| "Heart Breakers League" Reviews/Comments [ 200 ] |
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Reviewed By: Portia (ADarkNightsObsession) On: March 08, 2006 01:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know I don't even have anything to say to this critic...it's already been said by everyone else...Damn... But the funnest part of these critics is that they never use their login name...What are they afraid of, someone as great as you seeing their crappy work? They need lives, I mean why do they even bother to read stories that they supposedly don't even like? Because they're lying sons-a-bitches that say ridiculous things to make themselves feel better about themselves. My mother knows all, and the most true thing that she has ever told me that is most useful is that when people hate themselves they project that hatred onto others. Quite frankly whenever someone insults me for no viable reason i feel honered. It usually means that you intimidate them with your perfection in something that they with that they could do. Love you Portia
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Reviewed By: Portia (ADarkNightsObsession) On: March 08, 2006 01:10 CST
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You are my god! I love you. I FEEL SO SPECIAL!!! Lmao. Gahhhh who is Inuyasha with?!?!?! WAHHHHH *pouty face* It's just so wrong to leave it there like that! WHY CAN'T WE ALL JUST LOVE EACHOTHER!?!?!?! lol ok sorry. I'm done! LOVEEEEE YOUUUUUUUU Portia
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Title: omg..
Reviewed By: Sammie. On: March 07, 2006 09:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god, wow..this fic..has really moved me, i was crying for a bit actually, and i cant believe you can write something so great! i cant believe ANYONE could write something so great.. xD... you are a great writer, and i cant wait to read your other fics, please update asap, for you are on my favorites list now..as soon as i can get MM to let me log in lol... this fic is great, and you are great, and i cant wait to see what will happen.
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Title: Wow...
Reviewed By: Kagaga No Subaba [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 11:06 CST
Comment/Review:
Dang... totally was freakin pissed this morning that when I read my review I was like... what the fuck is a Sone of a bitch!??? LMFAO... I hate critics... So to make things even clearer... YOU"RE A SON... YES SON!!! OF A BITCH!!! :D Again, with all my love.... Shar
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Title: LMFAO
Reviewed By: Kagaga No Subaba [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 06:59 CST
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Oh man... Critics, critics, critics... Do ya'll have nothing better to do than to diss me? I mean really!? You either like the fic, or you don't. It's as simple as that! And just because you're the whopping number TWO of ONE critics, doesn't mean jack to me. You have opinions about my fics then fine, I can really care less... but When you can't even spell ORIGINAL, when it's POSTED ON THE FUCKING PAGE!!!!! Then that's where you have issues. So you know what? Up yours and I hope you have Marvelous day you f-ing Sone of a bitch. :D ----- With Love, Shar Shar aka KAGAGA NO SUBABA
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Title: WOW/Not again!
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2006 04:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW, When we talked about this chap I knew it was going to be sad. But, reading it give it a...look I'm still cryin! The next chap is gonna be good!! I'll call ya soon as I can k. Now...I see u critics wanna play again heh. The two of u can kiss her ass like yasha-boy said u don't know her so think before u call her out a name. Now she isn't a bitch! But, I can be one so don't make put my foot put my foot up your ass! We made ya run before we'll do it again. Her fans love work if they could go to a store and get it they would! Why must u hate on her...danm go find something better to do. As for InuGrrrl she loves Shar's work and has begin called one of the greatest authors on this site along wit Kagaga No Subaba! So It looks like u need to do some homework ok. Now be gone don't nobody wanna read what u have to say. Suck Yasha-boy's 12in dick and call it a day
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Title: All Hell No!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Ricky-Boy(your 24/7 man whore&sex slave) On: March 06, 2006 04:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all why do you care so much? I see you taking time out of your day to mess with my darling sharlene. Is it that you wish you had her gift or are ya just a hater? As my freind so greatly put it I believe you really need to get 'laid' it may help ya out, it's not good to be 'mad' that you can't get no dick or pussy really. Also my babyboo ain't no bitch in the way you mean. She a Inu yes...but if I hear that your calling her a bitch again I'll find you my friend. Then we shall see WHO is a BITCH in truth.+_+ Now if you are the person who fucked up her fic and put charters in it that time, she didn't then I'll find ya and kick your ass! okay? good.O_^ Now shary shar, baby I'm here for you baby just like your brother said. This last chap was- girl it's not nice to make a grown man(19) let alone your man cry! Come now, I know you told me it was gonna be sad but...Danm! So whats next? Do Inu and the guys have something in their past too? I mean if the girls all had bad things happen to them to make them HB's. Than the guy must have something too right? Oh well, I can't wait for the cancert! You know I lov u. Talk to you later love...xxxx^_~ Miroku/Ricky-Boy
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Title: WHAT THE FUCK!!!!
Reviewed By: Yasha-boy On: March 06, 2006 03:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
See, I'm at the point were I'm about to FUCK y'all up! #One you don't my sister! If you don't like her work just say 'I don't like it' then be on your way. But, when go and call her a bitch I feel the need to find and whip ya ASS MOTHER FUCKER!! #2.To review is to like her story. Nobody is gonna sit there and take time to review a story they don't like when the can find one that do! Half of the people who do don't know her so. How the hell are they kissin her ass! What the fuck do you have critic2 that shows your talent? Not a damn thing mother fuck!! Ya dumb ass can't sell but got the balls to say she can't, talkin bout'raeding' what the the FUCK is that! It's reading BITCH! I tell ya what....SUCK MY DICK choke on it die mother fuck!!! Oh and have a nice day.^_^ Shar, babygirl you know damn well you're the shit & more! We family and I got your back no matter what.^_~ You just keep doing what ya doing all right, don't let these son of a bitchs get to you. Mad cuz they can't get laid it's all good. Mini, Rick, Shanny, and your big Inu-brother is here so that all that matter, on top of that you got FANS damn it! I lov ya! Yasha-boy
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Reviewed By: Yokoshima-chan (not signed in...gasp) On: March 05, 2006 23:46 CST
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*huggles everyone and their sad stories* ...Can I take a guess where you got the inspiration for Kagome's backstory? xD
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Title: Boo to critic!
Reviewed By: Shadowgirl435294 On: March 05, 2006 21:17 CST
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Don't listen to that critic! This fic rocks! I've never seen something so dramatic and sad! It had me in tears! Please please PLEEEAAASSEEEE write an update soon!!!! I want to see Kagome and Inuyasha back together!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!
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Title: plagiarism?yeah, like hell!
Reviewed By: i_kill_faeries_cause_im_evil [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2006 17:36 CST
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I'd like to say I completely sympathize with you. Unless you copied and pasted the evil person's story, it isn't plagiarism. High school fics are kinda, really popular, so I'm guessing you may have had some similarities with the other writers story, but that doesn't mean you plagiarized. It means the other person, is, an idiot.
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Title: Critic 2 a Hypocrite
Reviewed By: Shanny*Amaryllis Embers* On: March 05, 2006 17:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well ya know Critic 2 your one to talk you fucking hypocrite. First of all Shar is a great Author. Her works have origionality. They come from what she's feeling and brings it out into a story for MANY fans to enjoy. Secondly, you should REALLY check your grammer you(As Shar creativly put in her fic)grammatically challenged dolt! You SHOULDN'T even be WRITING(not righting as u so put it)your stupid critisizing review when you can't even spell for shit!!
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Title: this is bull
Reviewed By: Critic 2 On: March 05, 2006 16:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic sux, YOU people don't get it... just becuase this Shar character has reveiws doesen't mean she can right it just means that she has people that are kissing her ass and just humuoring her. Get a life people and read stuff worth raeding... Their are so many grammaticall errors and its not even THAT orijinal! I mean, come on! Youre just making a fool outta yourself by posting your work Shar! You shouldnt even be getting all these reveiws! Your shit sux ass! so just give up! In fact, this stuff has hit an all time low in my books! you say InuGrrrl is your idol, but really, youre just making HER look bad! Go find a differnt hobbie bitch... and you should really start listening to what your critics tell you! Because obveously if you have more than one critic, your work bites!
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Title: Oh MY F*ING GOD
Reviewed By: Portia(ADarkNightsObsession) On: February 26, 2006 01:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god that critic is so fucking stupid! Did they just really say that WE have no lives? Because from what i see if they are so stupid that all they do is say idiotic things about other peoples stories (and are the only ones saying them i might add) and not only that but then COME BACK to comment on other peoples reviews about them, Then they're just talking about themselves as the ones lacking lives. They don't even have the courage to log in and say these things so people can look at their horrid writing. I am sorry but i've actually been published twice and am going to be again at the end of this year, and I think your writing is wonderful, original, and witty. I laughed and cryed reading this fic, and those illiterate morons with no talent of their own who are probably hideous inside and out can go shove it where the sun don't shine...and by the way before i ever even found this story i had inugrrrl on my favorite storys list so THERE! Gah i'm done...oh and if whatever asshole wrote that comment wants to see proof...go to the nearest book store...look in the poetry section...and pick up either "Pieces of Me" or "Nothing held back" i'm 15 been published twice will be again recognize talent when i see it and if either inuugrrl or you shar shar are in California and are under 18 go to Writegirl.org...or .com...i don't remember...and join because you BOTH deserve to be published!
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Reviewed By: Portia(ADarkNightsObsession) On: February 26, 2006 00:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'M IN LOVE WITH YOU!!!!!! Please hurry? I'm not sure how much longer i can wait till I hear your sweet words of wonder again! Your writing is so wonderful! It actually made me cry a little at the sad parts...and i am soooooo not a crier. I will give you chocolates and endless love!!!!!! Update? *Puppy Dog Eyes*
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