikaru midorikawa singing "lion sleeps tonight" makes my ears implode in self-defense. i love his speaking voice, but his singing voice...i just can't think of an apt enough metaphor. it's not what you'd call melodic, i'll just say that. (for those of you playing the home game, midorikawa-san is schu's seiyuu.) awww, the boys have discovered something fun they can do together besides killin' -- arson! the schwarz family is so cute. it's like 'natural born killers -- the sitcom'. crawford'll probably weep with joy when he acquires nagi. in the bathroom, safely away from prying eyes and telepaths. heh, this crawford has a queen fixation too? my current farfarello has a big thing for the ramones. he doesn't have a joey-shrine or anything, though. nothing like the bronze bust-o'-freddie. i suppose that's enough incessant rambling for one day. love, redqueen
 Reviewed By: Graveyard man  On: October 15, 2005 17:09 CDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Uh oh, Schu schu said a No-No word *giggles madly* I liked this chapter a lot. Schuldig and Farf get along in a way that is so them too do, and it has a nice amount of humor (or, what I find funny. His team. Two barely-trained boys had taken down two full-size Essett-trained goons in seconds. "This was...incredible. Dizzying. Addictive. He had never experimented with drugs, he experimented with nothing. He knew where he was going. But now he knew what it was to be high as a kite" Was my fav part. And the ending. Can't wait for the next chappie. Kudos!
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