| "Royal Namekian Blues" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Title: need an intro
Reviewed By: SSJ2VEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2007 21:06 EDT
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umm,i hope it is not too much to ask but can you like add an intro, or mini story, where you your self, talk to characters? like me and chuquita? you dont see corners that much. but corners help pull me in. so next fan fic can you add a corner please?
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: May 23, 2007 05:43 EDT
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How are Raditz and Bardock going to handle training in the Time Chamber?
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: May 10, 2007 19:23 EDT
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Does that mean that Bardock and Raditz have had their "time" in the Hyperbolic time Chamber, and what's the bet that the missing console stripped from Nappa's space pod is actually inside one of the androids - like the one who's organising the Android Games?!
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: May 06, 2007 19:36 EDT
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Has anyone told Veget and Bulma what happenede to Yamcha yet?
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: April 14, 2007 19:41 EDT
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That was cool. Can't wait to see Kinoha's reaction to her mate and son training in a room together, then again it might give them a chance to mend things between Bardock and Raditz. I wouldn't be surprised if she even asked Stellari as to why Yamcha even attacked their family in the first place. Also, I always wondered what kind of conversation Bulma would have with Trunks while she was cutting his hair in the tv show before he and Vegeta went back to the Time Chamber. But since you're rewriting the saga, I'm interested to see what you come up with.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: March 23, 2007 19:05 EDT
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It'd be interesting to see Bardock and Goku teleport in to help Raditz in the fight to save his family. If Goku is the only one Yamcha trusts, he's obviously too blind with jealous rage to see that with Stellari and Goku's help, the babies would grow up to be exceptional sayian warriors that fight with the right motive. I don't know how Yamcha could say that he could protect them any better when he was one of the weakest of the Z Warriors and never really took martial arts training that seriously.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: March 13, 2007 19:21 EDT
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So now that Yamcha's got Stellari, what's he going to do to her and will Tien try to do a similar thing with Launch?
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: February 15, 2007 18:13 EST
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Regardless if Vegeta won or lost the battle with Goku, it's clear that the younger saiyan doesn't want to see Vegeta leave the earth, especially since he had already explained that he had no intentions of ever destroying the earth or take over it or see it destroyed by human hands. So maybe what Vegeta could do is ask the other saiyans where they want to live, and have an elite squad leader that Vegeta can trust to be an overseer of the other saiyans on their new planet, and keep in contact with Vegeta via a two-way communications set up in Capsule Corp.
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Reviewed By: sarahw On: February 15, 2007 15:09 EST
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wow another great chap! cant wait for the update! super super super!!!!! surfs up!
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Reviewed By: sarahwardley x On: February 12, 2007 13:49 EST
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hiya its me sarah! thanks for the email! sorry its been so long my pc is rubbish! its working now iv managed to load windows xp back on; im hoping to get a new pc with vista on. anyways im waffling BAD! super super work the last 2 chapters have been soooo great! cant wait for the update! update soon!!!!! surfs up!
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: January 31, 2007 19:12 EST
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It's going to be interesting how Goku and Raditz' families are going to react at meeting the saiyan in-laws. It would be cool to see Goku and Raditz display their super saiyan powers in front of their parents together, and if Cell has been beaten what will replace the Cell Games, and how will the saiyans react to seeing Hercule?
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: January 29, 2007 19:49 EST
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Cool update. It will be intersting to see how many of the saiyans will want to stay on earth and blend saiyan culture to earth culture to live a new way of life without following the footsteps of Frieza. Maybe what Vegeta could do is let the other saiyans live in different areas of the planet to act as watchmen and use the hunting lodge and the secret training grounds as a base of operations to hone their saiyan instincts while adapting to a new lifstyle.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: January 16, 2007 20:12 EST
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For how long Bliss has been out of action, what's the bet she's now an android?
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: January 10, 2007 18:58 EST
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Maybe Stellari and Bulma could work together in some way while their men sniff down #21. And if Nappa's space pod was stripped of it's computer, where did it go? And are Goku and Gohan training in the Time Chamber?
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: January 09, 2007 18:16 EST
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Didn't King Kai once say that the dragon revives someone to the place where they died, and since Bardock died in space he could very well be in that revived group in space waiting for the reunion. Unlike Nappa and Raditz who died on earth. Also, didn't Goku say to Vegeta during the battle with Majin Buu that they were building a NEW saiyan race that could be just as strong and proud as the last one. And with the emergence of more saiyans they'll obviously need Vegeta to lead them and keep them in line (provided how many actually want to remain on earth) but now they can do it in a better way and with more honour.
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