| "Chaos Came Early" Reviews/Comments [ 81 ] |
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Reviewed By: Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2005 13:28 CST
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Hey there! I know I'm behind, but I'm trying to catch up. I just read everything that's posted so far and enjoyed it immensely. You know I don't usually go for the Schwarz stories, but you maybe breaking me of that. It's wonderful, of course, I suspect I'll always think that of your fics. I'm looking forward to the next update.
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Reviewed By: soxy On: November 16, 2005 19:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yea! Great as always, could have been a little longer... but I'm happy with what I got lol. I went back and read the last chapter again because I had forgot what had happened and I have now decided that you need someone to draw you a picture of Farfarello in that leather outfit. Can you say hottness!!! Unfortunately I suck at drawing but hey I think you should look into it, also if you would like I can see if my friend would like to attempt it. Anyways this was a cute chapter... little sleeping Schuldich awww. So is Brad starting to have some feelings for the little pixie, man you have to love that couple. Well anyways can't wait till the next chapter, Update Soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Graveyard man On: November 16, 2005 16:49 CST
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Yet another of my pathetic attempts to review >< I liked this chapter, though not as much as the last one-it was still funny and good tho! Crawford in a photo booth and Farf watching Simpsons just have the affect of humor. Loved it, as usual. Kudos.
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Title: just to be different
Reviewed By: meme-chan On: November 16, 2005 11:04 CST
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may i say that i love this line:America had no tolerance for bright noisy children
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfsonNSI On: November 16, 2005 00:27 CST
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Hmm, was that the sugar crash and sex that put Schu to sleep, or is there something else going on? I like your low key Farf. I'm glad Brad indulges him a little, too. Loved the image of Crawford drawing. What yummy things that sketchbook would hold!
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2005 23:49 CST
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Love it. Hmmm. Bradly with charcoal and sketchpad. Interesting.
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Reviewed By: RaceUlfson [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2005 11:26 CST
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I love how you mix "normal" teenaged behaviour with the truly oddball Esset/Schwarz actions. I'm getting a huge kick out of Crawford's parental pride in his little villians.
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Reviewed By: soxy On: November 02, 2005 21:07 CST
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Great as always! Oh Farf in leather (fans self) the mental images are very pleasing lol plus it's exactly how I imagined him to look so of course I'd love your description. Schu shirt gave me a good laugh as well. I love how in your fics you progress but you also manage to throw in lots of funny bits. Well anyways keep up the wonderful work :) and Update Soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Graveyard man On: November 02, 2005 14:02 CST
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Loved it, as per usual. Espeacally how you keep putting in little things like the white suit comments Bardly makes at the end of the chapter, and getting Farfie into more Farf like attire, which show you are keeping to what is supose to happen in their future. Oh and the "I can read your mind, and the answer is yes." slogan thing on Schu's shirt was so ironically funny ^^ Kudos to you, keep it up.
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Reviewed By: mm-chan On: November 02, 2005 11:41 CST
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Ok I am very upset that even though i waited all night for this fic, MM.org was giving trouble and I never found it till this morning! before school...so I couldn't review then until now my lunch break! anyway great job as usual, I don't have a farf obsession, so i can't appreciate his outfit that well, but i love schu and brad. btw thanks for yohji last night!
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Reviewed By: red-queen On: November 02, 2005 07:55 CST
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*sniffle* *weep* oohhhh the farf love...the hot, hot farf love...it's too much, my cup runneth over (with the blood of dead clergymen) ... i don't care if he is 13, i want to go in HIS dressing room. hee...that was cute, schu and the salesgirl. so they went to a Hot Topic that actually has some decent clothes, eh? last time i went they just had a bunch of raver crap...short review, sorry, sick again. chronic ear infection. i'm allergic to most antibiotics, so i can only take pretty weak ones and apparently the last one didn't do the job. 's not as bad as last time thouh. love redqueen
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2005 23:37 CST
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Have I mentioned I love you? Love the description of Farf's outfit. (I think RedQueen's inclinations are contagious) Schwarz at McDonalds and the mall are frightening things but wildly entertaining all the same.
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Reviewed By: darkephoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2005 14:41 CST
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KD, don't make me whine for an update. It's very annoying and unbecoming to an adult. (or whatever the hell I am)
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Reviewed By: Paju On: October 29, 2005 14:39 CDT
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Oh dear. *giggles* I really love this fic. For once Crawford and Schuldig's shared past begins... happily, sorts of anyway. I loved the way you described Schuldig, how he wasn't exactly the man he will be, not yet. He still had a lot of childishness in him. And Farfarello was just too adorable for his own good. ^_^ Stein was a bastard, though. Good thing he's the first one in Crawford's list. Who, by the way, is much like himself, but just younger. I like him, a lot. Schuldig is the kind of person who would be occupied with a paddleball for hours. *grin* I really much like the way you write, it makes me gape and cheer and things like that. I almos feel what's going on and it's the thing I like in fics and what really makes them live. Good work, dear. =) Enter Sandman made me squeal with joy. Metallica
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Reviewed By: red-queen On: October 25, 2005 11:03 CDT
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heeheehee! i loved the opening scene! poor farf doesn't seem to have the all-important concepts of subtlety and stealth yet...*wipes up pools of blood from bleeding ears* thanks. thanks a lot. you know, it wasn't so bad until the nirvana came along. hmmm...i wonder if herr stein raped schuldig...in which case, it wasn't the best idea crawford ever had, choosing that way to get schu's attention. certainly not good for his own propensity for denial. anyway, the shopping trip should be fun. are they going to buy farf some *drool* bondage pants? *slobber* (bad redqueen, he's only 13 at this point!) and maybe some leathers...and a straitjacket...and some knee-high lace-up steel-toed boots...(quit it, you pedophile!) love, redqueen
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