| "Fleeting Inspiration" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Title: I'm Begging You Here...
Reviewed By: ss10009 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 20:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I screamed "No!" when I realized that I was on the last chapter, and also when I realized that this story hadn't been updated since January. You cannot leave me here! This is such a great story. Seriously, utterly great. It's absolutely hilarious. The situation that all spawned from a book is just priceless. Will they ever get their lives back in order? You've written the characters so wonderfully. I love every aspect of this story. Please update soon. PLEASE!
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Title: Best Gravi fanfic Ever
Reviewed By: TowaNeko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 14:35 CST
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This is the best Gravi fanfic i've ever read please post more of it soon
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Title: LoL
Reviewed By: villagefox [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 05:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW that was really funny u have a great knack for comedY. the comment about japanese and american scientist trying to blow up the moon was hilarius. Update soon!^_^
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Reviewed By: libelluledargent On: November 25, 2006 21:15 CST
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I wanted to wait until the end to review, but these quotes really cracked me up! "I don't like celery soup..." Shuichi whined. "And I don't like your hair, kid. We all have our crosses to bear," the cop replied, walking away. They do things to people in jail, you know? I don't want to become some scary guy's girlfriend!" Eiri snickered. "Too late, brat."
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Reviewed By: catti-dono(bakadeshi) On: November 23, 2006 21:04 CST
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I love Descendants of Darkness...have all the manga and series...YEAH...This story just keeps going and going and going (energizer bunny) but it flipp'n hilarious...cannot wait for the next chapter to see what other kind of "hell" your going to put our beloved characters through...catti
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Title: omfg!
Reviewed By: bloodkitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 13:52 CDT
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OMFG!!! THT IS LIKE THE BEST STORY OF GRAVITATION YET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yupp i really liked it and u HAVE 2 KEEP UPDATING!!!! just one suggestion- add more lemones plzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
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Title: brilliant
Reviewed By: lozzypoo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2006 05:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg that was toatlly awsome. it was so funny i almost cried especially with suichi being an idiot. he he he loved it
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Title: LOVE IT!
Reviewed By: Mill On: August 16, 2006 09:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MAN DOES THIS CRACK ME UP!! You are fricken brilliant, you know that? ^^ Good job!
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Title: ="D
Reviewed By: Yadora-chan On: August 03, 2006 15:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is really, really good, and it's just... totally like Gravitation. I wish I could help Eiri, poor him, being stalked by a book called Four Gay Elves. x3
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Reviewed By: The_Scarlet_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2006 00:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say, that this is by far one of the funniest stories i've ever read! It just cracks me up. It seems like such a random topic, but you really make it work. Seriously, I think i'm addicted to this story!And I love the whole cat thing. That was too cute, and too mean on Eiri's behalf. I really wish you'd update more often, but oh well. Anyways, great job, it's a real pleasure when you update. I actually saw this chapter up, and i squealed in delight
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Reviewed By: Puddle [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 03:35 CDT
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Wow, this is amazing! ^^ You are truly talented. This is one of those rare good Gravitation fics! I'm glad I decided to read it (the summary hadn't sounded very exciting, but when I saw how many pages it was, I figured that it would be worth it to check it out). I love the story; it just seems to fit so well with the real story. Plus you've done a great job at keeping the characters in character. But what will happen next? I found this fic today and read the whole thing already, so now I'm anxious to know. Will something happen with the book or the Etos? Will Yuki and Shuichi fulfill their sexual fantasies? I can't wait to find out! Anyway, PLEASE update soon. This is such a good fic, it would be a shame to just leave it off (just going off the frequency of your old updates...). Maybe you didn't have inspiration, or enough encouragement, I don't know. But I'll give you encouragement (along with all the other reviewers), and show you that your fic is loved! Ra ra for you! Please update soo! (That was supposed to be 'soon', but 'soo' rhymed with 'you'...)
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Title: (^_^)
Reviewed By: Shouko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 11:35 CDT
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Awesome job as always!! (^^) I thought it was so nice of Yuki to clean out his whole place just for his brat. And it's nice to see how much he really care for him. They're pillow talk in this chapter was really cute. I hope Shuichi makes a quick recovery.
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Reviewed By: siany On: April 20, 2006 18:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I keep getting really excited when a chapter comes out and then when it's over I'm all depressed and checking a few times to see if there's another chapter that I didn't see. I must say this is in the running for my most fave story of all time, being exactly what I want in a gravy fic, and I'm not just saying that...usually when I have nothing else to read I go back and re-read old chapters of this cause they're so good. Despite some small typos and missing words that can easily be placed back in by one's mind this is very well written and I know I'll be reading this a few times over in a short ammount of time when it's finish, though hopefully its still got a long way to go yet...as long as it doesn't take you too long to write it all. Keep writing as well as you do - Kitsune
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Title: awww, kawaii
Reviewed By: dracoqueen22(too lazy to sign in) On: April 20, 2006 11:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been reading this from the beginning but have been too lazy to leave a review, but now I feel I must. It is just too good. And that last little bit in your latest chapter made me sigh with cuteness, and I don't really like fluff. So yes, very well written, in character and HIGHLY amusing. Keep up the good work.
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Title: Nice work!!
Reviewed By: Shouko [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 21:28 CDT
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I loved reading two updated chapters! (^_^) But there's so much going on! I finally got to find out what was wrong with poor Shu-chan, and the dilemmas are so interesting. I wonder if Eiri can ever quit smoking. And if it will work out with not smoking in his home and such!! Nice work as always! And Depraved Fan, I'm not really sure what you are talking about and to believe you or not! And I'm prepubescent? Already went through most of that. There is also no hyphen mark, you baka. You are also a coward for not leaving your e-mail address so I can say this to your face.
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