| "Secrets of the Uzamaki Clan" Reviews/Comments [ 110 ] |
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Title: Opinion
Reviewed By: A_bigfoot37 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 00:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sasuke/Sakura, the only female I've seen that Sasuke can stand. I figure he finds her annoying because he likes her. And separate your lines out more otherwise people may end up reading the same line over and over again(I've done it before). Anyway, update.
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Reviewed By: Mysic_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 04:56 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like your story. I hope that you update soon..
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Edward_Elric [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 17:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this is a great fic keep it up... as for someone to "seal-atise" I'd recommend Sakura..idk mabey she could see how badly she was treating naruto over the years and how trying to rape him would be a bad idea...mabey the seal could help her get over narutos bloodline... just an idea anyways ( I just like NaruxSaku fics and there arent nearly enough of them)Like i said keep up the good work ^_^
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Title: Wow!!
Reviewed By: akasuki088 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am soooo like a NaruxHina fan. It's sooo good!
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Reviewed By: naota_ [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 17:15 CST
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very nice, you've still got the writers touch, and a place on my favorites list, the telepathy power is pretty original, keep it up, saianara for Nao.
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 22:08 CST
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Should be he so yea yea I'm under age but I'm challenging people to drinking contests...LOL...that was GREAT...I LOVE GAARA:D THanks:D
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Reviewed By: Red Kitsune Flames [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2005 18:43 CST
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Excellent chapter, I enjoyed it, especially Naruto's little rant.
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 14:16 CST
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Oh my...heheheh...that was AWESOME...but boy oh boy would have hated to see what happened to Naruto if Gaara hadn\'t been there....LMAO:D THANKS:D
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2005 09:26 CST
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OH no your kidding right...Poor GUYS!!! hehehehe:D THANKS:D Mr. Stck Up His Ass...hehehe...yea I liked that one...THANKS:D I like Naruto teaching:D
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Title: oooohhhhh....
Reviewed By: naota_ [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 10:33 CST
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what dream no jutsu!!!??, thats insane!, yet wholly amusing, the perfect combo! and once again I'm sorry for not reviewing last chapter, and I'm honored you care about my opinion, so keep up the great work, saianora for Nao!
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Reviewed By: Sesshy81 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 10:18 CST
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Evil EVIL EVIL!!!!!!!! How could you do that to poor Naruto after all you've already put him through!??!And those poor kids....
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2005 21:31 CST
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another AWESOME chapter...hehehe....I liked Naruto going all foxy heck I don't know why I was thinking of a red haired Youko Kurama...oh yea baby doll...hehehe...sorry, it's not that I don't LIKE Sasuke it's just that I don't LIKE him...wellm then maybe I don't like him most of the time but if you keep writing him like this then it wouldn't be so bad:D THANKS:D
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Title: California_dreamers
Reviewed By: California_dreamers [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2005 16:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it at fist i thought it was going to be dumb and kinda stupid but i was wrong this is good and i like it keep going
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2005 21:15 CST
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oh man...Orochimaru is an ASS!!! and what's up w/the stick up hanabi's butt??? GREAT chapter:D
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Reviewed By: naota_ [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2005 06:50 CST
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Nao here, you really are doing good with this fic, and as for transition Ideas, how about telling how he learns to use the fox gloves?, I mean with those he wont need to use Kyuubi-sama as much (I have respect for the fur ball and so forth call him 'sama' do not dislike me for respecting a demon as alot of people have) I can think of a few instantses that they could used in comedy, or action. syanara for Nao!(get it? lol)
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