| "You Belong To Me" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: IC On: October 11, 2006 16:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
It waent any sex but it was good
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Reviewed By: DarkAngelB [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2006 22:31 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOO! The bastard left him to die... I mean I know he thinks he can never have him... But he should try... DAMN No sex even... I am so depressed... Haha So... If you plan on making another chapter I will definitely read it, if you ever decide to post another chapter email me: vegetasbabygurl@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: Anime_Lver101 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2006 21:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was okay i have read better but i think it was pretty good. I think you should try writing some more but try and capture more of the love between the two characters.
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Reviewed By: cyzay [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2005 04:05 CST
Comment/Review:
I don't think it was crappy at all. Itachi's protrayal was spot on and very well done. That "possession" motive, and the bloodlust, was a great part of it all. I can see a follow-up to this episode, if you ever decided to do one. With the whole "but I can't have you - that's left open-ended - it doesnt need to have a second part to it but, its something you could employ if you wanted to.
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Reviewed By: YinYang [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2005 12:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's so cool, I hope there will be a second chapter. Even you said its a One-Shot doesn't it has to stay that way. I think it will be much better if it continued on. If it does please don't make it a Kakashi/Iruka paring. I hate those.
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Reviewed By: Feaandune On: November 12, 2005 01:12 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Itachi left? After all that he left? Please say there's a second chapter. I liked this fic. It's not often Kakashi gets beat up, usually its Naruto or Iruka.
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Reviewed By: chezlesea (nsi) On: November 05, 2005 19:56 CST
Comment/Review:
... I am so lost... but what I got was well-written!
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