| "Secrets of the Uzamaki Clan" Reviews/Comments [ 110 ] |
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 15:24 CDT
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that was AWESOME...oh ya GO NARUTO!!! THANKS:D
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Title: Forgot
Reviewed By: Dustin Imthurn dog demon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2006 17:31 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All my ratings on enjoyment will be 10 It just saves time. Alittle short chapter but still good. HEHEHE Ive been a fan fiction.net for about a month reading diffrent ones with bloodlines it took a little wile to relize wtf Beast withen was. Well keep posten and give me a hint on how long this fic is gouna be. PS MY SPELLEN SUCKS
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Reviewed By: el spazidente [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 01:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
probably the best story ive ever read.
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2006 22:36 CDT
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NOOOO the chapter was CUT off....what did the con man do, GREAT beginning can't wait to see the rest of it:D THANKS:D
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Reviewed By: Naruto_Lovr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 20:43 CDT
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Cool! Update soon!
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Title: Interesting
Reviewed By: SleepySam [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2006 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pretty interesting, although the bloodline limits you came up with are not very likely, and I'm pretty sure that families only have one bloodline ability. Also, it says in chapter 2 that he builds up chakra in his stomach and channels it through his intestines. Well, unforunately the intestines are connected from the stomach to the other exit, rather than the Uzumaki Roar it would be more like an Uzumaki Fart.
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Title: like wow
Reviewed By: Amique [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
when i read this huh it was totally hitting awsome! like the rape crap lol liked it alot
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Title: YEA!!!!
Reviewed By: Dustin Imthurn dog demon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 17:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FRIGEN AWUSUM YOUR A F***KING GENIUS!!!!!!!!!!! Your story is awusum Hinta and Naruto have always been my fav. I added your story to my favorites. This fic is so great when I was reading it in school I wanted it to last longer so I didn't have to go home to get to the story! Lemons? Sorry i'm a perv. Blood line traits Kyuubi and Naruto as a HANYO! I love this story pleeeeeeese update and I rarly ever beg. PS. Barney 600 times dark and evil:)
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Reviewed By: Shakeval [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 22:10 CDT
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heh, naruto isn't all that bad looking, so of course the girls are going to like him.
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 17:25 CDT
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SWEET chapter...hehehe...Tsunade didn't know Naruto's mind reading trick??? well, I really liked this cahpter..it was GREAT but YIKES...Poor Chuunins...hehhe
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Reviewed By: meister_gaara [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I throughouly enjoyed the fic, it was fairly interesting. I am a little skeptical about Naruto being able to kill Oroichimaru, but that could just be me. I hope that when it actually does happen, Sasuke actually gets to deliver the final blow. I was a litte suprised about the amount of new techniques that Naruto was able to employ, they were quite interesting, and some of them actually kind of made sense. I do actually believe Yondaime is Naruto's father, so I look forward to the show actually saying if he is one or another. Now I do wish you would pay a litte more attention to speeling and grammar, the story itself is great, but the spelling and grammar just kind of gets to me. I am sad to see the story is over though, do you plan to write anything else by any chance?
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 21:56 CDT
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oh man, poor Naruto even when he does something good he gets beaten up...I liked the beginning w/the ANBU... GREAT CHAPTER...THANKS:D
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 23:08 CDT
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Orochimaru is dead and Naruto's cherry is saved! To this part...hehehehe...Oh man! Yay! Please read and review, flamers will be burnt, eaten, spit out and then eaten again. To this part just EWWW!!! to the spit and eaten again bit GREAT CHApERT...about Bloody time that oro is taken down...oh yea THANKS:D
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Reviewed By: Shakeval [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 20:09 CDT
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heh,definately going to be picklish if AnBU guards see naruto being carried by a giant fox, that will really cause some problems.
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Title: chapter 3
Reviewed By: firecaster-hikaru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 20:03 CDT
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your story is interesting. however, you need it fix this chapter. its been cut in half and i have no idea what naruto was going to do to the foxes. so can you please fix this problem? i would really appreciate it.
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