| "Secrets of the Uzamaki Clan" Reviews/Comments [ 110 ] |
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Reviewed By: meister_gaara [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 20:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I throughouly enjoyed the fic, it was fairly interesting. I am a little skeptical about Naruto being able to kill Oroichimaru, but that could just be me. I hope that when it actually does happen, Sasuke actually gets to deliver the final blow. I was a litte suprised about the amount of new techniques that Naruto was able to employ, they were quite interesting, and some of them actually kind of made sense. I do actually believe Yondaime is Naruto's father, so I look forward to the show actually saying if he is one or another. Now I do wish you would pay a litte more attention to speeling and grammar, the story itself is great, but the spelling and grammar just kind of gets to me. I am sad to see the story is over though, do you plan to write anything else by any chance?
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2006 21:56 CDT
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oh man, poor Naruto even when he does something good he gets beaten up...I liked the beginning w/the ANBU... GREAT CHAPTER...THANKS:D
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 23:08 CDT
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Orochimaru is dead and Naruto's cherry is saved! To this part...hehehehe...Oh man! Yay! Please read and review, flamers will be burnt, eaten, spit out and then eaten again. To this part just EWWW!!! to the spit and eaten again bit GREAT CHApERT...about Bloody time that oro is taken down...oh yea THANKS:D
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Reviewed By: Shakeval [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 20:09 CDT
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heh,definately going to be picklish if AnBU guards see naruto being carried by a giant fox, that will really cause some problems.
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Title: chapter 3
Reviewed By: firecaster-hikaru [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 20:03 CDT
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your story is interesting. however, you need it fix this chapter. its been cut in half and i have no idea what naruto was going to do to the foxes. so can you please fix this problem? i would really appreciate it.
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Reviewed By: Shakeval [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 02:17 CDT
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man, some people just take the whole thing way too seriously i mean come on they tried to beat the shite out'a him for his choice of clothing, sheesh thats harsh. well i'm sure the ANBU would have felt the Chakra dicharge a long time ago and because of the high alert that the village has been on i'd think they would be about ready to show up. especially as naruto is close to the hokage tower.
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2006 22:01 CDT
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A hell, why WHY did you end it like that....DAMN it...GRRR!!! Great chapter...THANKS:D
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Reviewed By: Shakeval [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2006 02:27 CDT
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heh, was kinda hoping for the fight to go on a little longer, oh well good things never last. well great story, interesting that hinata was able to throw around her sister like a rag doll. even more interesting the all it took was the eyes of the yondaime to gain haishi's approval.
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Title: Nice Story
Reviewed By: XoreandoX [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 21:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice man i mean it i've been reading for a while now but havent reviewed be4 so yea any how update soon this is gettin good and i was wonderin do u write lemons cuz this story could have many lemons based on plots
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Reviewed By: kage_the_shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2006 16:11 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the greatist fanfic that I have read in a long time,GREAT JOB MAN!!
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2006 21:32 CDT
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that was AWESOME...I LOVED this cahpter...oh man, hehehe...Hisashi was taken down by a gennin,,,or is he chunnin right here....who cares...in your face...yea...LOL...THANKS:D
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Reviewed By: dskwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2006 13:04 CST
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Reviewed By: Shakeval [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2006 01:46 CST
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well hinata and naruto have finally had a honest to kami date. and hinata even got a good fight in before. but what will happen now that naruto and hinata are together, will naruto have more or less trouble with the girls?
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2006 23:44 CST
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so cute so VERY VERY CUTE!!! really liked this cahtper...but YIKES...the girls are SCARY!!!
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Reviewed By: Shakeval [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2006 05:00 CST
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heh, poor hinata, is she ready for the life and death adventure that is undertaken every time naruto attempts to purchase ramen? and wonder how naruto will get there unnoticed this time? well great work, hope for more soon.
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