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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2006 02:07 EDT
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Nice, I'm glad Takeru met his dad first, your set-up was perfect. Don't worry about the chapter being short cause suspense is what keeps us coming back for more. Kagome's heart proberly did a flip-flop when Takeru said he saw his Pappa. I think father and son should develop a relationship first before Kagome comes in the picture, it would be sweet to read how they'll interact with each other. Did I tell you I love this story? (smile) Looking forward to the next installment, Smooches.
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Reviewed By: chanda *nsi* On: September 29, 2006 02:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh boy, what a cliffy. I can't wait until your next update. Chanda
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Title: Great Story!
Reviewed By: QuantumTheory [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2006 01:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You meanie! Cutting it off like that! But really though, great story when's the next chapter?
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Title: hey
Reviewed By: i love kouga [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2006 01:29 EDT
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I LOVE YOUR STORY SO MUCH. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK.
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Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2006 01:22 EDT
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OMFG NO WAY YOU DIDN'T JUST LEAVE THAT THERE!!!!!! NOOOOOO!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON this story is UBER awesome and I really like it, and I LOVE reading it, so please please please update soon!!
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Title: NekoReiBaka
Reviewed By: NekoReiBaka [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2006 01:20 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have nooo idea how happy I am! It's so exciting! I can't wait for the next chapter! I can only hope that it's going to be great! Woot. You seriously just cheered me up. I was having a bad day, and now i'm very pleased! Thank you. Adorbale. I love this story. And forget appologizing for the shortness, atleast your writing. Kk, well, goodnight! -Rei
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Title: Danny Girl
Reviewed By: badgirl093 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2006 00:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOHOO!! that's my boy, now the ball is in Kagome's court so to speak please please let her follow Takeru to see Inuyasha at lease her remembers her name.I can't wait till the next chapter Again I just love Takeru
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Reviewed By: mindfreak [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2006 19:48 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pouts...update really soon...please
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Title: Chapters 1-14
Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2006 18:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Takeru is adorable!! I just had to say that first. Protecting his Mommy so well. He really is like Inuyasha and you'd expect him to be clinging to Kagome like he does. ^^ He;s just SO cute!!! hehe Anyways, I was hoping you'd bring Inuyasha back a little sooner since he was found on the beach and has been hospitalized. I know he's in a coma but after that short bit a long time ago we haven't heard about him in the story for like seven years!! What happened after he was thrashing around yelling for Kagome?? People in comas don't usually thrash around yelling people's names. :P hehe. I hope he comes back soon since he's missing out on Takeru's life, not to mention Kagome's! :( Your style is good but could benefit from longer chapters with more detail being used in how you describe things, people, and places. The plot is good too and you did a wonderful job with the characterization. Very original too, one of many things that are original in your fic is Hojo being evil. I chose that in particular since you don't see many fics where he is outright nasty or where he'd insult a child and his mother. Overall I hope you contineu writing this fic and I'm glad that your family issues you were having were resolved and that things are looking up! Keep your head held high and I hope to read more chapters in the future!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2006 20:01 EDT
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I love this story, please update soon. Please!!
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 03:28 EDT
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Okay, please tell me that Rin and Sess HAVE NOT been celibate for seven years cause ain't that much understanding in the world. I think it's very noble of Sesshy to take care of his brother's semi-widow and child it shows his heart isn't all icy after all. What's up with Inu, he didn't seem like he had amnesia when he woke up calling for Kagome, so where is he? This story is Hot, so update soon pllleeeeeaaaassseee.
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Reviewed By: inuyoukai24 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 19:13 EDT
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w00t! Let's go let's go!! parrtayyyy!!!
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Title: NekoReiBaka-Not Sgined In
Reviewed By: NekoReiBaka [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 00:54 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd leave you a longer review, but i'm not supposed to be on the compie. Call me rebellious. Anywho. It was a great chappie and I love how you made Kagome do the tie thing at the end, as most people always do something with an object to keep them busy while in wait. I also love the way her son is taking on more traits of Inuyasha. The secne with Rin was great, though I would like a lil more detail on how they're connected... a tad bit confused with that. Oh and I love how Kag's son (can't spell his name) is also taking on a more mature additude and protecting his Mom as Inu would, like he knows that she needs him... anyways, great as always! Gotta go! -NekoReiBaka
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 20:53 EDT
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just read the whole story haha backwards and it's great! hope a new update comes sooner than later of course. man that one chapter made me tear up, but glad kagome has backup even if it comes in the form of a tall stoic older half brother. inuyasha is coming back right?
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Reviewed By: mindfreak [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 20:03 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon. :)
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