| "Secrets of the Uzamaki Clan" Reviews/Comments [ 110 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shakeval [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 00:26 CST
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ahh poor naruto he just got back and already the hoard approaches him. well wonder what is going to happen to him now. will konohamaru's teacher come after him for poluting konohamaru's mind with those terrible jutsus? will hanabi's father come after naruto because he doesn't like his daughter being taught by the 'fox'? well hope for more stuff soon. and hope some good comes out of narutos teaching.
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2006 22:26 CST
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LMAO...Poor Naruto...hehehe...oh man, everyone is out to get him...for different reasons...wonder who He likes:D THANKS:D
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Reviewed By: Shakeval [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2006 03:56 CST
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heh, poor naruto, no more jumpsuit. oh well the new look suites him. its his transition from youth to adulthood and with that change he himself must change, now if only he could get himself a trenchcoat with flames at the bottom like what the yodaime wore. that might draw a few stares from those who remembered the yodaime. well it will be interesting to see what other strange or dangerous training methods naruto and sasuke put the genins through. And more importantly how hanabi's father and konohamaru's personal tutor reacts to naruto training the group. Well hope for more soon.
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Reviewed By: Shakeval [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2006 00:33 CST
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pointless, yes. Funny, yes. torture for naruto, very much so lol a great chapter and hopefully you will bring out a slightly longer chapter next time but this was funny and thats what counts.
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2006 00:26 CST
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that was AWESOME..>NEJI is EVIL!!! hehehe...the least he could have done was SAVE him after all its his FAULT that Naruto was out there again:D THANKS:D
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Reviewed By: Shakeval [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2006 05:38 CST
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wow, great stuff. haven't seen a story like this before. poor naruto has to go around the land in a long journey, but he gets to train three up in coming genins with his training routines. what about the tails will he get more every time he transforms? wonder if naruto can set the three little'ns up with some summons? well great story hope to hear more soon.
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2006 22:41 CST
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that was AWESOME...I LOVED this chapter...really really AWESOME...oh man, wonder what Jiraiya\'s reaction to that piece of news is gonna be...THANKS:D Can\'t wait to find out more about his mom....
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 10:20 CST
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Cute chapter but what of Sasuke?!? They just left him but at least he didn't draw anyone's blood but then again we don't know what happened to the mail man..LOL...THANKS:D
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Title: hinata fan
Reviewed By: hinata kicks ass [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 01:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha:) nice. i see ur gona(i think) make hinata and naruto go out:D w00t lol(crazed naruhina fan). OOO dragons WHERE!?!?!?!?!? i wana be food lol(im insane too). oo i say naruto and hinata should go out:). keep wrighting i like that starty:D
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Reviewed By: mysterylady_tx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2006 03:10 CST
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another Great chapter...at least he doesn;'t have to worry about Temari...LOL...THANKS:D
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Title: Opinion
Reviewed By: A_bigfoot37 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2006 00:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sasuke/Sakura, the only female I've seen that Sasuke can stand. I figure he finds her annoying because he likes her. And separate your lines out more otherwise people may end up reading the same line over and over again(I've done it before). Anyway, update.
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Reviewed By: Mysic_Rose [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2005 04:56 CST
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I really like your story. I hope that you update soon..
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Edward_Elric [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 17:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this is a great fic keep it up... as for someone to "seal-atise" I'd recommend Sakura..idk mabey she could see how badly she was treating naruto over the years and how trying to rape him would be a bad idea...mabey the seal could help her get over narutos bloodline... just an idea anyways ( I just like NaruxSaku fics and there arent nearly enough of them)Like i said keep up the good work ^_^
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Title: Wow!!
Reviewed By: akasuki088 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am soooo like a NaruxHina fan. It's sooo good!
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Reviewed By: naota_ [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 17:15 CST
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very nice, you've still got the writers touch, and a place on my favorites list, the telepathy power is pretty original, keep it up, saianara for Nao.
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