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| "The fox and the ninja" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: intresting
Reviewed By: alchemist_pac On: May 23, 2007 05:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Looks good, can wait to see what you do with the story. A bit to early into the story for me to comment about much else on it. Anyway good luck and have fun writing.
| Reviewed By: narusaku4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 14:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pls update soon enjoying this a lot =)
| Reviewed By: Shakeval [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 03:50 CST
Comment/Review:
great story, i'm looking forward to your next chapter, it would be interesting to see if he has to use his weapons to fight someone off on the first day or two of his journey. it will also be interesting to see how he catches his first wild pokegirl, cousins don't count.
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